Ex Machina

No matter how well written this book is, it still won't be popular because the two protagonists are still male and female. Readers who can read stories about female protagonists on men's channels will usually abandon the book when they see a male protagonist. Readers who read about male protagonists will abandon the book when they see you have a female protagonist's perspective. Can the rest of the people make you popular?

It's a very good book. I was originally attracted by the "female protagonist". After all, there were too few female robots. But after seeing the male protagonist, my interest was instantly extinguished. Then I saw in the comment area that the proportion of roles between the female protagonist and the male protagonist was wrong, and that the male protagonist had too many roles. I didn't want to click on this book at that time. After that, this book languished on the bookshelf for a long time. I also complained about it in the comment area and communicated with the author. The author was also very positive. Even though I have never read the book, he was willing to communicate with me and make changes. This is more than many authors. It is better than those authors with poor mentality. For example, authors who are irresponsible will never correct their mistakes even if they know they are wrong. Another example is authors with a heart of glass who will provide a one-stop service of directly banning and deleting posts. In short, I like authors who are willing to communicate and change. I just picked it up again after the Chinese New Year, and I have just read the second volume. To be honest, this book is still defeated by the fact that the first protagonist is a female protagonist. The character chart of the character bar was opened too early, and the female protagonist and male protagonist were finalized early. If this book was given a group portrait from the beginning, and the female robot was the core, it should not be a problem to order a few thousand for the first time. What a pity... But if it weren't for the female machine, I would never have clicked on this book 😁 Because Infinite Horror became a big hit more than ten years ago, and then Infinite Flow was the most popular genre at that time. Infinite Flow books were written one after another, and Infinite Flow was so involved that the first chapter determined life and death. It was really terrifying.

At the starting point, the book with male and female protagonists is already a niche. Even if there is no emotional drama, but there is still a male protagonist, it is even more niche. I wish the author this book will not explode to death.

After reading dozens of chapters, I was attracted by the introduction. I thought it was a female protagonist going on a solo career, but then a male protagonist appeared. Male and female protagonists? Difficult. It is not impossible to have two protagonists in a male channel, but the main point of view is the female protagonist, and the female protagonist does not have as many scenes as him. He also makes the important decisions in the plot, the character's actions, and the advancement of the plot are basically all based on him. The role and priority of the protagonist are not as important as Kevin. Let me watch a man show off his power in front of me from the perspective of the heroine? Or on a male channel? I also watch female videos, and I've also seen the kind where the female protagonist has a harem, but the male protagonist doesn't have as many scenes as the female protagonist, and the plot is mainly driven by the female protagonist. The behavior of the male protagonist and male supporting character in that kind of novel is also dominated by the female protagonist, with clear priorities. Even if there is no emotional line between the male and female protagonists, even if the role of the male protagonist will be weakened in the later stage, you can persuade many people away in the early stage. The Beginner's World is too long. After dozens of chapters, the male protagonist is stronger than the female protagonist in all aspects. His strength and intelligence are suppressed. It would be okay if it were from his perspective, but he is not. In men's videos, it is really uncomfortable for readers to see a man pretending to be cool in front of him from a female perspective. If there are too many people who are trying to persuade you to quit, but there are fewer people who are pursuing your studies, your grades will be bad, you will not be recommended, and you will be seen by fewer people ~ a vicious cycle. Please give me some personal and extreme opinions. If you don't like them, please don't comment. If you ask me, if you can't change it now, just write him to death. By the way, you can use his death to train the protagonist. When the protagonist improves in all aspects, you can resurrect him. Or reduce him to a tool who controls the overall situation but only makes suggestions. Don't let him make choices. In short, the priorities must be clear, and the protagonist must be the main character. Or, if the author really insists on having two protagonists, he will change the title of the book to indicate that this is a book with two protagonists. This will lose some readers, but it can also attract some who are interested in the two protagonists.

It's well written, but the main god can't cure congenital frailty 🙂, which feels a bit fake. You can also remove that negative talent. Or why does the heroine have negative talents? Innate deficiency? Or when awakening the talent, all conditions cannot be met and can only be partially awakened, thus lowering the body constitution, leading to the birth of negative talents. 🙂 If the physical condition cannot be changed temporarily, a mechanical exoskeleton without a power source can be used to assist movement.

