Kirigakure Blacksmith, Reforge the Glory of Ninja Sword Style!

The time period chosen by the author is really annoying. Although it is not sure whether the Mizukage was controlled before Kirigakure intervened in the third war, it was determined that it had been controlled since the plan to sacrifice Nohara Rin. Not to mention later, Obito accepted the Mizukage control plan of Kirigakure, which greatly affected Kirigakure. Although it is not known when the fifth Mizukage came to power, it is certain that it was not long after the start of the plot of Naruto. This blood mist policy is not short. The protagonist is the only ninja sword forger who has revealed the secret side of the Kirigakure. Not only does the risk of being exposed in the dungeon increase dramatically, but it is also inconsistent with Obito's plan to weaken the Kirigakure. Making Kirigakure great again is simply a joke. After all, their leader is rebelling against himself. If the protagonist's ninja sword kills or injures an acquaintance Obito cares about in the third battle, the protagonist will most likely be cleared out in advance when Obito takes over Kirigakure.

It relies a bit too much on special materials, and the forging technology is not reflected.

The writing is not bad, but I feel that the plot is too boring. The mist ninja kills everyone with the protagonist's sword? No sense of substitution. A mysterious blacksmith sends knives everywhere in the ninja world. Not only does he send the original plot characters, but he can also write some original supporting characters to cause trouble with the knives given by the protagonist. Wouldn't it be more interesting to have the entire ninja world take the protagonist's sword and punch the dog's brains out?

I feel that it is better not to have anything from other anime. It can be self-created, or something similar, otherwise it will be a bit confusing. Originally, fan fiction has been almost developed, and the plot is the foundation. Okay, finished speaking, praise.

To be honest, the idea is really good, but the writing level is really a bit poor, the rationality is too low, and someone came looking for trouble in the first two forgings. . . I barely convinced myself that it was a coincidence and this kind of writing technique is indeed long-lasting in the literary world. Although it is not a good technique, I did see progress the next time. From 2001 to 2010, I have made progress. At the stage of 10 to 20 years, when something is built, something that needs it will inevitably happen immediately. This is a very novice writing method, even if you change the order of it? You switch to a situation where the protagonist knows Qing, but he is seriously injured, and then the protagonist tries to find a solution. In this way, at least this matter is related. Things like yours that are unrelated can be lumped together to make people lose the desire to read on.

I really feel that doing missions to obtain materials is a failure. You should directly hunt dangerous species or defeat weapon owners. This way you can also see the combat situation of different systems. It is also simple and clear. Generally, comic fans need to travel independently through each world to participate in the plot immersively. Generally speaking, people from different worlds cannot interact except for the protagonist. Once they do, it will basically be toxic, because the author It will not be handled well. The setting of obtaining materials for missions like this is unlucky for both of them. Those who like to watch TV series want to see the plots of different worlds, rather than completing tasks with a cold purpose. Those who don't like to watch TV series and only want to watch Naruto also don't like seeing the protagonist doing tasks in one world. I hope the author will consider it and can't do both. It's not good for both ends. It's too greedy.

Suddenly I had an idea to replace the ninja level with star rating, replace the ninja sword with entertainment works, and replace other ninjas with audiences and netizens. The result...

I think since this book is about forging, the author could add more descriptions about forging materials and forging processes. Now that you get the materials, you can forge them right out of the house, which lacks a sense of immersion. Watching some knife forging videos may be very inspiring and helpful to the author.

The idea is great, but the plot is blunt. Especially the first few chapters show a stiffness. . . Force to cancel, then sign Kisame, and then make copies of the materials. . .

When you wrote about casting, you didn't mention the weapon's awesome power. What technology? There are no fighting scenes at all. Write a little in the east and a little in the west. You might as well just write a copy of Zhutian to drop weapons.

When the author writes supporting characters, he says that this village has a narrow-minded vision, that the ninjas have a narrow-minded vision, and that the ninja clan has a narrow-minded vision, each one more narrow-minded than the last! Is it possible that the protagonist has the narrowest vision? ? ? The author's outline is a unified one! (This has been said a long time ago) Then why doesn't the author let the protagonist work hard to improve his talents and combat power through the system? Be a nanny to Kirito Ninja every day! Kirigakure is just the protagonist's protective umbrella, not his parents! As long as we can protect the protagonist well and survive the early development period, that's all! ! He literally went from genin protection to kage level! I have made a sword, but I don't find the best sword holder for it. Why not give it to the Mist Ninja? Even if the sword holder has just passed the exam, I will give it to the Mist Ninja! Instead of writing about the mastermind behind the scenes, he went to work as a nanny in the Kirigakure Village. The middle and later plots are not interesting at all, and such a good subject is wasted! At the end of the writing, whatever weapon you draw, I can guess who it's for.

