Shota Little Monster

How old were you when you traveled through time? It feels like the little flower demon directly obtains the memory of a time traveler instead of becoming a time traveler. Now it seems that there is a kind of little demon who is a little demon. The memory of time travel has been providing information, but the little demon doesn't care. If you don't regard it as a time traveler, but just a new little demon, it's actually okay.

But for this book, if the protagonist is a time traveler, it should be a failure for the book. It makes me feel a little disgusted that teenagers pretend to be children.

As of now writing, I have found many problems, whether it is setting, characters, or plot. Also, it feels like you have written a female video out of nowhere? Before, I naively thought that as long as the main character was a male, it was a male video, but now it seems that I am really wrong. But no matter what, I will try my best to finish it, just to accumulate writing experience.

The protagonist has no ability to protect himself, the environment has no sense of security, the protagonist has no enterprising spirit, and has no strength to improve. The author also likes to abuse the male protagonist to promote the plot. This method of female channels is completely poisonous in male channels.

How old is the author? The plot is so childish, from the title to the content, it's so outrageous that I can't imagine this is a male video. There is no plot at all in the writing. What about the dilemma at the beginning and Goldfinger? What about the character development of the protagonist as a man? Before writing, I suggest you read The Taoist Priest, who wields his sword at night and becomes immortal by slaying demons and demons. Let's write something like this again.

Go post a girl's video, none of the first three chapters are interesting. Not even relieved at all, screening readers. Two years ago, there was someone who wrote red lou exactly like you.

Sent to the wrong place? Female channel

Chapter 35, the protagonist's strength is not improved at all. We can no longer call it female pornographic writing, we have to call it romance writing.

It's okay for a time traveler to pretend to be cute in order to survive. The problem is that it would be a bit disgusting if the time traveler actually transformed into a child through time travel.

The male channels are bleeding like rivers. They will all die if they even dare to think about the souls of other worlds. It's a pity that the female channels are gone!

Is this a male video book? Big girl

Why are there so many female channel authors and male channels are here? 😰 What happened to the female channel? 🤔

How can I put it this way? You definitely can't read this kind of novel with your brain. The first thing is to set up the identity of the male protagonist as a time traveler and know the plot, but to describe the male protagonist's heart and to pretend to be cute in order to survive. I think it's okay. But it's very abrupt to write the male protagonist so cute for no reason. After all, it's not like the male protagonist who traveled to the world of a female channel and swapped the identities of men and women. Otherwise, it's fine

I really can't stand this style of writing. I'm going to say goodbye.

After going through the Demon Emperor and now reaching the Dragon Mother, haven't you awakened yet? Looks cute, but in the end it's just a plaything! Once interests are involved, even if it is just suspicion, there is no evidence. You are going to die! This is the sorrow of being a weak person. Living in this world, is the best of times and the worst of times. The strong are respected and the weak are eliminated. Can you escape death by saying "mother" or "sister"? All it takes is a little gossip and there is no peace between you. That's it, you haven't realized it yet. Are you destined to be played and abandoned? Be killed

It took a month to finally write this? You want to say that the little 🐴 pulls the big cart, but you don't want to pull it either. You also specifically described a scene where the Dragon Mother rests on the Dragon King's arms like a woman. Why don't you just pull a big cart, torture the protagonist like this, and then write this?

Has the protagonist become mentally retarded? Or is there a hidden agenda?

Why are all the female authors going to male channels? I feel so embarrassed watching them.

After reading the introduction, I wanted to post you.

Broken! Wandering into a female channel by mistake, my heart is broken

Congratulations on putting it on the shelves, but the quality has dropped a bit.

I feel like the author is a woman. After reading a few chapters of this novel, I feel that the male protagonist is acting entirely according to female thinking. A male author would not write like this.

The author writes well

That's amazing... You will succeed in anything you do if you have such determination and perseverance...

It's been great to hold on until now

You are really an embarrassment to the demon of desire outside the world.

I hate the heroine so much. When the hero was bought, he only helped count money. The supporting characters were not developed at all. The hero has suffered for two lifetimes and has no blessings. He is not even angry with the heroine. What about the pregnant woman who chases her husband at the crematorium? The author has an enemy named Su Ling? It's so uncomfortable that I won't watch it anymore.