The author of Chapter 198 has some discrepancies in his knowledge of sniper rifles, and there is a word limit in this chapter. I will list them here First of all The combat position of precision shooter is a concept proposed by the US military around 2000. It refers to the position in the combat team responsible for following the movement of the team to shoot at long-distance high-threat targets during combat, which is what we used to call sharpshooters. This new combat position also brings out a new type of firearm-precision rifle, also called a marksman rifle. How to distinguish between precision marksman rifles and small-caliber sniper rifles: First point: Look at the model. Most of today's precision rifles are specialized branches based on military-issued rifles. They basically retain the main part of this series of rifles. Only the barrel, handguard, and other ancillary parts are modified. There are also modular rifles that are modified with special precision rifle modules. Second point: Look at the caliber. Precision rifles usually use small-caliber rifle bullets, US 5.56, Russian 5.45, British 4.85, German 4.6, Chinese 5.8. But there are also some precision rifles that use 7.62 Rifle bullets, which need to be distinguished based on the first point. The third point: official positioning. Some sniper rifles with fully automatic rifle structures are now classified as precision rifles by various countries, such as the Chinese 88 sniper, Russian SVD, etc. The second question is: how to define a sniper rifle Sniper rifles are divided into anti-material sniper rifles and precision sniper rifles. The only difference between the two is the caliber. The biggest difference between a sniper rifle and a fully automatic rifle is the shooting method. Sniper rifles use bolt-action shooting, which can be subdivided into rotary bolt-action and reciprocating bolt-action. Intuitive description of the rotary-pull bolt action: After shooting, the shooter needs to pull up the bolt handle to unlock the bolt, pull back to eject the shell, push forward to reset, and press down on the bolt handle to lock. Intuitive description of the reciprocating bolt action: After shooting, the shooter needs to pull the bolt back to eject the shell and push it forward to reset. Both modes have their own advantages. It is recommended that Baidu does not describe them in detail. The two bolt-action modes lead to different differences in the structure of the firearm. The swing-pull bolt cannot be used for rapid fire, and only supports three shooting modes: manual, semi-automatic, and rapid fire. The rear-pull bolt action can support all-mode shooting but has poor sealing. The sniper rifle has four shooting modes, manual, semi-automatic, fully automatic and rapid fire. Manual shooting: After a single shot, the shooter needs to manually eject the shell and load the gun before shooting the next time. Semi-automatic: After a single shot, the shooter needs to release the trigger to outside the trigger stroke and then press it again for the next shot. Full-automatic: Adjust the firearm shooting mode to full-automatic, press the trigger to continue shooting. Rapid Fire: For sniper rifles that use a trigger safety, after turning on the trigger safety, you can hold down the trigger and simply load the gun quickly to continue shooting. The above is what the author asks in this chapter. There is another little knowledge point. The sniper rifle relies on a gas-guided structure for fully automatic shooting. The gas generated during shooting pushes the reciprocating bolt to complete the ejection and reset. M2000 and Type 99 use a floating barrel. During semi-automatic shooting, the gas pushes the barrel back to complete the ejection. The rotating bolt does not affect its rapid shooting. In this chapter, I confused the difference between manual shooting and semi-automatic shooting when asking questions and explaining. I hope the author can keep up the good work and write better and better👌🏻

I saw many book friends leaving comments about why they don't go to women's videos. Here's an explanation. First of all, this is a plot novel. There is no extreme emotional tension between men and women. The main attraction is the adventure in the plot world. Secondly, regarding the heroine in the novel, if it is a male protagonist with three physical attributes and a frail sissy, first of all, the author will not be able to stand it, let alone write it down. The female protagonist is sassy and capable of fighting. She is not just a vase waiting for the male protagonist to rescue her. There are a lot of female videos who want to see the emotional limits stretched. Although the heroine Julie feels that her role is less than that of the male protagonist Kevin, there is nothing you can do about it. You cannot expect someone who will die at the first touch to rush to the front and fight. Almost one or two changes in the world heroine Julie will make everyone feel fresh and new. Also in terms of plot, probably the third reincarnation world, which is the third volume, is Silent Hill. I don't know how my friends expect the technology stream to survive in this kind of world. Also, why did you choose Resident Evil 2-3, the remake, for the first world? Because here is an artifact from a low-difficulty world. Friends who have ideas can leave a comment, and if they guess the author correctly, they will receive a red envelope. Thank you for reading the long review.

I want to know why the heroine does not go to female channels, but to go to male channels to hang out?

I looked at combat-type protagonists with low luck, low charm, and low spirit. Finally, I have a protagonist with low physical fitness, which is perfect. The writing is smooth and the plot is refreshing. I loved it.

Brother, just write ten or twenty chapters in the initial world. Don't do too much, otherwise it will be really hard to watch.

The two protagonists were not popular at the beginning, and even among all online novels, they are the niche among the niche.

I finally know what that weird feeling is. The protagonist is a female protagonist, but the thigh is a male protagonist. Although this situation is very common in daily life, it is very strange to read novels like this.

After sorting out the outline today, I found that the world of reincarnation is mostly focused on the technology side, with a few other categories. We are now collecting your favorite games (best for stand-alone games), movies (best for logical reasons but dangerous), animations (best for animated movies, like Naruto with too many episodes, the author doesn't have that much time to watch), and TV series (reasonable logic but dangerous plots, and prefer American dramas, British dramas, etc., After all, domestic TV dramas are about love in addition to falling in love.). Attention! ! ! This post is strictly prohibited from watering, it will be effective for a long time. "Name" plus the reasons for recommendation by book friends, especially the places where you are unhappy, or the people who are particularly annoying, it is best if you want to find places that are difficult to deal with. Once again, meaningless trolling is prohibited and the author will delete the comments. Although I don't want to say it, reading is very important for a new book. The author still hopes that book friends who like this book will read the novel when they have time. Currently, three chapters are updated every day, one chapter each in the morning, middle and evening. Recently I have been thinking about updating 10,000 words per day, but it's just that it's so cold that my hands have developed frostbite. Dear book friends, please pay attention to keep warm and avoid frostbite. The author will take seriously the suggestions of every book lover who likes this book.

