Mountain Village Orchard

I'm here again. I said before that the protagonist is too licky. Now that I see it, okay, the overall plot is still good. Except for the licking at the beginning, it's still worth watching. However, the plot needs to be faster. It's a bit slow.

I read four chapters, all filled with memories and complaints! I borrowed a lot of money and didn't have a career plan yet, so I called my ex-girlfriend: I'll pursue you. Damn it, this development... Turn to the introduction, a fourth-level author! Uh, I guess I didn't understand?

Don't be a licker! I'm getting really annoyed by this. 😡

There are still almost 100,000 words left in the dog-licking article. We haven't gotten to the main topic yet. So what about contracting to plant fruit trees in the mountains?

My eldest brother didn't come to see you write about the orchard. Why are you still writing about wood all the way to the end? Can you just write it down in one sentence? Just write a little about it. How many chapters are there about your orchard? I can't read it without skipping a beat.

Let's just write about farming. I didn't even read the last book about fishing.

There was just a girl. Later generations thought she was good-looking, but she kept licking her after she came back from time travel. It was really unappetizing to watch! According to the current progress, it will take at least a hundred chapters. . .

Farming is good-looking, but fishermen are not good-looking

What is it written about? When writing about orchards, it turns out that it is all about selling wood

The dog is licking like this and someone is washing the floor. It's so funny.

Thank you for 9 books, but you are still a level 4 author. You should go back to selling sweet potatoes.

This book is off topic, which is a big no-no. After reading ten or twenty chapters, it doesn't match Orchard at all. . . I don't understand how the author could make such a mistake after writing so many books. . .

Dog licking article is so embarrassing

The failure of this book is that the proportion of your friends appearing is too high, and it is not that they are doing business, but it is equivalent to you doing business and giving the profits to them. If the food is put to the mouth, if this is done between friends, it doesn't matter if the friend doesn't do it.

I hope it won't reach a hundred chapters, and there are still only two or three chapters about the orchard...

Can you stop licking and licking? Farming is about farming well. With the first pot of gold, you have a spiritual spring, and the quality and taste of the fruits will naturally be good. Can't you take the route of high-end fruits and then use the income to invest? It would be nice for the heroine to be a gentle and virtuous person to stabilize the back garden, but she has to go back and lick her hard?

Can the author please stop writing a dog-licking protagonist? It makes me feel uncomfortable watching it.

It's so procrastinating. It's been so long and I haven't gotten to the point yet.

I really don't want to see a dog licking, it's too disgusting

Nani? ! It's hard to find a book that's okay, but it's over like this? ! One of the few that writes about the relationship between men and women without being embarrassed. There are many male videos that are quite good, but when it comes to female characters and love, the characters are not three-dimensional and the descriptions of love are so embarrassing that I could dig out a building! I endured the embarrassment and looked at it, but fortunately the editors knew the shortcomings and didn't describe them much 😂. It's just a pity for this book. The arrangement of Goldfinger at the beginning is indeed not prominent enough and the foreshadowing is not enough. Moreover, as mentioned in the previous chapter, there are too many golden nanmu trees and it feels watery. The Camellia oleifera trees planted later are also very watery. After removing the water content, the plot speeds up and gets better, but I didn't expect it to be the conclusion 😂.

Write more professional stuff, don't write emotional lines.

The new book is okay at the beginning, but the old book is completely ruined at the end. I am writing two books at the same time. Do we mean that I can concentrate on writing one?

Why. This book is well written. What a local culture. Humanities or something. Hope the author keeps it up. It's a pity that the results are not very good.

I'll give you my money back🐴 😡😡

Why. I think this book is okay. Anyway, it looks pretty good to me and I quite like it. . It's a pity that the results are so poor.

Holy shit, that's the end of it. Disconnected

I was cut off again and I don't want to pursue this author anymore.

Get rich early, live a leisurely life, and have a sharp mind, right?

I can tolerate the dog licking thing. After all, the protagonist himself has been messy before, but I can't understand this golden nan. He knew that the price was going to rise but he sold it cheaply. He sold it even before the CCTV video was released. It's just disgusting. You have so much money to buy camellia oil. I can understand you to make tea. After all, there is a golden finger. If you buy tea oil, you will be exhausted from asking people to pick the fruit. After spending so much money, it's thankless and exhausting.

After reading a little bit, I feel that the writing is a bit messy and I feel like I have no clue.