The System Is a Hundred Years Ahead of Schedule, but the Spiritual Energy Has Just Recovered

The author should cut off the plot of the female character, or write it more plainly. The author doesn't know how to write female characters. The previous chapter is pretty good, but the plot of meeting the senior sister in the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion is really getting worse and worse. The author really doesn't have the ability to describe emotional scenes well.

There is also a book with this kind of theme, Tokyo: Three years in advance, slaying demons. But that book has some poisonous points. The difficulty level is what it will be three years in the future, but the mission rewards are not based on that difficulty level, but are adapted to a world that has not recovered. I don't know if this book has this problem.

Is this the first chapter on the shelves? Then I might as well just go see the little emperor uncle

Keep reading, the description of the senior sister is indeed poisonous, not as good as Lin Tao. Of course, for now, I suggest polishing it without a female protagonist. Lin Tao is not impossible, but Lin Tao will be in the middle and late stages.

The pace is a bit slow and the plot is a bit bland. In addition, the author should consider not having a female protagonist and use his strengths to avoid weaknesses 😠

I was drunk, my spiritual energy had not fully recovered, and I was still groping for the basic foundation-building skills. I even made up my own exercises and promoted them. Isn't it the basic foundation-building skills? I was still trying to find a group of people who were still trying to figure out the spiritual energy realm. What basic foundation-building skills were needed? 😅

This plot is so vulgar that I want to roll my eyes. Are there really such people in reality?

Could that Wu Hu be a little less cute? It's so disgusting.

I think it's very strange. Some of the character descriptions are not very good. For example, Zhao Zhong is described as a very wealthy person in the beginning. But does he become more and more intelligent as he goes on? I say yes, and I feel that the pace is a bit fast at the beginning, and it overpowers the protagonist's combat power. The heroine of this book is like a love brain, and she can be tricked into being fascinated by small favors. The rest is okay. Evaluation: There are some poisonous points, but it is still watchable.

A senior sister who is quick to eat and wipe everything has no role card yet, Chunhua takes the position of the heroine first 😂

I've only read Chapter 39. The author doesn't want to write a character like Satan or a king, right? Also, the female character's performance is inappropriate. Isn't it the goblin fantasy female character mentioned on the Internet now? Wireless free plus self-guided strategy

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, please don't force yourself into it. It's not that readers don't like stallion stories, it's that they don't like mentally retarded stories. Stallion novels that don't know how to write emotional scenes are even more retarded than mentally retarded novels. More than ten years ago, stories about retarded stallions were popular because there was no emotion at that time and all the readers relied on was flesh. Readers read them as if they were Liu Bei. Writing Liu Beiwen now is a wish for death. Writing about an emotionless stallion is equivalent to mathematics asking you to calculate what 1+1 equals. I prefer it to be equal to 10086 because I want it to be this. Indeed, you can do this for the God of fiction. But readers didn't buy it. You read novels for the plot, not for the fact that you said I think even a girl will like me. It's too far-fetched. Too deliberate. Brain-breaking.

It feels like the author has thought about the plot and world view. Except when writing about women, they all appeal to my taste. But it is still recommended to skip the plot about women, it is too cliche and greasy.

The male protagonist, Zhao Zhong and Li are all better than these two women.

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When I first watched it, I felt it was okay. It was quite imaginative, and I felt that it would be a protagonist with brains. But starting from the senior sister part... I felt that the protagonist was that system, and it would be the protagonist if it were another person. I can only say that this protagonist has no characteristics.

Can't see where the poison is? Why label it highly toxic?

It might be a little bit bad at the beginning, but isn't it getting better as you write more at the end? Why do you keep holding on to the front? There is always a transition period.