The Sun and the Moon Make the Same Mistakes and Cause Eternal Catastrophe

Sorry, the latest chapter disgusted me. Absorb human vitality? What's the difference between you and me? I might have laughed at other novels, but what you are writing is about the same story about Sun and Moon. Don't you know that sucking human life is absolutely taboo? Or is it that the author wants to clean up Wanye?

Sun and Moon is difficult to write. After all, due to the setting of the original work (the only timeline), you cannot make major changes to the plot (the observed facts cannot be changed). The greater the change, the harsher the causal penalty (but where there are fewer observers, the less attention is paid to the law of causality).

[Natural supernatural power] The power deep in the soul or spirit. When the Dharma seeker can detect the Dharma existing in all things in the world, he can explore this magical power. It will show different magical powers and appearances according to the character of the seeker, the environment in which it is located, and the degree of understanding of all things. I hope that book friends will use their imagination to describe the magical powers that they have longed for. Experience and detailed description are required. The best ones can be used in this game!

[Innate supernatural power] mainly manifests as some kind of change in the physical body, thereby displaying supernatural power on the body. I hope that book friends will use their imagination to describe the magical powers that they have longed for. Experience and detailed description are required. The best ones can be used in this game!

The writing was pretty good at the beginning, but there was too much romance and too much foreshadowing at the end. I still haven't seen the original plot.

My expectations were all in vain, the writing was really bad, and the protagonist's character was trash. The battles are poorly described, and the environment is poorly described. Especially the female characters are poorly written. As far as I can see, the current situation is either deep or not, and whether it feels good or not.

I feel that there is nothing regrettable about Sun Moon Tongcuo. Yesterday is gone and the past is decided. Everyone is moving forward without regrets and living a life filled with excitement. I wonder what the author has in mind for the adaptation.

Let's talk about Shen Nong. It's okay but very boring.

The further you look back, the more you feel like you're getting bigger

The writing is really not good, there are too many emotional descriptions, the male protagonist is written like a virgin, and he is impulsive, not to mention the female character, as if she is brainless, it is too discouraging.

There are only a dozen of them now. Let me give you my opinion. I support the author to continue writing. However, the author is a bit hasty in limiting the emotional fluctuations of the protagonist in just a dozen chapters. Moreover, a small poisonous point has been discovered in the first dozen chapters. There is not enough pavement for the protagonist's emotional changes and behavioral changes. I offer you a free recommendation ticket.

Really cut it, Mortal Dynasty is not that powerful

I'd like to ask you what you think of it. Is it too toxic?

Cut it. The rhythm is messed up. It's too urgent.

Ha, someone actually wrote that the sun and the moon are both wrong, and it's okay. Let's vote for 5 pictures first.

There is a high probability that it will be a hit. The writing is quite satisfactory. It is too depressing and weak. Most people will not like it.

Alas:-(, the battle of cause and effect is about to begin, Yao's life is coming to an end, and I'm still a little reluctant to let go. Yao, who has been extremely righteous and worthy of his true heart in this life, have a good journey.

Xiao Yao still needs to settle down. Sometimes there are too many magical powers to choose from, but if you can't master any of them, you will only be mediocre. Don't forget your roots. There are still many advanced gameplays that have not been developed in Souls of Different Destinies.

The sun and the moon make the same mistakes, which is good in itself. I hope the author gets better.

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Do you know what the law of cause and effect is? The law of cause and effect of the medium supernatural power can compete with the ordinary great supernatural power, but the protagonist's great supernatural power of the law of cause and effect is so weak?

Author, please, don't stop, the quality is very good, this is a fanfic

The natal magical power: the choice makes me wander The magical power has 2 effects If you avoid the will of heaven and avoid the cause: the thing you refuse will cut off the causal line with you (that is, the thing you refuse cannot happen again, for example, if you don't want to see a person, then this person will not be able to appear next to you within 3 days, but you can only refuse things within the scope of the magical power). It takes 3 days. After 3 days, the causal line will be connected again. Unless the person is higher than you, there is no way to refuse. You can activate it 3 times a day. According to God's will, follow the cause and effect: You can predict the result of an event in 1 hour or the process and result of an event in 1⃣️ minutes. After this event is predicted, it will be fixed by the law of cause and effect. Everything done by everyone in this time period will lead to this result, unless the person is higher than you (that is, a great supernatural power), which can be activated once a day. Great Supernatural Powers Guo avoids the will of God and hides causes: divided into active and passive. Passive, when something bad happens to you in the future, you will predict the process and results of the matter (that is, you can see the cause and effect line of this matter). Active, you can see your own cause and effect line. You can cut off the cause and effect line, making yourself a person without cause and effect. In the same way, the higher the personality involved in this matter, the greater the consumption, and the great supernatural power will have causal induction. According to God's Will: You can clearly see all the causal lines that may happen to an event, and then you can choose one of the causal lines. This causal line will be witnessed by the law of causality. People who change this causal line will be punished. The higher the level of people, the higher the cost of activating it. Note: You cannot violate the chosen causal line.