My Life Has a Talent for Growth

The writing is quite good, and the rhythm of setting it up is fine. I am just a little worried about the comeback of an old author, so I subconsciously wrote a plot that was exciting a few years ago. It was fine a few years ago, but now it is poisonous.

It was a pleasure to read the first few chapters, but after seeing the turning point in chapters 6 and 7, I always felt like I had a lump in my throat. Just write it hard

The character creation in this book is very good. It is rare to create a relatively good mother (this is really rare in Seven Points Orphanage). The characters are very vivid, very real, and very three-dimensional. The heroine is also very suitable, and the other supporting characters are also okay. But the problem is that the plot twist is too blunt, the plot needs to be polished, the pace of some chapters is too fast, the foreshadowing is not in place, and the foreshadowing has just begun to be laid. The reasons for making enemies are too far-fetched (mainly because the encounter with Zhao Linglong is too abrupt), and it is easy to lose readers without two very big points. Then, I can only hope that the author will continue to work hard. The important plots and turning points can be slowed down and not written in one stroke. Also, if you can write about daily life, write more. Since warm and humorous daily plots are what the author is good at, then write more. Humorous and funny daily life can also become the feature and bonus of your novel. Finally, 2 recommendation votes are dedicated to you~ (I can't help it, the level is low, there are only two per day, please give me more recommendations because of my many words~)

It is said that your book is the founder of this genre, but the number of words written by you as the founder is not as many as those who follow the trend. If you do this, you may lose your identity as a founder. On the contrary, others who wrote better and wrote more took over the identity of the founder of this genre.

I was walking down the road and saw an American spy killing people. Then the spy put a knife to my neck. But she suddenly doesn't want to kill me anymore? What logic?

What kind of evil dragon form is the ultimate life form?

Chapter 6 You don't change. There's no need for you to write a book, you won't get ahead.

It's wonderful. I can only say that I don't want to eat this meal, so don't blame everyone for eating it. Let's get this theme sorted out.

It was good at first, but then it felt weird.

The plot of the first five chapters was very comfortable and full of expectations, making people want to continue reading. However, in the sixth chapter, Zhao Linglong suddenly appeared, and then the plot changed rapidly. All the efforts of the protagonist and the heroine were just to defeat this Zhao Linglong later. There was no sense of expectation at all, and the attraction disappeared.