
Under One Person: I, Lu Jin, Do Not Deserve to Be Under Another Person
一人之下:我陆瑾不当人下
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- Completed
- Length
- 226k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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It seems that the charm of that slap is gone, and the fun is half lost.
Haha, if you wear Lu Jin, you will become a baby again... Then you will wear a furry Lu Jin... You are already a baby, but it will be the same no matter who you wear. Let's see how you get used to it, right?
A little opinion
Zuo Ruotong's performance in the comics is very strong! Very strong! If it weren't for the gods and spirits to overcome the adverse consequences, this would have to be the "Daying Immortal". Referring to the fundamental concept of the three layers of rebirth, the yin and yang qi are originally created by nature. If you go with it, you will be ordinary, and if you go against it, you will become an immortal. The scene of Zuo Ruotong's death in the end is obviously the third level! But it wasn't complete yet. Immortal Daying failed to stabilize the human form. Finally forced to feather.
One line and one paragraph is not enough. There are a few lines that you can combine into one paragraph and it will be smoother.
To be honest, the Li Muxuan he wrote is very different. It feels like he was written by Lu Jin in the original version. I wouldn't even recognize him unless you said his name was Li Muxuan. Although in the original work, he was clever but was misled by his cleverness, you can't make it look like this, right?
I feel like the author was reading the book Under One Person: Let You Practice the Third Level of Reverse Rebirth and You Become an Immortal. Are you a fan of that book?
Under One Person - Prehistoric Edition
It can be the three levels of reverse rebirth, acquired nature and return to innate nature (primordial universe cauldron) plus divine machine and hundreds of refinements to refine innate spiritual treasures, add three demon gates and one qi to turn three pure beings, or kill three corpses to become a saint. The combination of these two techniques plus improvements should be the strongest among one person.
The author may be changing the outline. Uh, author, help me, don't be too arrogant.
The innate qi in the book should be called "Qi" to have the right flavor and the flavor of monasticism. Qi is a simplified word and does not have that kind of background. I am born with Qi, does it taste like this?
What's going on? What happened? Zuo Ruotong Yuhua can no longer write? What else is going on?
I don't think it's necessary to cut it off
,,,,,, For example, becoming an innate Qi, Tao gives birth to one, giving rise to two, two giving rise to three, three giving rise to all things, and then working backwards to finally achieve Tao, or one Qi turning into three pure things, etc. As a protagonist, how can one's skills and understanding be so inconvenient😜
From Zhang Zhiwei to Li Muxuan, I finally saw Lu Jin. These three books are all very well written.
I also like the character of Lu Jin in this book. At the same time, from the current perspective, the plot of this book will gradually move from the Lu Family Courtyard to the anti-Japanese war. One thing I care about is that Lu Jin in this book seems to be very good at education, so will he have a greater impact on the New Youth Movement? I hope not, because the worldview under one person does not advocate closely connecting the lives of strangers and ordinary people. It is best for the protagonist to make small adjustments at critical moments, not to get involved too deeply, and abandon the main way to become an immortal by cultivating both life and life. This book's treatment of Li Muxuan is quite pleasing, and it gives him a very good future. Finally, I would like to ask the author if there can be no heroine? I have always believed that a person who reaches the end of his contemplation of Dharma under one person is a fairy who will never be affected by the so-called love. Why should such a fairy-like protagonist be defiled by the world? Come on, it seems that this book is very well written so far, I will support it more
Come on, author, I have read several fanfics written by the older generation, and none of them have been finished. Basically, they were eunuchs before the Anti-Japanese War ended. I hope this book can last longer.
The quality of the chapters has improved in recent years, they are beautiful 🤭🤭🤭
Above? Which one is above
If you practice Qi under one person, you will become an immortal.
Let's talk briefly
After reading it so far, the author's rhythm may be to introduce a small plot in chapters 5 to 6 and reach a climax in chapter 60. It is obvious that the writing of Yamamura's section is a bit broken, and some psychological activities are a bit out of place when referring to some anime. The Lu Family Courtyard is a small climax. If it is written well, it is very likely to be signed after a stable update in about a week. The fear is that the plot will suddenly collapse after the climax and return to calm all of a sudden. It will greatly affect the performance of the work, if the author is not making money, but really wants to write a good fan novel. The following plot is likely to be related to Wugensheng and the great changes in Northeast China, but it is recommended to write less or vaguely skip the Anti-Japanese War period. It really doesn't work. The main character is seriously injured. It's a pretty good novel. It would be a pity if it was blocked for some political reasons. However, it is still recommended to write about the feeling of "it's difficult for others to do well" in the novel. (Quietly ask, is there a female protagonist? If the author does not handle the emotional drama properly, it is very likely that this book will be in the palace. I see that in many novels, the relationship between the female protagonist or some female characters is very ambiguous in the early stage. Although there is no problem, it is very uncomfortable.) To conclude here, I am optimistic about the author, and wish the author an early platinum gold medal.
At first glance, I saw it as "not the same as today"
Are you still writing? If you don't write, the book will be deleted. The author 😥
There is a sentence in the comic review that made me nervous. It seems that Daying Xianren will not survive the New Year's Eve. I think it's a bit outrageous to beat Zhang Zhiwei. After all, he is eight or ten years older than Lu Jin.
Well, after looking at it for a while, um, Li Muxuan, does it matter to you whether you become a disciple or not? This is how you practice Taoism. I want to take care of everything. Don't rush into other people's affairs. Matter. Cause and effect.