The Portable Space of Red Mansion

After reading the latest chapter, I think it is quite good and interesting, but I don't know why it is not popular. Maybe the little eDonkey at the beginning was a bit abrupt, but in my opinion, there is no big problem in being purely funny; in my opinion, the only big problem is that no matter what the protagonist does, the emperor can accept it happily, which is a bit exaggerated. The attitude of the emperor is understandable, but the emperor's heart is too big. It has flaws, but overall it's a good story.

It would be a joke to ride a small electric donkey to charge at the cavalry group. First, it is not high enough to cut down people. Second, it is not heavy enough and will fall to the ground if it collides. Third, it will slip when running on the grassland.

I don't know why so few people write about the well-known Riverside cross-fired breech-loading gun. The only thing that needs to be tinkered with is mercury fulminate, which is not a high-tech technology. It only makes propellant. The bullets are copper-backed paper-wrapped bullets. The amount of copper is very small. It relies on the expansion of soft copper to obtain a few points. It is almost as airtight as modern firearms. The originator of the double-barreled shotgun is an artifact that can truly be made in the 16th century. Imagine four hundred double-barreled shotguns, fired twice per second. Counting the reloading time, it can be fired at least 24 times per minute. What a sharp artifact the Gongbian is.

To be honest, the eDonkey is a failure. Its only advantage over horses is that it doesn't need to be raised.

Your score will be reduced if you write this content as an introduction. It makes me dizzy to read such a long list.

Battery-powered cars often get stuck on concrete roads. How can they be invulnerable on the grassland?

666 Ah! There are several brothers, including all the Jia sisters, don't forget Xichun 😍

The introduction was drawn up and the writing was okay. As expected, the male protagonist in Red Mansion is still tough when he joins the army.

This introduction... I didn't know that confiscating the family and exterminating the clan were all done together. It doesn't matter if the surname is Li 😅😅😅😅😅

I've finished reading it, and I'm asking for another book. If you're a fan of Red Mansions, if you want a harem, don't be too new to it. No matter how well written it is about a single woman, it doesn't matter. I've read Wan Tian Qing and Wu Liang, please. Please recommend it. I'm in a book shortage. And Happy New Year 2024! I wish all book friends good fortune and good health!

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Just read it and don't get too carried away. Even so, could the author be more careful? Is it all logical? Are the sentences clearer? Ancient history pays attention to rules and etiquette. Can we make it more suitable for the situation? ? ? ?

Battery car? 😏 At least it has to be an electric three-wheeler, it's more stable.

This introduction is frivolous? Nonsensical funny version? I don't even dare to click in to look at the catalog.

Li Yu is the late master of the Southern Tang Dynasty in history and a famous poet. It would be best for the author not to use famous historical figures as the protagonist's name, as it would be a bit awkward.

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More, nonsensical ones are good too

Many plots jump around, as do many relationships. For readers who have not read the original Dream of Red Mansions, it is very uncomfortable to read. The content is piece by piece and incoherent. It can be said that it is unrealistic, but on the contrary, it is pieced together and gives you a headache...

What is the use of this space? ? I wrote a space at the beginning, but there was no space at the end!

The rest is basically acceptable, but the author's various random changes to the timeline are nonsense.

The dialogue is full of "clearness"😥

What is written at the back is nondescript, and it has come out of any management office. Damn it, you are reading an ancient fictional article. You are a modern product, and it looks awkward.

I am recommending the book "Red Mansion: Overlord of the North". The author's writing is getting better and better. Although there are some shortcomings, it is worth quenching my thirst and the creativity is good.

I have only read twenty chapters, but I found it very interesting. The protagonist is not aggrieved, so I gave it a monthly pass. I hope it can be maintained in the future. As for some unreasonable parts, it is a good article after all. As long as it is not outrageous and uncomfortable, there is no need to nitpick.

The picture of the character sheet, you are ugly because of it, right?

After reading this picture, I almost understand why it has not been updated for 14 days. True 6

Too little is not enough to read. What route does this book take? The identity of the protagonist as former prince and later prince is already known to the emperor. Why would the emperor be assured that the protagonist has real abilities and is in charge of the army?

Will you accept Qin Keqing? If you don't accept it, moving her timeline back will be a failure.