League of Legends Descends on Douluo Dalu

The Spirit Hall should also have a Kyle.

It feels like there's no main character; they just added some special characters and developed new storylines.

Why does this feel so much like Wang Situ's style...?

This is outrageous. Given the Sword Demon's personality, shouldn't he have just taken over the body? He keeps talking about a deal. The Sword Demon isn't like Laasit. And even if Laasit were, he'd probably have taken over Zhu Qing's body long ago. The reason he hasn't taken over Kayn is because Kayn himself is awesome, let alone the Sword Demon. I can't stand it anymore, I'm leaving.

The idea of ​​adding Douluo Continent to the Alliance is pretty good, but adding Crimson Moon feels like a mistake. The book states that all the Crimson heroes are from Valoran, but many others are set as natives of Douluo Continent. This isn't a major issue, but the Crimson heroes start with level 99 combat power plus more than 10 other Crimson heroes and immediately begin conquering the…

The writing is poor, there are many typos, the perspective shifts are poorly developed and chaotic, the only readable part is the wild idea.

This is an ensemble piece with too many characters; one chapter seems to cover every single one. The idea is good, but the writing is truly terrible.

What merit or ability does that guy from Douluo Continent possess to allow you to elevate him from the sludge of a stinking ditch into a floor tile of the Heavenly Court?

Without a main character, it's too chaotic. Even if you make it a behind-the-scenes story with a main character, at least there's a general direction.

Isn't this kind of subject matter only written about eunuchs and princes?