There is no autonomy. It is better to call it a forging than a reproduction. It is simply led by the nose. The overall plot is too deliberate and has no highlights.

Don't worry about your water escape. Just briefly describe the protagonist's strength. I'm here to see forging, not to see the protagonist's invincibility.

The protagonist casually made up a blacksmith's spiritual holy land, but so many people still believe it, and treat ninjas as fools?

First, the so-called mission is Zhutianliu, which according to the author's writing is plot flow, but the batch of water can be summarized in one sentence, and then one or two water, and the so-called material finally obtained is not stated what it is. After a wave of forging skills, the sword comes out. It is really better to just draw a lottery. Second, the writing style is average, but it doesn't matter in fan fiction. If you don't know how to write dialogue, just write less. Write more inner descriptions and just make up your mind. If there are too many dialogues, they are nutritious and dry, and it feels like AI writing The third is the plot. , Two knives were released in the early stage, but there was no plot related to the performance of the cup, they were just forged. The protagonist had a prestige lottery, but there was no prestige. The third knife did have a plot, but it was all about making a dumpling for jealousy. And the plot of the fight between Kisame and Kakashi and his group is even more ridiculous. Does it mean much? Forcibly expose a new wave of ninja swords and give Danzo eye drops? The Kingdom of Whirlpool can be destroyed, let alone a ninja sword that can increase immediate combat power once you get it. According to normal thinking, shouldn't the sword be allowed to make a name for itself in the ninja world, for example, by sending a few sword-wielding buddies on a mission, leaving traces behind, being noticed by Konoha, and being shocked but unable to find the murderer? After reading thirty chapters, that's it. I just want to complain, there is no malice, feel free to delete the comment.

It's a bit funny, the so-called Holy Land of Psychics is actually a copy of the Heavens. To be honest. . . The whole world has gone crazy, so why bother forging ninja tools? Just forge well. It is reasonable to download a copy like dnf and kill monsters to obtain materials.

I feel like the special effects of weapons that can't heal wounds and paralyze people after hitting are useless. Wouldn't it be more convenient to just quench the poison? Naruto is a glass cannon that can be eaten all over the world with one move. With Kisame's strength, few people in the ninja world could hold a heavier weapon, so there was no need to enhance his ability to fight for a long time. It is really weapons like Samehada that are most suitable for him. They can fully bring out his strength, chakra capacity and ability to absorb other people's chakra. Personally, I feel that Kisame is more suitable with Samehada and auxiliary equipment such as God's Ghost Haunting...

The Zanpakutō's name is not worthy of its name, especially the Skeleton Emperor. It stands to reason that the Skeleton Emperor can restrain the reincarnation of the earth. After all, he can kill the god of death. Being able to directly attack the soul is his basic attribute.

If you are a member, you have to pay to watch! Damn it's really a scam

Why can't you put a not interested label on a book?

Although it is not as good as the best batch of Naruto fans, I think it is better than most of the current Naruto fans. At least it is not like some authors who have little success and delete comments and ban comments.

The subject matter is novel, but the plot you wrote is really ordinary.

What a waste of a good subject

Personally, after reading this book, it is a highlight that this book does not follow the crowd in the beginning of Konoha, and then using a weapon like the Ninja Sword as a golden finger is also a big highlight. However, the author's own ideas limited this subject matter, resulting in a lackluster writing. The dungeon world is just a transition and the main world should be written well. However, the author's writing skills are not strong enough, and then why does he have to keep emphasizing the names of the protagonists and the contracted ninja swords? Why can't the supporting cast of the original work be upgraded to movie level or even super movie level? Isn't this kind of counterattack more interesting?

What a pity. I still like this subject after reading it 😭😭😭😭

The plot setting is okay, but the writing style seems to be too long, and the content of the dungeon is very stiff, and the logic of the Naruto world is a bit inconsistent with the reality of the time. My eyes hurt after reading twenty or thirty chapters. If it is just for brushing up materials and I don't want to participate in the plot at all, then why do the dungeons have storylines in various worlds? The content of the dungeon is short and empty.

I've read a few books about Konoha, but this one is pretty good about other Kage villages.

Why did it end so quickly? It's not finished. I read it from beginning to end. What are you writing? I ordered so many

I think the writing is okay, but why do so many people criticize it?

The novelty is good, you can follow it. But one thing I don't understand is, since you know that 20 consecutive greens will come out, why would you waste ten consecutive whites? In addition, every time you introduce your attributes, the number of words is too obvious.