The Mist Ninja Blacksmith: Reforging the Glory of the Ninja Blade School!

The time period the author chose is really awkward. Although it's uncertain whether the Mizukage was controlled before the Third Shinobi World War, it's clear that he was already being manipulated from the moment the plan to sacrifice Rin Nohara was made. Needless to say, Obito took over the Mizukage control plan and kept creating more Mizukage.

It relies too much on special materials; the forging technique isn't fully utilized.

The writing wasn't bad, but the plot felt too boring. The Mist Ninja were just wielding the protagonist's sword and wreaking havoc? There was absolutely no sense of immersion. A mysterious blacksmith travels the ninja world giving away swords, not only to characters from the original storyline, but also to create original supporting characters who use the protagonist's swords to cause trouble.

I feel it's better to avoid elements from other anime. We can create our own or something similar, otherwise it feels a bit like a crossover. Fanfiction has already been pretty much exhausted; the plot is what matters. Okay, that's all. Thumbs up.

The material-obtaining-through-quests system is definitely a flaw. It should directly involve hunting dangerous species or defeating weapon wielders. This would allow for a clearer view of combat across different worlds and is simpler to follow.

To be honest, the idea is quite imaginative, but the writing is really poor. The plausibility is too low; the first two times, someone came to cause trouble during the forging... I barely managed to convince myself it was just a coincidence. And this kind of writing technique is indeed enduring in the world of wish-fulfillment novels, although it's not a particularly good technique.

I suddenly had an idea: replace ninja rankings with celebrity ratings, ninja swords with entertainment works, and other ninjas with viewers and netizens. The result…

Since this book is about forging, I think the author could add more descriptions of the forging materials and process. The current method, where the author simply receives the materials, leaves the room, and forges the sword, lacks a sense of immersion. Watching some videos on sword forging might inspire and help the author.

The idea is good, but the plot is stiff. This stiffness is especially evident in the first few chapters. They forced me to cancel, then signed Kisame, then did the materials dungeon...

You didn't describe the satisfying power and impact of weapon crafting in your description. What kind of technology is this? There are no combat scenes at all. You just wrote a little bit here and a little bit there. You might as well have just written about weapons dropping in dungeons across the heavens.