Immortality Begins with Cultivating Immortality in the World of Martial Arts

The protagonist of Immortality is the most difficult to write. It is difficult to write a high-level and enjoyable novel. It can only be written to be invincible and enjoyable. If it is not invincible, only a small number of people with special quirks will like to read it. The upper line is not high, and the lower line is very low.

The beginning is a bit awkward, and the lyricism is not good at first. Tell the story first. There is no character recognition, no emotional resonance at all.

Others have been practicing skin for a long time. The protagonist has nothing but the talent of immortality and no master. Then he spends four years training his bones... Are other people in this world idiots?

The pace is too slow. If you can keep going, people will watch. But if you like this kind of thing, you probably won't read new articles very much. Most of the people who search for recommendations all day long still like fast-paced and refreshing articles. This number of words has not been published yet. Either the results are very good and there is great potential for climbing mountains and ridges, or it is very aggressive. Of course, this may not be the author's intention.

It's very flavorful. It's good to just keep going at this pace. Take your time.

Compared with ordinary longevity-style novels, it is a bit different. The logic is very clear at present, but the pace can be faster. Also, the role of Jin Sanli should be considered more than half, don't waste it, Ye Shuang is also the same. The protagonist's character is not toxic at the moment, but it would be better to be more distinct.

It's hard to say. I've seen enough weird things. No one else can do it, but you can. You are the biggest weird thing.

Where does the protagonist get the courage to sell blood to grow roots or sell it on the black market? Is he afraid that he will not die? No common sense. .