The Mist Ninja Blacksmith: Reforging the Glory of the Ninja Blade School!

The time period chosen by the author is really annoying. Although it is not sure whether the Mizukage was controlled before Kirigakure intervened in the third war, it was determined that it had been controlled since the plan to sacrifice Nohara Rin. Not to mention later, Obito accepted the Mizukage control plan of Kirigakure, which greatly affected Kirigakure. Although it is not known when the fifth Mizukage came to power, it is certain that it was not long after the start of the plot of Naruto. This blood mist policy is not short. The protagonist is the only ninja sword forger who has revealed the secret side of the Kirigakure. Not only does the risk of being exposed in the dungeon increase dramatically, but it is also inconsistent with Obito's plan to weaken the Kirigakure. Making Kirigakure great again is simply a joke. After all, their leader is rebelling against himself. If the protagonist's ninja sword kills or injures an acquaintance Obito cares about in the third battle, the protagonist will most likely be cleared out in advance when Obito takes over Kirigakure.

It relies a bit too much on special materials, and the forging technology is not reflected.

The writing is not bad, but I feel that the plot is too boring. The mist ninja kills everyone with the protagonist's sword? No sense of substitution. A mysterious blacksmith sends knives everywhere in the ninja world. Not only does he send the original plot characters, but he can also write some original supporting characters to cause trouble with the knives given by the protagonist. Wouldn't it be more interesting to have the entire ninja world take the protagonist's sword and punch the dog's brains out?

I feel that it is better not to have anything from other anime. It can be self-created, or something similar, otherwise it will be a bit confusing. Originally, fan fiction has been almost developed, and the plot is the foundation. Okay, finished speaking, praise.

I really feel that doing missions to obtain materials is a failure. You should directly hunt dangerous species or defeat weapon owners. This way you can also see the combat situation of different systems. It is also simple and clear. Generally, comic fans need to travel independently through each world to participate in the plot immersively. Generally speaking, people from different worlds cannot interact except for the protagonist. Once they do, it will basically be toxic, because the author It will not be handled well. The setting of obtaining materials for missions like this is unlucky for both of them. Those who like to watch TV series want to see the plots of different worlds, rather than completing tasks with a cold purpose. Those who don't like to watch TV series and only want to watch Naruto also don't like seeing the protagonist doing tasks in one world. I hope the author will consider it and can't do both. It's not good for both ends. It's too greedy.

To be honest, the idea is really good, but the writing level is really a bit poor, the rationality is too low, and someone came looking for trouble in the first two forgings. . . I barely convinced myself that it was a coincidence and this kind of writing technique is indeed long-lasting in the literary world. Although it is not a good technique, I did see progress the next time. From 2001 to 2010, I have made progress. At the stage of 10 to 20 years, when something is built, something that needs it will inevitably happen immediately. This is a very novice writing method, even if you change the order of it? You switch to a situation where the protagonist knows Qing, but he is seriously injured, and then the protagonist tries to find a solution. In this way, at least this matter is related. Things like yours that are unrelated can be lumped together to make people lose the desire to read on.

Suddenly I had an idea to replace the ninja level with star rating, replace the ninja sword with entertainment works, and replace other ninjas with audiences and netizens. The result...

I think since this book is about forging, the author could add more descriptions about forging materials and forging processes. Now that you get the materials, you can forge them right out of the house, which lacks a sense of immersion. Watching some knife forging videos may be very inspiring and helpful to the author.

The idea is great, but the plot is blunt. Especially the first few chapters show a stiffness. . . Force to cancel, then sign Kisame, and then make copies of the materials. . .

When you wrote about casting, you didn't mention the weapon's awesome power. What technology? There are no fighting scenes at all. Write a little in the east and a little in the west. You might as well just write a copy of Zhutian to drop weapons.