Conan: the Abnormal Pet Raider

Author, have you ever thought about turning the protagonist's vests into physical clones to cause trouble? That would feel very interesting😏.

Never die of old age, never be separated, live a life of rice flowers day after day, in this parallel world, this Xiaoyin's world that belongs exclusively to her.

Mao Lilan invites you to watch "Conan: The Abnormal Pet Raider"

I don't know what liking is, but every story, every character, and every sentence in this book deeply attracts me

Tohru Amuro invites you to watch "Conan: The Abnormal Pet Raider"

5-4=0

Children are the greatest treasure of mankind, and Shiho is my greatest treasure

Gin invites you to watch "Conan: The Abnormal Pet Keeper"

Life will eventually have an end, and stories will always have an ending. Everything seems to have just begun and is about to end. Beautiful stories always don't want to have an ending

It feels like almost every chapter has to spend a paragraph describing how beautiful the protagonist is, what corners of his mouth are drawn, and describing the character from beginning to end. However, there is almost no change to the previous description of the protagonist, as if the main text has been watered down without concealment. If there is too much water, the effective information collected will be reduced. In addition, it is a fanfic. Once the protagonist does not participate in the incident to a large extent, but solves the case and hangs out with the protagonist in daily life, it will make people feel like they have watched it but not watched it. Having written so many words, the extension of the plot can be more bold. After all, the old plot is still uninteresting. Personally, I still prefer the plot in which the protagonist acts as a winery, because in the original work, the winery plot only accounts for a small part, and it is all original content, while following the detective to solve the case is only a small adaptation. The author seems to particularly like to use "curves", "mouth corners" and "smiles" to describe the characters' faces. The repetition is extremely high, and it could be more concise. Not over-describing the characters helps readers to imagine themselves.

Why don't the author just change the protagonist to a female? It's okay to put it in a male video 😏

Xiaoyin

Just by looking at the first few chapters, I can already feel that something is wrong. He was suddenly shot to death by an unrelated person without moving his eyes or heart, without mentioning anything afterwards. This is destined to prove that the protagonist essentially treats time travel as a "game". This kind of arrogance is revealed in his bones... To be honest, I really can't stand it. To put it simply, the author is not good at portraying the psychological activities of the characters, and does not consider the reactions of some ordinary people to the things they encounter. Just by watching it, we can clearly feel that something is going on. Just... The protagonist of Destiny is a very classic character now. I have read a lot of books with this template. It is a cool novel, but it cannot be said that the protagonist is anti-human. It can also be said that he is not a normal person at all.

Hey hey new wife

I haven't read it for a while, and I've read about seventy chapters. I got stuck several times on Kuroba Nahana's identity, saying that she wrote a love letter to Kudo, and I couldn't stand it. There were too many identity vests, too complicated, too messy, and it was so boring to read. The original hook is enough, and it is more than enough for trouble or self-protection. Later, I will upgrade and open up the business Stores and new features are not necessary, the hook is already outrageous, and it becomes more and more outrageous and less interesting to watch I don't want to see these two embarrassing things. The original owner likes Okita Souji and eating tofu for Conan. It is acceptable to tease Conan, but what about making him salivate, kiss him, and change identities? I wrote to him. I can't stand these love letters... Then there is the point where someone mentioned that the protagonist treats his friends like Xiaolan Yuanzi as tools. He just plays tricks on Conan and the people in the winery. There is really no need for Xiaolan and those people. The protagonist seems to be obsessed with gaining power just for the sake of favor This book attracted me What's important is not how powerful and handsome the protagonist is, how cool he is, how he uses his original identity to interact with Xiaolan's protagonist group and the winery, the funny and warm daily life, teasing Conan Hattori, the interaction with Sakura, the protagonist's dress and reaction to being teased, etc. Really, write less about those messy abilities and identities, it's just a bad life...

It feels like treating everyone in the world as tools, there are no so-called friends, 😵 everyone can be deceived and exploited. It was obviously not like this at the beginning, but later it felt like no one was a friend and was just a tool. Is this really good? For the sake of goodwill, you can deceive your friends to no limit, and even pretend to be dead to make your friends worry. In the later period, the character of the protagonist became more and more bad. I was on the ship in order to improve myself. I don't hesitate to worry all my friends just to improve my favor. I feel that the protagonist is now like a favor tool. He has no real thoughts of his own. He does everything thinking "this will improve his favor" and never cares about how much his friends care about him. He is just like a child. He only makes fun for his own happiness and doesn't care about the concerns of others. You say you cheated on Conan and Gin, so forget it, but even with Xiaolan Yuanzi deceived me together. If your friends kept playing tricks on you like this, would you be happy? In the later stage, I felt that I had become selfish for the so-called favor and didn't care about my good friends at all.

Well, author, do you know that the ending of Nanliang is the Northern Dynasty😏😏

Going round and round, I still choose you 🙂

I strongly recommend that the author change the setting of men dressing up as women, as it feels like it could explode at any time. You have to lose your masculine characteristics when you dress up. A cross-dressing master like Belmode should not be able to detect it all the time. And it doesn't do much to foreshadow your writing.

Cute pinch

There is only one truth: you are all undercover!

Going round and round, it's still you

The monthly ticket red envelope in the book has a lot of coins~ Those who have monthly tickets can get it~

I highly recommend it. As for the minor points, I came here after reading Lizi. The character settings of the two novels are basically the same, so there is no problem. The key point is to treat the protagonist as a Nanliang, otherwise you won't be able to watch it

As a long-time fan of Conan for more than 20 years, I finally took the time to watch "Detective Conan: One-Eyed Afterimage" last night. After all, it was too late, so I was the only one in this show. Wow, wow, I unexpectedly achieved the achievement of booking the whole show.

Wow, I've been raising it for a year and it's over. Damn it, I've forgotten the plot.

After writing this book, will you write a follow-up? 😭😭

"On the final day, we will meet on the roller coaster..."

If there really is a parallel universe, I think we must have rubbed shoulders on countless dusk crossings, you holding a lamp, I holding an umbrella, and the sound of rain said goodbye for us; and in this life, I still stubbornly regard every sunset as a signpost - if the Milky Way is willing, one day, we will meet again light years away, like two grains of dust blown away by the years, sitting in each other's pupils again.

"On the final day, we will meet on the roller coaster..."