The Universe Begins with Eternal Life

To be honest, when I watched Eternal Life, what I hated the most was not Hua Tiandu, because that is the opposite of nature and stance, but the Yuhua Sect, which is like raising Gu. The key is to take it flying every time. If I were the protagonist, I would wait for it to grow up. Get up and guarantee that I will become the second Linglong. If I don't kill the senior officials of the Yuhua Sect, I will be regarded as a great virtuous person. Especially Feng Baiyu, who directly helped Gold Finger to swallow up the trouble, or robbed his wife, Madeira sidestepped and sought death. If you were siding with Hua Tiandu when I was weak, I would have nothing to say, the jungle of the jungle preys on the strong, but I am even stronger than Hua Tiandu, and you are still siding with him, just for the sake of a Tianwu treasure house, I will give you face.

If there is no harem for a fan, it would be pointless to have female protagonists, and there is no point in just innovating the plot. Most of the money a fan can make is from harem novels, which is a great point, and it is traffic. Without it, it will be easy to lose!

Fang Yuan? This is not a pleasant name to call.

1. As for the harem, I suggest not to make it too big, don't have too many heroines, and don't accept just one if you see a good-looking one. Otherwise, you will have to accept at least several hundred to travel through so many worlds. 2. The protagonist should not be the kind who thinks with the lower body, and becomes sluggish when seeing a beautiful woman. It is best not to have this kind of description. This kind of description is disgusting. There are many books that have hundreds of millions of years of practice. It feels like you have been in a pit. You must first cultivate your mind before practicing Taoism, and you can just stare at it. This kind of lustful protagonist is very unpopular in fantasy and immortality. 3. If it is a time hero and heroine, it will definitely need an emotional scene. Emotions will not arise out of thin air. They must be cultivated by many events. Otherwise, it will appear very cheap, and the experience needs to be long. At least the protagonist should not be moved easily. Many people fall in love with a big poison at every turn. Most online articles also focus on this. 4. The most exciting thing about Zhu Tianwen is that you can travel back in time to many novels you have read, and then perform operations to intercept the chance, the heroine, and change the plot. However, some original novelists may not like to intercept the plot. 5. Regarding regrets, the most touching thing in a novel is often regrets. If this part of the regrets is compensated, then the original novel will basically be half-broken. Many people want to travel through time and make up for the regrets. The routine of fans trying to make up for their regrets is too cliche. For example, basically every One Piece book is about saving Ace. There is nothing new. Some readers want to see something new. 6. Regarding pretentiousness, here comes the biggest point. You must be able to pretend to be pretentious. You have read a lot of articles. In this era, you are still using that noisy sentence. It is quite embarrassing now. If you just tell him not to speak, it will feel better than this sentence. What is important now is style. In layman's terms, it means high image. In the high world, I keep a low profile and keep a low profile, but in the low world, I strike hard. This is a point. If you want to show off, you can take a look at these two anime. If you want to become a powerful shadow person, welcome to the Strength Supremacy Classroom.

You heavens are just running away to get resources. If you don't understand the magical skills and make them your own, the great power will be attributed to your own world and you will achieve enlightenment. You have to go your own way, otherwise you will never be able to escape the shackles of the gate of eternal life in the eternal world! Don't look at Huan running in front, he will be overtaken by Fang Laomo sooner or later!

Can't the heroine be Fang Qingxue? Why is it dear?

Let's talk about a problem that can be seen at a glance. The paragraph is too long.

It's hard for people to look at you as you dress up and down.

The author writes at his own pace. It feels pretty good, just a little bit lacking.

Let the protagonist go to the Tomb of Tombs world to get the Eternal Sky Boat and open virtual markets in various worlds.

Looking at the introduction, I think it looks pretty good.

Has the author read other books by Shenji, such as Holy King and Galaxy Emperor? The worldview and power system of these two books are no worse than that of Eternal Life. Holy King is even much stronger than the worldview of Eternal Life.

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If you don't want a harem, don't have a heroine in the end. Just have one.