I Evolved into a Prehistoric World in Another World

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Do you really not want to change your profile? I have read this book at least four times, but I didn't pay much attention to it. How about referring to the introduction of the behind-the-scenes flow, at least attracting some people to catch up with the reading.

I suggest changing the introduction. In addition, don't be too careful about the role of the tool man Xu Changan. Just talk about his situation directly. I don't have the mood to watch his plot at all. The tool man is a tool man. Don't take up space. It is better to give the space to the protagonist and the players.

It feels like the traditional prehistoric novels, where calamities are measured one after another, except for the addition of an artificial time traveler. The whole prehistoric era is lifeless and has no vitality. You can read the entire novel at a glance.

Forcibly suppressing intelligence, technology has developed to such an extent that even the source of fire is not clear, and how to obtain it? ? ? How funny. Don't talk about the epoch of civilization, or talk about how humans in this era are all useless creatures raised in captivity by their mothers, or talk about how the upper class are all fools. Is the author talking about the rules of the world? ? ? We are all cyberpunks, we still live in a small house, how can we be citizens? Let's be bold, they are all consumables. If you have a brain, you can have emotions. Why can't machines have emotions? Will the mental quality of cyberpunk players be that of the players I am writing about now? Are you always funny, angry, and out of character? ? ? Don't you think it's embarrassing and unorganized to write about the thinking of people or players in the cyberpunk era countless years later using the Internet of this era and the thinking of gamer keyboard warriors? Written that in the new era, people can enter various fantasy worlds and do whatever they want, and then their mental state can always maintain the pursuit of freshness and excitement. When they meet your prehistoric times, they will directly indulge in it and rely on the so-called cultivation of immortals to whet their appetites without ever appearing in this world? The common nature of human beings is to admire the strong and bully the weak. If you cultivate immortality, you can live forever. Systems in other worlds can do the same. In order to show that you are very strong and attractive in ancient times, you must force your wisdom. . . To sum up, writing a prehistoric cyberpunk article is neither fish nor fowl.

I read from other readers that the plot of the protagonist is not as good as the other protagonist, and I don't really like the multi-protagonist setting. . . The sense of substitution is very strange, schizophrenic? 😐😐😐

All readers and the author have read the comments, and here are my responses to your questions. First of all, it's about the introduction. It's not that the author doesn't modify it, but it has limitations. It can only be modified once every seven days. The current introduction is already in its fourth edition. To be honest, when I first uploaded the book, I didn't think much about it. I just randomly made an introduction and filled it in. As a result, I received negative reviews. The second thing is about the work tags. This thing can only be changed once a month. It has been revised just now, and tags such as behind-the-scenes and group portraits have been added. The author Jun did not add the tags of creation and behind-the-scenes before, mainly because the focus of what he wanted to write was different. The author Jun originally wanted to write about a group of time-travelers fighting on the chessboard of the ancient world. In other words, the time traveler is emphasized rather than the player, which is why Xu Changan's role in the early stage is so important. In the future, the roles of Xu Changan and others will be shortened, or they will be written together with players to try to maintain a balance. Then let's discuss the controversial Xu Changan. Here, the author would like to clarify one thing. The title of the first female fairy is a joke, and does not mean that he is the first female fairy. Because Xu Changan held the Huang Zhongli, refined the Western Plain Cloud Realm Flag, and built the dojo in West Kunlun, he was ridiculed as the head of the female immortals, replacing the Queen Mother of the West. Everyone can find out from the path Xu Changan takes that he is not taking the path of leading the prehistoric female immortals. As the protagonist in the early stage, he practiced the Five Elements Avenue and followed the path of the five internal organs and the five elements. That is to say, he collected the ten innate spiritual roots and refined the elements in them. There is also a branch route, which is to collect the Five Elements Spirit Orbs and piece together the body of Yongzhu. The author's original intention was to use him to go through the great powers of the ancient times and explain some settings. It can also be regarded as a familiar sight to the players in the mother body and readers, so that future plots involving them will not be too abrupt. Now it seems that Xu Changan has not stood up? This may be related to the author's occasional watering... The author's bacteria has a general idea about this book, and he has always followed the main line he wanted to write, but occasionally, sometimes he deviates slightly, just like urine bifurcation, which cannot be determined by humans. emm, this is hard to comment... Finally, the author wishes readers a Happy New Year, and would like to thank you all for your votes, and shamelessly ask for a follow-up reading!

