Lord of the God of Zi

After reading this, I only had one thought, crazy.

The introduction is not good, and nothing stands out. In short, it is not eye-catching and has nothing to impress the readers. The author is enjoying himself and does not think about things from the readers' perspective. The title of the book is average (actually very bad), and there is nothing to tell. Since you choose a fantasy theme, it is still a traditional fantasy like an abyss. As a newcomer, don't bother with the four-character book titles from ancient times, and look at the rankings for inspiration. For example, a book title like "Absorbing the Mana of the Gods to Strengthen the Body at the Beginning" will do... The beginning of the book is all unnecessary nonsense, just start the plot directly from the dynasty. From the perspective of the protagonist (so that the reader can have a sense of involvement), enter the current scene with contradictory events (without contradiction, the reader has no temper to watch), and then explain the protagonist's current situation and special abilities (Goldfinger: something that surpasses other characters, such as a certain ability, own IQ, Ding Ding Ding system, Grandpa Ring.) Don't make a long statement at the beginning, but streamline, streamline, streamline! No, just imitate your favorite book! The protagonist has to deal with events, and readers come to see how your protagonist handles events. Settings, supporting characters, and scenery are all reduced. If you have to write it, then condense it to the extreme and then write it out. Things must have a role when they appear. The most straightforward understanding is that this thing highlights the protagonist and will highlight the protagonist's next reaction and what to do. Don't write other personal pronouns, and don't write words like man, boy, girl, or old man. Use the name directly, directly enter the name of this character! There are also paragraphs, which need to be divided into more paragraphs. Several lines of sentences are squeezed together, which makes the reader tired. It is recommended to have three or four punctuation marks per sentence, and then press the Enter key directly to start a new line. Hmm... It is recommended to imitate the books on the ranking list... Don't work behind closed doors, there are many problems. Originally it was difficult to sign a contract on this subject matter, but it became even more difficult when there were so many basic problems. How about... Take a look at how Dou Po Cang Qiong is written? Fantasy... It's hard for newcomers to write. I will give you a logic... Chapter 1, you have to think of a scenario. Who will be in this scene? There cannot be many people who can speak. What kind of trouble will the protagonist encounter, how will he deal with it, the appearance of the supporting characters, and how to highlight the protagonist (highlighting the protagonist's personality, highlighting the protagonist's situation, highlighting the protagonist's abilities, etc.). Don't write more than you can explain in one sentence. The opening chapter shows that every inch of land is precious. Based on the perspective of the protagonist, the supporting characters are all tool men. The beginning... Direct time, place and person. Then the cause passes through the effect. The protagonist needs to break the situation (overcoming difficulties, in any aspect: emotions, strength, encounters, etc.) How can friendly supporting characters help the protagonist and highlight the protagonist's current situation. How the enemy supporting character will suppress the protagonist, what he will do and what he will say. .... There is a long way to go. The evaluation is a bit harsh. If you don't like it, please delete it.

Come on, come from the group, please support me 😁

Brother, let me give you a suggestion. For someone like me, the first word of your book title can easily turn me away... It's not that I don't search for your book, it's that I can't find it!

Everyone is welcome to come and read. I will draw people in the comment area and monthly voting area of ​​the book to give you a gift 🙂

The author still has a long way to go. If I guess correctly, the author's Chinese scores should be good. Come on come on.

After reading it, the author's writing is much better than mine. Come on, the story is just not that exciting at the moment.

I suggest you change the title of the book, because the first word is really difficult to understand.

From the group, based on my many years of reading experience, to be honest, the beginning is too long-winded. It doesn't say anything but just talks about how the male protagonist is difficult and how he has his own ideals. You have to narrate the story first and then express it, which gives people the feeling of specifically emphasizing the male protagonist.