Fingertip Red Mansion

First, the author's description of the fate of being born as a slave is... Very entertaining. Second, in the simulation, Jia's mother asked the protagonist to be the long-term follower to the big-faced treasure... No, no matter how downcast they are, they are still members of the Jia family. How can there be any reason for the brother to be the long-term follower? Third, Mrs. Wang attacked and killed Jia Lian for her title? In fact, it is said that if Mrs. Wang arranges the manpower herself, there will be no problem. After all, although Mrs. Wang has a brain, all she can think about is house fighting, and there is no problem if she does not know the legal inheritance. But your protagonist is like this too, and he tells Jia Lian that his title will fall to the second eldest brother after his death? What a joke, Jia She is not dead yet. Even if he dies, Jia Cong will inherit. Even if Jia Cong dies, it will be inherited by one adopted person. It is the turn of Baoyu Daylily to be cold. Okay, you said that the protagonist is a time traveler and he doesn't know. Mrs. Wang even made a military crossbow in order to intercept Jia Lian, so Wang Ziteng must have agreed. Otherwise, he, a woman, can produce a military crossbow to intercept the inheritor of Rongguo Mansion? After reading twenty or thirty chapters, there are so many poisonous points. To be honest, these poisonous points are not big or small. If they can be changed, I really suggest that the author change the previous plot and description...

The key to writing about Red Mansions is to grasp the characteristics of the characters! It's a success if you portray the characters well. There's nothing new in the plot of Red Mansions.

I have a lot of doubts after reading it. Why did the author write that Mrs. Wang killed Jia Lian or used weapons because of Wang Ziteng's relationship? First of all, it is very different from the original work. This is because Wang Xifeng was engaged to pick up someone. Wang Ziteng also agreed to you killing him. No matter how you look at it, it is unreasonable.

The cavalry should use long weapons when charging into battle, not swords. It is best for the protagonist to mount the horse with a spear and dismount with the sword.

Make the protagonist more powerful and not bitchy

If you are stubborn and do bad things, you will never be able to achieve elegance. The stories included are all fabricated. However, if there are any errors or omissions, please point them out in time. If you receive praise, Sanwu will be infinitely grateful.

It's really uncomfortable to have to ask Qin Keqing

I stopped writing chapter names again... The chapter names are also half of the introduction. If I can't see them, I honestly don't have much desire to read them.

It gets better and better from now on, but there are always some logical inconsistencies. I won't go into details earlier, except that the dignified Earl General has no guards in his house, and there are no personal soldiers accompanying him when he comes in and out.

I can't understand it, it feels a bit like classical Chinese, and it's uncomfortable to watch.

I have caught up to the latest, and the author's progress is visible to the naked eye. I have a little doubt about the protagonist's cheating. Why can good deeds just sit and be accumulated and be accumulated through direct good deeds while evil deeds can be accumulated through indirect influence? Do you want the protagonist to go to hell? The burning of the Tatars accumulated more than 200,000 evil deeds, but how many Dagan people did the protagonist save by defeating the Tatars? The life of the Tatars is life, but the life of the Dagan people is not life. Since the plug-in is enabled, let him use it. If you want to control the rhythm, you can intersperse some daily writing with garden dramas. After all, you are also a Red Mansion fan. Don't use bullshit about being too young to suppress the protagonist, after all, you are already cheating. It's really disgusting to suppress the protagonist with such nonsense reasons. I don't know why others are reading this book, but I read this book because the protagonist is not suppressed at the beginning of the book, unlike other Red Mansions fans who were disgusted by the Jia family and the emperor. I read online novels for fun. The real world is realistic enough. I don't want to find reality in the online world.

Seeing people selling lottery tickets to persuade them to quit, 886

The author writes well, I will definitely keep it up. I have ordered all of them.

It's well written. Dai and Chai must accept it.

The Red Mansion fanfic is pretty good, but the results are not that good for some reason. Come on!