Pangu's creation of Chaos can be achieved by killing three thousand demon gods to collect developer permissions, and three thousand demon gods generally refer to the fact that the endless chaos demon gods are all part of the Tao, and each deduces its own Tao while competing with other demon gods. Chaos itself can serve as a version of the game. The strange shapes and shapes of the demons above are the result of attracting players. The feature of the chaotic version is the endless battle between demons with infinite life spans. These demons can set their realms in this way. The new demon gods born from chaos induction are born with infinite lifespan. Assuming the waterway it controls, then it will be through the evolution of the waterway. To compete with other demon gods, the way to transform water is to open up the path of chaotic evolution. The amount of accumulated water will increase its power. The second step is to evolve the changes of water, such as melting ice, vaporizing, light-changing flame, and linking water with other paths to compete for the authority of other paths. The third step is to evolve ten thousand paths to establish water. The world, everything in the world is composed of water and evolves from water. At this time, the creatures in the water world can be sent to compete with other demon gods to learn. The fourth step is to seize the path because the only end point of the path is the developer mode. In this step, the demon god will undergo the transformation of the demon god of water devouring the demon god of fire. With changes like the Water and Fire Demon God, related avenues such as the Five Elements and Yin and Yang begin to be fought over. There may be countless water demon gods or Five Elements Demon Gods at the same time, but in the step of seizing the path, players can kill other demon gods to monopolize the avenue, and the demon gods that are killed will either become the winner of the world. The creatures inside work hard or quit the game. Of course, if there are other demon gods who are willing to accept them and the demon god who killed them is willing to let them go, it is okay. Anyway, the authority has been taken away. The fifth step is to be a developer, but the protagonist will not open this realm. All demon gods can only be infinitely close but cannot When we reach this state, when there is only one demon god left on all the avenues and there are no other minor demon gods, and no one can do anything about the demon gods that still exist, and the other demon gods can't at least kill them, it's time for the protagonist to open a new version. The birth of Pangu directly kills all the demon gods to open up the prehistoric era. Then drive them to the prehistoric world, and then the creatures of the prehistoric world will reincarnate one catastrophe after another [version after version]. In the reincarnation, their lifespans will become shorter and shorter, and their magical powers will become smaller and smaller until they become ordinary people. In the version, the realm in the prehistoric world can be introduced for them to practice. The demon gods, the inferior developers of Chaos who had no concept of life, death or time and space, were chopped off and dropped into the wilderness to start over from scratch. Since then, there has been a separation of life and death. The innate beings and innate demons in the prehistoric era who had no concept of lifespan [innate means living with the heaven and earth, and most of the life in this era are nurtured by heaven and earth] were more and more stubborn. When the prehistoric era was squeezed out, they were cut with a knife. From then on, there was a saying that life spans existed in the world. Those Goudao players had to practice in order to survive. Even if they have great magical powers, they have to become immortals to have immortality even though their lifespan is longer than others. In the prehistoric and postnatal era, all living beings are vying for the path to immortality. One by one, powerful practitioners have established many forces in order to seize resources and attain enlightenment. After they fight hard, the prehistoric changes have cut them off. Three catastrophes of heaven, earth and man have begun to appear in the world. The theory of cause and effect overcoming catastrophes will become popular in the world. There are catastrophes in mortals who have longevity and become immortals. If it is not proved, the golden immortal will eventually have the risk of the five heavens and humans declining or dying in the catastrophe. In the prehistoric and secular era, immortals secluded themselves from the world and practiced in seclusion, or took shelter from big forces and relied on magic methods or materials to extend their lives. Some lucky people found blessed places or caves to avoid disasters. There were exotic flowers and herbs to extend their lives, and magical methods to become immortals. Only legends and vague miracles were left in the world. At this time, the selling point of the game became super large In a simulated world, countless players guide the changes of the times and make dynasties easier. In the world of mortals, all emotions and desires are fulfilled. Some lucky people become immortals or martial arts dynasties raise armies to conquer the world. Endless history books begin to be written. The world is big enough for players to manage without compromising. The protagonist gains financial freedom and changes his situation in reality by becoming famous in the game. Do you think this is over? No, next, if the protagonist sets up a company in reality and makes it bigger and stronger, how will the company be run? Acquiring other people's small worlds is related to the prehistoric world so that the players in it can travel through the sage. Not 996 or 998, as long as they cultivate into golden immortals in the prehistoric world, they can travel around the world, and even participate in the planning and management of other small worlds, directly from the player's cultivation He has become a game manager and even participated in the development of the game. This gimmick is so good and popular. It must be popular. The protagonist's company will become bigger and stronger. It is not easy for high-level players in prehistoric games to build the main god space, nightmare space or reincarnation paradise. The interest of the game has increased. This wave has not immediately made a fortune. Countless small world games are vying to cooperate with the protagonist or want to sell the game to the protagonist. Next, the protagonist starts to wholesale gold fingers. Do you want to dominate the world in the game? You have enough luck halo, portable space, photographic memory, rebirth from nine deaths, Inception... You can draw the 998 gold fingers at your choice, classic blindness You can choose the box and the big turntable by yourself. Super members can designate a gold finger to build it once. [Look at us living so hard, it's probably because we haven't recharged the money.] The protagonist wholesales gold fingers. The gods in the prehistoric game can also make gold fingers. After all, there is a way to cultivate immortals. Magical powers, but the cheats they created are illegal. If you want to sell them, you have to pay taxes to the protagonist, or the players who use them will have their accounts deleted after being discovered. The developers of the cheats will directly beat them into mortals or kill them, otherwise they will become the protagonist's free hand. Integrating it into the game and giving the protagonist a job to collect taxes and do tasks, this way the economic system of the prehistoric game will be revitalized. Players in it can not only enjoy the happiness of 996, but also choose the sour taste of Linglingqi, and the working players and ordinary players will go their separate ways. I won't write down the development of the protagonist's enjoyment in reality and how he used technology to travel back and discover that immortality really exists. I will make up my own brain or find an author to write it.