I hope you all like the pictures I found recently... I just want to raise a daughter who is a female sniper with a technical side.

It must have been ten years ago. Back then, the first batch of Infinite Horror fanfics that became popular were those about science and technology. Unfortunately, it was just a gust of wind. Only two or three books became popular. The rest were all about showing off imagination and settings, and it was hard to read them. After such a long time, I still remember how amazing I was when I first saw the technology side, using the genes of mutants and supermen to compile biochemical war beasts, and using the mechanical sea of ​​the Terminator to flood everything.

I'm similar to the people above. No matter how good you are at writing, writing this kind of writing will definitely be difficult to gain popularity. It's niche. First of all, it's the sense of substitution. There are also novels written by men, all of which are single, multiple, none, and last. You can't cast a lot of male supporting characters or protagonists, otherwise, you know, if you want to cast a lot of female supporting characters, the smell of lily will be very strong. I feel weird in an environment where I am trying to survive. Secondly, there is the issue of perspective. I basically watch male protagonists, after all, I have a sense of substitution. Occasionally, I watch something new. The heroine's stories are basically based on the mentality of raising a daughter, but they are not long-term, and they are basically daily and heartwarming. The big heroine, in the male channel, has no audience. In life, since you can be beautiful alone, what does it have to do with me? You ignore me, I ignore you, you and I are well on our own, and you ask me to watch someone... Pretend, I'm sorry, I don't understand, and I don't have any sense of empathy. To be honest, most of the stories on male videos with female protagonists are based on the mentality of raising a daughter. If you want to adjust the plot flow, but you don't have a sense of immersion, how can you immerse yourself in the plot? Do you want to play with machinery? It would be better to say that the AI of a certain technological civilization enters the body of a woman, or that it mechanically ascends and transfers consciousness into a computer or something like that, but this is the main god's space, do you guys pass it? Forget it, I'm not writing novels, you can go ahead and worry about it. Well, from a psychological point of view, men are more rational than emotional, and women are more emotional than rational Cheng Xin of the Three-Body Problem, hahaha, women may have many advantages, but they have very little courage to make decisions, so I still read the heroine's novel with the mentality of raising a daughter.

I took a look at the female-biased videos. The early stage has a bit of a reverse harem flavor. Plus, it doesn't directly talk about single marriage. It is recommended to be cautious.

Don't think blindly, why do those female channels come to male channels? Why are there male protagonists in the female protagonists? Generally speaking, people who say these things should read their comments. Don't believe even a single punctuation mark in what these people say. Have they ever left any comments in your chapter? Nine times nine, no, I haven't voted for you, have I? Hey-hey. Don't be misled. What's the point of trusting someone who can't even finish one chapter of your book? Don't change the article easily, it looks pretty good now. Cherish those readers who have been reading silently, this is your greatest wealth. Although these old guys generally don't get excited when reading.

By the way, can you add some separators to your transitions?

The world of martial arts is a failure. It just depends on the system of the two protagonists, one on the magic side and the other on the technology side. Which one is related to martial arts? Even if you want to write about system collision, you can't do it so early. It's really boring for novices to peck each other. Don't talk about randomness. I said before that the Lord God will maximize the use of resources to help people grow. It's okay not to give a world with technology, but give a world with low productivity and low martial arts. Before, I said that I would go to the world to grab technology. What kind of technology is there in the martial arts world? You can write about Star Wars, Warhammer, Destiny, etc. No matter how bad it is, you can write about near-future technology such as Call of Duty, Fallout, or 2077. If you write about martial arts, it is just torture. Furthermore, there is a fatal flaw in the heroine's system. Do you have any skills related to electronic intrusion and defense? You can't always use your computing power to bully primitive people in a low-tech world, right? The suggestion I give is to end the martial arts within ten chapters and go to the next world to find the fate. The light energy system is suitable for the male protagonist and can be resurrected to extend the life of the female protagonist.

The logic makes no sense at all. The items and skills the male protagonist exchanged without any communication with the female protagonist are all in the auxiliary direction. Is this possible? The first time he reincarnates in the world, without increasing his combat power, he is sure that the female protagonist will be able to hold on?

Like the cover 🙂~

Very good writing style and ideas, but the only pity is that there is a male protagonist. It would be okay if the character was written from the perspective of the female protagonist like the introduction and title of the book. But there is always a problem just because there is an extra male protagonist It is a pity. If it were written from the perspective of the female protagonist, the results would not be so bad.

I've got it all for you~ Come on and write

I just watched the beginning. Is the protagonist taking a legion-style mechanic route similar to that of "Insect Swarm"?

How many words does the author plan to write? I feel like you're going to be a eunuch