In the Wasteland of the Deep Sea, I Raise Dragons

I didn't read it later, but when I heard that the system can communicate in Chapter 3, I lost interest at all. To be honest, if the author doesn't make changes here, he will eliminate many readers.

New authors should not write emotional dramas or write them off in one go. If the relationship development is not reasonable, they will be scolded for being unable to walk when they see women. If they are too nice to women, they will be scolded as a licking dog. If the heroine is not strong, they will be scolded as a vase. If the heroine does not become a supporter, they will be scolded as a white-eyed wolf. If you do not write well, you will be thankless. Personal advice.

Suddenly someone commented "The system dialogue is not good," "Why hasn't the dragon scene appeared yet?" ... Let me make a statement here The system can only speak in the first few chapters of this book, probably the first three or four chapters (three chapters), and then it will be formatted Will it come out again? Most likely not, because it is templated, but new functions will appear in the system later, because there are still two empty areas, which is caused by insufficient system energy (it feels a bit awkward to say this). Then there is the problem of dragons. Because the plot is slow and the protagonist's hand is still small, it has no effect in the early stage, so there are not many scenes. Besides, I am also a novice, so... I will try my best to speed up later (I am not sure, I can't grasp the balance) The summary is that my ability is not good. ... My book does have many shortcomings. I can clearly feel it myself. The plot is slow, the plot is not exciting and so on. There are also some miscellaneous things. ... Here, I would like to say sorry to the readers. ... There is another issue, that is, the update problem: There are a lot of things happening recently, so there is a high probability that the update will be in the afternoon and evening. …… I'm really sorry, I'm really sorry

Let me try a function

Come on! I strive to continue to have perfect attendance!

It feels okay. Anyway, I like it. Although some parts are unreasonable, I have collected it. Come on!

No more dragon scenes? Selling dog meat for sale?

The first few chapters are not attractive and make readers unable to read them.

It looks uncomfortable, can't your skills be easier to understand? If you can introduce it in two words, you must have four words to introduce it. It looks awkward to a group of people. Doesn't the probing technique sound good? It has to be some kind of system where the player has eyes, an injury-adaptive body, a premonition of a dream quality, a physical weakness and a terrible condition, it's really embarrassing to look at.

First of all, sorry for the readers who came over. I feel like I am constrained by the world view I designed. If a dragon appears, it will probably have to go into the sea. However, because I think the entire world is submerged by sea water, unless you go to the higher ground area before, everywhere under the sea will be desolate and dark (the sea is too deep for light to reach, so I am considering whether to abandon this setting). After all, fighting in such an empty place in the sea, with almost no buildings and all dangerous places, is a bit uncertain. (There is nothing to borrow, it's just fighting with sea beasts or something) Therefore, there are only a few dragon scenes (also because I don't have enough writing power. I want to finish writing the present first. If I can persist, I will open a copy later, the kind of copy of the new world under the sea) Also, it seems that I may not have figured out the combat power levels in the book until now ( I am a little confused as I write) Level: [Hazard] [Danger] [Disaster] [King]... Race level: [Common] [Good] [Excellent] [King]... When the two are paired together, the combat power is a lot messed up (there is not much introduction in the article, so it is normal to be confused) In the end, I am sorry, not only is the book not good, but the update is also slow. I'm so sorry! ! ! Summary: Insufficient writing skills, parallel imports, slow updates, The book is not good, and the author's cultural level is not good either

Just take a look..., I don't know how to anthropomorphize

Come on, come on, the subject matter is very good, just sharpen your writing skills slowly

Not even Baopi Long, don't look at it!

After reading Chapter 71, it's not very poisonous, so it's considered a good herb. I've been liking semi-solo players like the protagonist recently.

I just checked for typos in the book. I didn't expect that there were basically typos in every chapter, but most of them have been corrected now.

It's Tuesday... Please read it~ Please come and read it! (Loudly)

The sentences are unclear and punctuation marks are used indiscriminately.

It's so slow to write, it would be nice if it could be unfolded a little faster

Come on, author, this book should be regarded as paving the way.