It's inexplicable and strange to watch. It seems that the author wants to combine prehistoric times, creation, games, and live broadcasts. It's just a hodgepodge that misses the point.

If it's a single protagonist, I'll read it, but if it's multiple protagonists, forget it. After reading a few group portraits and multi-protagonist novels, I don't want to read them anymore. If it's like anime, you can read it.

But I don't know if it's my misunderstanding, or maybe I've read too much of Prehistoric. This is a player in Prehistoric. They have a little bit of both, and are written around the main line of Prehistoric. There is no intention. The main structure is okay, but the background of Prehistoric is from the beginning. The story is written in a big way, but the plot is written poorly and lacks a little novelty.

Trading small things for big things, this introduction alone makes it clear that the author has no idea what the so-called big things are Take Fengshen Yanyi as an example. The big thing in Fengshen Yanyi is that heaven needs someone to serve, but the immortals don't want to go, so some of the thorn-headed immortals will be beaten to death around the mountain, and their souls will be listed on the list to fill those positions. This is the major event in Fengshen Yanyi. No matter what the final result is, someone must fill the place on the God List. This is a big deal. In the big matter of conferring a god, the small matter is which province it is assigned to and whose soul is used to fill it.

Do you dare to be more imaginative? Hongjun and Luo Hou join together, one Tao ancestor and one demon ancestor. Then the world of heaven is upgraded, and eighteen saints are directly drawn out, 6 each of Tao and demons, and the remaining 6 are reserved for those who are destined.

{"NickName":"Book Friends 20230810210425679","UserId":424752432}What is going on with Xu Changan, the leading female fairy? Is it really necessary to make this character extremely poisonous?

I don't want to see the ancestral dragon born in the immortal volcano. The second-in-command of the Phoenix is ​​pretending to be a grandson in front of his house😅. In Chinese mythology, great power is attributed to the body. You have never fought against the ancestral dragon! Why should you be inferior to others? You may not be able to defeat the Zulong, but at least you have the confidence to avoid being killed because of your strength. What's more, our group may save your life right at your doorstep. Forcibly pretending to be Zulong and letting Jinxian be a villain, it's petty and arrogant

The beginning of traditional prehistoric novels can be seen at a glance, followed by calamity after calamity because the protagonist needs what they provide. Next, I finished writing, and then Eunuch. There is nothing new about it. Next is Long Han, Dao Demon, Lich, Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors, Fengshen, Journey to the West, etc. Let's write it down slowly. If it doesn't work, I will copy other people's works.

This start is ridiculous, and the protagonist has no golden finger. It just relied on modern technology to evolve, and the author didn't explain how the protagonist got whatever abilities he wanted, he just put them on the protagonist's head. Don't ask, just ask because the protagonist should have it!

It's been a long time since I discovered this book, but I didn't want to read it after reading the introduction and the first chapter. The logic of the book doesn't make sense. All of these people can open up the world. Why are most of the people in this world still low-class? Not enough resources? If all one world is used for food production, it will be enough for the people in this world to eat and drink every day for free. What's more, there is more than one world here. Isn't it possible that the government can't dedicate a few worlds to produce daily necessities? In such a powerful world, it is easy to develop an artificial intelligence, right? Using robots to produce goods in both worlds is enough for tens of billions of people to digest without doing anything every day. Why are there so many low-level untouchables? ?

