Warhammer: the Fifth Evil

Alas, I actually have the desire to read the introduction The introduction looks quite epic. But in terms of content and writing, just from my personal point of view, the main theme of Warhammer is despair and darkness. The plot can be absurd and ironic, but it must not be funny or funny for the sake of making fun of it. Warhammer is not a comedy, or in other words, Warhammer is not suitable for comedy. The Emperor unified Terra, swept across the solar system, and mobilized the power of the galaxy to launch the Great Crusade. Logically speaking, he can be regarded as the kind of invincible protagonist of a refreshing novel. However, he finally sat on the throne of Terra and was sucked into a mummy. Millions of Astartes warriors in the form of demigods, billions of trillions of Astra Militarum. In this regard, even the combat power that could unify the galaxy in other worldviews would not be able to reverse the empire's trend towards destruction. Obviously, under this main theme, being funny is completely unrealistic and extremely outrageous. For example, in the face of the destruction of hundreds of millions of people on a planet, can you be in the mood to joke and make some jokes that don't fit the situation? If I saw this kind of plot, I wouldn't be able to stand it anyway, and I don't know what other Warhammer readers think. The protagonist has just traveled to Warhammer. If he doesn't know much about Warhammer, doesn't know Chaos, and hasn't experienced severe beatings, it might not be so hard to accept that he makes a few childish jokes under the arrogance of the time traveler and the care of the author. But no, the protagonist is supposed to understand Warhammer, know the plot, and grew up on the Mortarion home planet. It stands to reason that he has been beaten severely. It's good that the protagonist didn't say anything about making jokes, and he didn't even mention that he stabbed a crow into the anus of a corpse. The narration, an omniscient and omnipotent perspective that gives an overview of the whole situation, is making inappropriate jokes at an inappropriate time. The narrator is almost equal to the author. When the author writes a book for book friends to read (unless you just want to make yourself happy), you must consider the readers' feelings. These funny plots and nonsensical jokes are not considered to be screening readers when facing Warhammer readers 🙄 So, the author, you write in the background of Warhammer, but the melody is mixed with nonsensical jokes. Isn't this a conflict? If the author sees this, the purpose of writing this book is to show readers, listen to me, delete those inappropriate jokes, change the funny plot, and don't write funny dialogue. More despair (for example, the author's relatives die one by one, and friends sacrifice one by one), darkness (even if you try your best in the early stage, you still can't change the overall situation of the war), epic (a war with hundreds of thousands or millions of people, heroic and praiseworthy sacrifices), if you want, you can slightly change the fate of some key characters, save a few who should be saved, and kill a few who should be killed. If it is written this way, Warhammer readers will probably be more accepting of it, and other readers won't find it awkward when they read it. You, the author, don't have to complain to anyone in the book circle.

I didn't read it, I just want to scold you. The four gods and the emperor in Warhammer basically have two sides, good and evil. One-sidedness means you cannot become the main god. Just like your introduction, "Eat, children." Becoming a god means fullness and gluttony. What is the situation in the Warhammer world, hunger and thirst? >If you are full, you can only become the god of gluttonous Zerg. What is funny is that the god of foraging. What foraging for the elder brother produces is production and reward. What do you think the virtue of Warhammer is projected in the subspace? It is a world where overwork is overworked and blood is respected. The important point is war. The body of the Hammer World is only the carrier of the subspace, which is the essence. If you take his body, he will not recognize you in the subspace. You will only be his divine choice or food, and the Warhammer World is a big cesspit. What are you looking for? If you look for the East-West Emperor No matter what the emperor says, he will make you into a toilet lid and put it on you. There is no whisper of evil gods in this human passage. You are not the main god, you are just a material. No matter what you look for, the four vendors and the emperor will make good use of you. The last sentence is not qualified enough, don't make up.

Although Warhammer 40k is very hopeless, I can't read the first few chapters you wrote.

Woohoo, is it because I am too cool or because the quality of book friends is too high? Why don't anyone even scold me? 😢

Why do you want to write about Warhammer? Isn't it better to write a novice novel than these four images?

The introduction looks good, but when you scroll down, there is a female protagonist with a silly and sweet tag. Is there any Shen Nong who can tell me?

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