Small Island Fishing Village

After reading it, the writing is too watery, so watery that it feels a bit verbose 😰😰😰 An action of putting the fish on the car, getting aerobic, but also dropping the fishing rod?

Don't read it. Your books are all just a template. The more you write, the worse they get.

I hope I won't need another financing loan this time. The development is too fast, as was the case in the previous books. You will lose all your investment in a project, more than double your investment, and then sell out and change projects. Buffett will have to give up his position to you several times. Naturally, there is nothing to write about at this level. In reality, it is not normal for people to do business in partnership with leverage again and again and still win every time. Most of the people who read this kind of book should also read about life, otherwise wouldn't it be more enjoyable to read Godly writings. It doesn't mean that by forcibly suppressing the protagonist, it is reasonable to leapfrog. Without using leverage, the development speed of Goldfinger alone is beyond the reach of ordinary people. Isn't it enough to be cool?

I saw it on the new book list, will it still be Muyang Dog?

That book about the career line of a deep-sea fisherman was well written, but you insist on doing something about immortality. In this book, I hope you can write a good career line and stop doing those outrageous things.

When writing about Hainan, don't speak with a Sichuan accent, which will make you uncomfortable.

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Brother, can you please take your time and write, just a few simple things about household matters? Write slowly and earn money and then waste it on the next book.

Write slowly, and be sure not to make Gold Finger too big. After all, readers of this type of book just want to relax themselves, and don't make the reader's mentality explode.

Where is the author? You really don't want to write anymore? Have you changed your vest?

Wasn't the last book incomplete before it reached two million words? Otherwise, if you don't write it down, you won't be able to keep your words, right?

Please support the new book, you can be considered an old reader. It seems that your biggest problem is that you have a poor grasp of the rhythm. When you started your business, your business was very large and you lost all your money and were heavily in debt. After harvesting, you suddenly become rich, and then you can no longer write. You have reached the peak, and you can only change the map and change the development mode. But readers already have feelings and a sense of involvement in the previous content, and you simply can't accept it if you change it. So don't start with such a big stall, go step by step, and gradually develop and improve, so that you have something to write about.

It looks okay, but 36 feels a little bit big, and 31.32 Feels good.

It's quite good. If you don't like reading it, you can turn left and leave. There are so many novels, there is always something you like. But why the bad reviews? Very angry

Who should read the next few books with protagonists in their 30s and 40s?

I think you should sign up for a class and learn how to write articles in a systematic way. I think your writing in the novel is really heartwarming.

Write a book with all your heart. I haven't thought about writing a book properly for a long time. 🤫 I haven't made an outline for many years. 🤫 No one will criticize me after I cut this book because there is no reluctance to part with it. Personally, I feel that the best one was written by The Strongest Fisherman. Unfortunately, I cut it when I saw that it was difficult to write.

Support the author, your writing is very good, very warm and plain, the three views are very positive, the author is very mentally healthy, there is no mess.

I quite enjoyed this book. What a pity

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In farming novels, you don't need to borrow tens of millions or hundreds of millions for development. That's not urban flow. If you don't develop quickly, you will be stepped on! Farming stories need to be simmered slowly... The map can be expanded, don't reopen the map frequently... Reopening the map is a taboo! Your past ranches and small island farms were quite good, although you also had loans for development. Unlike your recent books, you frequently opened maps. The last one had more than 700,000 words. You started with raising fish, then changed the map to raise fish in the valley, then changed the map to Inner Mongolia, and then changed the map to Mushan... You are an old author of several books. Farming books are not adventure fantasy books, so you can't change maps frequently, don't you know? Make a plan for your next book, make an outline in advance, and write it calmly. Readers who read farming articles, you can talk to yourself about daily life, and don't make loan operations at every turn... There are not many people who say they like to read farming articles to become rich, and they all know that is unrealistic... It is better to stably achieve initial wealth freedom and have a sense of substitution...