Starting from Zixiao's sermon, it was written down that Nuwa created humans, and the humans she created turned out to be game descendants. The three ancestors of the human race, the Human Emperor, should all be primitive human races. They survived from the ignorant and harsh environment, and overcame thorns for future generations, instead of being descended from the game one by one. This will give a more sense of substitution. The three ancestors, sages, and the Human Emperor are descendants of the game. What does it mean? In the Romance of Ancient Times, the original characters of Ancient Times are the protagonists, not those who descend into the game. Myths, legends and sages are used to replace the beliefs of the real world, instead of players replacing the mythical characters of Ancient Times, so the sense of substitution is poor.

The inspiration of this book is, in my opinion, very transformative. After watching it, I sometimes think about it too. If human beings continue to develop like this, what will be the outcome? I didn't think that far ahead at first, I just guessed that first, a giant company would appear in the human world, integrating the capital of the entire human material world. Then, under the unified leadership of civilization, the development of cutting-edge science and technology must be leapfrog, just like the Soviet Union. However, it can be met. In a unified human world, if the upper class lacks enemies and has no sense of crisis, then the middle and lower class people will gradually live in hell. Exactly what kind of hell it is, according to this book. That is the so-called matrix. Treat middle- and lower-class humans as consumables that can be consumed without restraint. In that era, human rights did not exist. The only value of human life was to provide the unique thinking that belongs to the human soul. And these thoughts are the only ladder to the progress of civilization. Yes, civilization progress has never been achieved by machines. Machines can only reuse ideas proposed by humans as tools; they cannot create new concepts and theories. Only the human brain can create everything. So the only function of human life is to provide the brain to think and innovate. The matrix is ​​the product of integrating all the resources of the human world. This time. For individual human beings, the extent to which the human world has developed has nothing to do with them. Because it doesn't matter whether humans have walked out of the solar system and opened up the endless sea of ​​stars, or they are huddled in place. It has nothing to do with individuals. People are just consumables, things that provide brains for the collective civilization. Instead of a free life. People live in the virtual world of the mother body. They seem to have everything, but in fact they have nothing. Nothing in this world belongs to you. Even your own genetic material and the brain you are using may have been created by your mother and do not belong to you. Even while alive, the pure meaning of some brains is to stay in the tank and think for the mother body. People have no meaning other than providing people with their ideas. The world does not belong to people. In the real world, this trend already exists. In various countries around the world, there are also various so-called private capitals. While they are constantly opening and closing, they are annexing each other. It seems that the large groups and capital formed after the annexation have better improved the lives of the people because of the integration of resources. In fact, that is just because there are still many players in this world. Just like the United States during the struggle for hegemony between the United States and the Soviet Union could be a beacon to the world, the United States after the collapse of the Soviet Union was indeed a bad country for its people. It can be predicted that when the world's resources are unified, it will be a time of suffering for the middle and lower classes of the world. At that time, the people were not valuable. In an era when science and technology are highly developed, and when capital unifies the world, people are consumables. Moreover, it is still a consumable that is at the mercy of others and cannot resist. Big data holds all your information and you have no privacy. The activation buttons of advanced weapons require DNA recognition, and you don't have the authority to use them. What to resist? Flesh? If your brain is not useful, in the field of innovation, humans and machines cannot replace you. Whether you can survive or not is not a must-have item. This is the future world. When technology and power are highly concentrated in individuals, that is, after the mother body. The human group is actually extinct. From now on, the whole of human civilization will actually be one person who represents everything. Except for the person who unified capital, everyone else is either a consumable or on the way to becoming a consumable. Civilization is like this. Everything originates from chaos. Chaos gives birth to all things, and all things give birth to all spirits. Among all spirits, there are different forms. Finally, they returned to a dominant race. It is a reincarnation. The dominant racial individuals are divided into different countries and ethnic groups due to various differences. Wars and disputes continue. In the end, in the smoke-free battles again and again, we sought common ground while reserving differences, and were finally unified by a group. Then, in the struggle for power, they were unified by one person. Thus, reincarnation is over. The world actually took on a new look. Oh my god... That turned out to be the face of a person - the face of the last ruler. What is that? Human civilization? No, maybe his name does not have the word "" in it, but is called Ying Zheng...

Shangxiang, well, at least I can write about Journey to the West before going in.

Alas, I remembered it again after a long time. Shangxiang

This introduction directly outlines the outline.