Daming Jianghu, I Can Die and Turn Back

The protagonist is really little Zhuge. Every time he calculates it wrong, he relies on throwing coins to revive Mang.

The protagonist who originally had a free golden finger was turned into a heroic character who serves the country and the people by you, the author. He dedicated himself to the people of the Ming Dynasty and died. I am so tired of watching it.

I would like to remind the author that the book is a good book, but there is a problem with the rhythm of your writing. Things come one after another, the protagonist has no chance to breathe, and the readers feel tired while reading. ………… Now the whole book is basically a one-man show by the protagonist, and the main plot is completely "the enemy comes to the door - the protagonist is killed - reborn to fight back". It is recommended to add some plots such as "managing power, establishing a sect, making friends, and becoming acquainted with beauty" as lubrication. 👌Although it is a martial arts novel, the protagonist, as a time traveler, always brings some small shocks to the world from modern society, whether it is a new system or invention, in short, don't kill and kill all the time.

This book is worth platinum money, author, update soon! ! !

It's a waste to do such awesome things just for water numbers.

The recent stories are not good to watch. Brother Pig's Foot's enemy is a disciple of the Sword God, and a group of people in the arena gathered around to compliment him. Brother Pig's Foot is a disciple of the Sword Immortal and everyone knows it. The Sword Immortal is as famous as the Sword God, and the Sword Immortal has no property and is barefoot! With a bad reputation, in a martial arts world, people are not afraid of a top master who is not taken into consideration, but are they afraid of another local or foreign top master? ! Even if Senior Brother Pigfoot has a bad reputation and doesn't have any friends, isn't there someone who wants to curry favor with the Sword Immortal by offering him help in times of need? My senior brother's family has been suppressed for many years and has taken refuge with the enemy and the demonic sect. The elders in the family are shameless, but what about the young people? Isn't there a passionate and impulsive person? He also said that Brother Pigfoot is arrogant in front of outsiders and humorous in front of his own people. Aren't his family members his own people? Then what do you think the family is doing? How could he be framed? How come you don't even have a supporter if you have feelings for your family?

The writing is good. I would like to make a suggestion. Can you change Nan Jiyun's name? Nan Jiyun in history was a loyal and brave man, and I think he should be respected.

The writing at the beginning is okay, it talks about the growth of small characters, and the sense of involvement is okay. In Chapter 115, after King Ning raised his army, his writing style changed suddenly and he turned to military writing, writing about city defense, war, and group portraits. After that, I will change the map to fight against the Japanese, and I will probably take the dynasty hegemony route in the future. It doesn't suit your taste, so throw it away!

Such pressure on the protagonist? You can either make a small point with your golden fingers, write it as a stand-up, and write about officialdom under the guise of a martial arts hero while suppressing the protagonist, which is not beneficial at all.

The name Wu Chen doesn't sound good, it's not as good as the previous one

I feel that Wudang Sect's martial arts are underestimated. A martial arts master that can be called Shaolin can't have only one super pure Yang Wuji Kung Fu to support its appearance. And judging from the description in the original work, Pure Yang Wuji Kung Fu is not just a simple one-third Nine Yang Magic Kung. After Zhang Sanfeng's expansion, it has become an internal skill that is not weaker than Nine Yang Magic Kung at all. It is just that it is not as good as Nine Yang Magic Kung Fu in terms of Yang, and its therapeutic effect on Xuan Ming Divine Palm is not that good.

Suddenly there are so many unique beauties written about, something is wrong. If the harem is opened after more than 300 chapters, the harem party will not make any money, and pure love warriors will abandon the book. The gain outweighs the loss. 😅Although I don't care, this book is really well written and I hope you won't lose your subscription because of it.

Finished reading. Although most of the protagonists rely on unlimited lives, but after reading one word - it's refreshing.

The Prince Ning's Rebellion chapter looks quite enjoyable, but the second chapter about avenging the senior brother made people very irritated.

The book I read recently is considered a well-written one. The author's writing skills are excellent. Some of the scenes are gripping and can arouse the reader's mood and emotions, giving good emotional feedback. Come on⛽. A place to ask some questions: After the rebellion of Prince Ning, the protagonist seems more like being pushed by the environment and the plot, more like "forced by the situation" to do a series of things. Gradually, I lost my unique perspective and influence on the current situation and environment as a time traveler (with a good golden finger), and I fell from a better state like "everyone is drunk and I am sober" to "a member of all living beings". I was forced to do something by the "power", and the special point of being a time traveler that can make people shine is increasingly weakened. Personally, I suggest that the author can give full play to the advantages of golden-finger time travellers, from the ideological structure (a more optimal or more beneficial way of doing things for themselves and themselves based on reality, etc.) + Organizational power (the time traveler does not build a force to act as a behind-the-scenes force to cause trouble, it is simply a waste of the preferential treatment given by God, and there can be more highlights) + a new system based on facts (let the time traveler To maximize the advantages, it is not too much to be an egoist while serving the country and the people through the fictional Ming Dynasty environment) + all kinds of inventions and creations that are beneficial to the people and self-interest (grasp the sense of proportion) + travel with the United States (whether it is a harem depends on the author himself, I personally suggest that in an ancient environment, it is better to follow the trend 😁) The author's ability to write about beautiful women is still very good. Come on⛽

It's not as good as the previous ones. To be honest, the author should stop writing about wars in court. The writing really stinks.

To tell a joke, the Ming Dynasty had a vast territory.

The whole book only contains confrontations and killings, so it is suitable for people who like fast food.

The writing is good, but the story about the imperial court is indeed uninteresting. It would be better not to write about it. Anyway, I think the author also wants to write about troubled times, so he might as well change it to the background of aristocratic families and sects ruling the world.