Comprehensive Comic: Starting from Jobless Reincarnation

Regarding the current atmosphere, there are small poisonous points, but there are no big poisonous points. The author is advised to make patches in the future. It has the flavor of ancient old stuff. The male protagonist cannot be distinguished between male and female (the patch has been changed), pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger (Shadow Power... The patch has been changed, very short), and the cultivation of clones (the patch has been changed, SA O), Innocent body mixed with dragon blood (small problem...) In fact, these are nothing to old people... It just tastes like a TV series from a few years ago, but the forced Demon Slayer (very short, patch) was dissed... I almost gave up the book. In short, there is nothing wrong with it. The author should be the ancient TV series. I read a lot of comics... Nowadays, many things have become poisonous points, but it is good that the author listens to advice, but the selection of materials for the world is also biased towards the old stuff... Except Demon Slayer... The author might as well just write for the revival of literature and art. The current readership feels that there should be more readers of old variety comics, so the world selection Based on the current strength of the protagonist, you can go to ancient comprehensive manga series such as Xingyue, Reo, Rec, Godslayer, and Blood-devouring Raid, or you can later advance to the world view such as Demon Forbidden City and Little Garden (Tears of Time...). These are very classic choices. There have been no such comprehensive manga books for a long time.

I hope it can end normally, this kind of classic anime fandom is almost extinct now

This book is well written and honestly exceeded my expectations. But starting from the time when the protagonist went to bed with Asuna in the sword, the subsequent plots involving this aspect felt to me that they were taking up more and more space. Although I was not disgusted, I saw that the protagonist had just finished it on the first night, and when I thought the plot would be advanced the next day, the protagonist started having sex again during the day. , If possible, write it comprehensively in one go, and then move on to advancing the plot with a little transition. The author has always advanced the plot very quickly, but the erotic writing is very slow, a lot. In fact, you can also write about things like going out for dates during the day to enhance relationships. Can you reduce that aspect of the plot a little later? In addition, it can be seen that the author is really familiar with the plots of each anime. He is a senior two-dimensional character and has his own understanding of each character described. Maybe it is for the pursuit of practical information. The main characters have distinct personalities and characteristics, and the writing is vivid on the page. The secondary characters did not waste any pen and ink on describing their personalities, like In the sword plot, the only characters that impressed me were Asuna, the protagonist, Kirito, and the rest of them basically had no personality traits. In the same demon slayer plot, the only characters that impressed me were Midouko, Touzhu, and Kanroji. Compared to the main world, where everyone has corresponding personality traits, other worlds are a bit obscure. In addition, the author's update speed is really no problem. It takes only a few weeks to write the main plot of an anime. It is full of useful information and is very enjoyable to watch. However, I don't know if it is because it is near the end of the plot, or because some people don't like this part of the anime plot. It is a little impatient when the plot is near the end. If the useful information is too dry, it will feel boring. These small suggestions are actually insignificant. The important thing is how the author wants to write. It is best for the author not to be influenced by others to write at his own pace. Although I have read novels for more than ten years, I can't write novels. The author's book really surprised me. I hope it can continue. If possible, try not to be eunuch or unfinished. (There are really many incidents in bed)

May the great God Luo Qixi bless us, embrace the earth with his dignified divine posture, shine in the sky with the blue eyes of God, influence all things with the warm face of God, purify the soul with the gentle words of God, and now I wish to sleep peacefully in your love. I pray like this, in the holy name of your beloved Son, our Lord Luo Qi Xi, Luo Men!

Don't be like those who are powerful in the shadows. Just because the drama is interesting doesn't mean it is suitable for online writing. Pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger to hide one's identity was something that happened many years ago 😅.

I saw some unemployed fans in the daily guide, so I clicked in, it was so fast

Reputation: 1 The protagonist is not a transvestite. 2 Swordsman is not well written, and there will be no plot like the clone flow in the future. The rest of the time in 3 is time travel in real body. 4 Since everyone doesn't like to see swords, let's write about swords as an episode.

Don't be fooled by the whole movie. It's stomach-ache and disgusting. Apart from the female emoticon and I am a nuclear bomb, what good plot does this anime have? It's both a double hit and a stomach ache. There are too many plots interspersed in the middle, which makes the plot completely incoherent. It makes the protagonist want to be inscrutable and act like a bitch.

Families, skip class and code words for family members 😍😍 Ahem, psychology class, water class is here

The sword arc is really the biggest failure. Since I have written Unemployed, I will write this carefully, and occasionally insert some other short stories in between. It would be better to focus on being unemployed

Sliding away. Writing a book is too difficult now. I really can't bear it. I just thought that someone commented in the book that the brothers can be popped, but they can't be popped like this. It's smelly and long.

What do you mean, you can do behind-the-scenes stuff, but you don't need to cosplay Shadow. Shadow is essentially a funny guy...

It's a bit disappointing that the protagonist is a sissy. She must be at least 1.95 Meters tall and have legs like logs that can kick the enemy's dick. Only such a macho man can be called the protagonist!

Speaking of which, I'm quite curious. How did the author come up with the idea of ​​using a clone to attack the heroine? This type of poisonous point has not been seen for many years. Why do you think of a clone? Just out of curiosity. I want to ask why

By the way, if Rudeus becomes a beautiful girl, then this book will be a masterpiece. A transvestite elder brother and a tomboy second sister. . . . . . . . .

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When I saw Chapter 129, there were a lot of small problems, a lot of typos, and there were also problems with the setting. One-star ghost annihilation involves energy. I don't think about how the author would write about the subsequent high-star rating. I just learned from the setting of Siyang.

Another comic book to read, not bad 🤭

There were a lot of small flaws in the early stage, but it seems that they have been basically changed. However, the problem of giving away Sylphy as a girl is still a big problem and cannot be changed. It affects the perception of the heroine. The author still does not have enough knowledge about the heroine. Some female characters are written in a way that makes people feel that they should be accepted or not. The writing style of comprehensive comics in ancient times is still very comfortable to watch, although other worlds are indeed boring and even the plot is not complete. It seems that they don't want to come to this world to make a fortune and run away. It's not like immersing yourself in the plot But it's very comfortable to watch without a job. The author is somewhat talented

Join the group, the group of family members and authors

The first part was good, but unfortunately in the second half of Sword, I started to feel that the writing and arrangement were going downhill. The emotional scenes feel a bit too much.

I kept raising it and suddenly it was finished 😭

To be honest, the main world (jobless reincarnation) is very well written, but the small world is not interesting. Generally speaking, I was originally attracted by the small world, but in the end I skipped the small world. The quality is not bad.

I saw Su Qing Juan in one breath. Su Qing was bored and didn't know what she was doing The previous one was okay.

No buddy, when I saw the fight with the Dragon God, I wanted to ask why the Seven Stars appeared before the big shift happened. Isn't it because the Seven Stars were summoned to the Jobless World and the magic power fluctuations caused the fight to shift? 😥😥😥

It's a pity, I quite like the setting of transvestite, but I haven't read the complete transvestite manga novel. But I read the comments and said that there were many of this type in ancient times. Am I too late to read the novel?

To be honest, it's well written. Mainly because the daily taste is right. The combat is also well written. The potential is huge. The author is not a monster, is honest and settled, and accumulates readers. There is no problem in eating this bowl of rice.