Romance: I Got the Script and Started Acting Directly

According to my judgment, the author should be a pure newbie writing a book for the first time. Why do you think so? Because it feels very similar to me. I know a little bit about the routines, but not much. The writing is spiritual, but not that exciting. The following is a short reflection on writing from a non-professional perspective, based on the plot of the book so far. It is for my own reference only. I also hope to communicate and learn from the author. 1. Main line. There are two main lines in this book. Career line and emotional line. The career line is to use the romance genre as a springboard to continuously create (transport) otherworldly works and increase your fame. However, one drawback is that, so far, I have created a piano song, a red rose, a piano skewers car, and a Feijian skateboard, but I have not made much progress in my career. Why? Because of the program format. The romance drama in this article did not choose the form of live broadcast, which reduced the content of many audience comments (generally used for making jokes) (this is supplemented by the staff's voice-over in the article (but the performance is not good)). Another benefit of the live broadcast format is that it can be monetized quickly. That is to say, if you create a work in the last chapter, the next chapter will become a hot spot and gain advancement in your career line. This is the source of positive feedback for this plot line. Due to the lack of positive feedback, there is almost no excitement in the career aspect of the plot. The following is my personal opinion: In addition to the live broadcast format, there is also the format of recording and then broadcasting the program, which is the so-called filming and broadcasting. Many film and television entertainments will adopt this form. The author can refer to what I have been watching recently (starting to be a drama star from today) [you don't have to watch them all, just look at the subsequent filming, release, and audience comment framework]. This form will still have a certain lag in the excitement, but it is better than completely missing it. 2. Emotional line The original intention of the emotional line in this article is the contrast between the skin of a scumbag and the inner core of a straight man. This determines the direction of the love line, either pretending to be stupid and wandering around the Shura field, or focusing on the pure love line. I personally have no objections to pure love or harem, and I quite like the current character design of Ai Xi. But starting from the plot, I must point out that the emotional line and the career line are not completely separated, but may complement each other. Take the rich woman and the female star in the female supporting role in the book as an example. The male protagonist got the song in his dream. It doesn't just mean singing it a cappella. There are many difficulties in arranging, harmonizing and releasing it. What should I do? Find a rich woman. The rich woman will give her the rationality of distribution resources and give her a setting with music dreams. Or maybe she just likes to be a cultivator and doesn't like chasing stars and prefers to make a kid famous by herself, okay? Of course, who doesn't like to be favored? For example, arrangement and music, etc., Look for female stars! We are all singers, exchanging arts and collaborating on some duet songs. Isn't this a ready-made plot? In contrast, the heroine's character design is okay, but her positioning is unclear. What is her role? Capital chain? Collaborator? Big housekeeper? To put it mildly, it looks like a vase so far. An ordinary supporting role may only have one role in the plot, but for an important supporting role, she needs to provide a plot-promoting role in addition to emotional value. Well, I'm sorry, maybe that's a bit harsh, but since I just voted for you, I don't feel too guilty. The purpose of those of us who write novels is nothing more than to create an ideal world in our minds, but in fact it is not as easy as imagined. You and I encourage each other.

In recent days, there have been too many romance dramas every day, right?

The author quickly fences with me! ! ! Date me online, and then I will use your chat method to chat with my goddess. I will be a ruthless copy-paste robot. You will be responsible for the mental work, and I will be responsible for the physical work. I will reward you when I succeed.

When I first looked at it: 10% off? Only later did I realize that the writing is really good so far, it is overly natural and the plot is well arranged. I highly recommend it. Also, after reading from scratch, it's now 5:25 in the evening, and there will be 8 a. M. Tomorrow morning, what should I do 😭😭😭😭

The writing is a bit too slow. How long does it take to prepare the plot for 30 days? This should be a branch line rather than the main line. There are some repetitions between chapters. I probably know that the author wants that kind of warm atmosphere, but this has to be updated quickly. It has become boring these days. In fact, it was pretty good at the beginning.

There's nothing exciting about it. I feel like the author looked at the same old Love Sect and wanted to write something special, but the result was that it wasn't as good as the old-fashioned Love Sect.

Summary: Non-toxic and edible! Congratulations, you have discovered a romance novel that respects the reader's intelligence, and has removed the live broadcast method that is very dramatic and exists only to facilitate the author's own reaction. It currently has 190,000 words and is in good progress. The male and female protagonists are in the ambiguous and unknowing stage of unconscious lovemaking. The villain is a little more facial-shaped, but there are no major problems. Love novel Liangcao+

The rhythm is not good and the conflict is not enough. I think it would be much better if you compressed the current 65 chapters to 25 chapters and started posting. There is only character, no conflict, and no story. This is a shortcoming.

Why after reading more than ten chapters, I feel that the writing is incomprehensible and I don't understand the theme.

So verbose, without any ups and downs, just for fun

After reading dozens of chapters, the entire episode was embarrassing, and I have been waiting for your contrast! The result was that it was embarrassing from beginning to end, and the whole article was dull and boring. Goodbye!

How to describe it? At the beginning, I also felt that the plot was quite dragging. It was not the kind where every plot was interesting, and it didn't seem like the male protagonist was a heartthrob. By Chapter 77, only Ai Xi had a crush on the male protagonist, and it was a mutual affection. Although it felt a bit bland, it was like drinking boiled water. You can't say how delicious it is, but you can't live without it. The overall evaluation is that this is an above-average book among romance novels. If it is longer, it is worth reading!

By the end of Chapter 27, the plot of the heroine was okay, it was semi-slow-burning, but the male protagonist was too entangled in the story, especially in Chapter 27, whether the liquidated damages were millions or tens of millions. After I sent the text message, I didn't want to read it at all.

The more I read, the less I can stand it. The protagonist of a diaosi who is a literary young man is too realistic. Is it okay for the author to not put himself into the protagonist when writing a book😁

Girls should be careful when teasing each other. If they joke too much, they will be regarded as mentally ill. Boys also don't like casual women.

Great! But your update is too slow, and it will be copied and imitated soon! It's better to update two hundred chapters first and then take a day off to rest!

Shan heroine Ai Xi, the author's Ai Xi is really good, but it's a pity that she is Shan, and there is no place for the rich sister Liu Qian, so the author gave sister Liu Qian to me, please don't compete with me 😍😌😌

The plot is too draggy! Not interesting

I saw the latest, the protagonist has a girlfriend, the single female protagonist is very good. How are Wang Li and Zhong going to deal with it?

You're driving so fast, you won't be caught by the traffic police, right?

Update quickly. If you don't update 7.8.9.10 In a day, how can you become a god?

The writing can be good👏Can you tell the story of whether the heroine is Xiao Ai or whether it is dual heroines (๑•̌.•̑๑)ˀ̣ˀ̣

The protagonist is not mentally retarded and has no aura of intelligence! Single heroine. The heroine is really cute!!! Have fun and have dog food! If I lied to others, I wouldn't be able to poop for three days.

I'm curious about one thing... When will this crappy variety show be aired? ? ?

It's quite interesting, and the characters are quite distinct. The romance part is okay. From time to time there are also some saucy remarks. However, after the drama series ends, the entertainment genre seems to fall into the routine of other entertainment dramas and become unsightly. I don't know if the author has planned it well.

There is no content, a few women are too boring

I haven't written about the interaction between the male and female protagonists for several days. What's the point of writing about the career line every day? It's just a bit of fun!

Pretty good, damn the sour smell of love

Although it is only temporary.

Otherwise, my monthly ticket wouldn't be enough, do you understand what I mean?