The Martial Way Begins as a Hunter

The book is okay, the characters are well drawn, but the pace is too slow, and it has nothing to do with the protagonist's age. I understand that you need to control the pace to release more exciting content, but the early stage is really weak. The content is good but limited, which may be the reason for the mediocre results. After seeing this, I subscribed to a few chapters to support it. I know that everyone who writes books has a temper, and they all feel that what they write is not worthy of others to talk about, but again, this is a craft, and since you are doing this for a living, you have to know what to write, and only when it is completed can more opinions be recognized. People who were delayed in the early stage of this book want to skip the chapter. But writing a book is really hard, I hope it gets better and better 😁😁😁

Elderly underworld, passionate elderly novel, worth reading 🙂

Anyone next to the protagonist's bonus points will benefit. It feels like child's play. This is an extraordinary world. You are not afraid of being caught by the strong and used as pigs.

🙂🙂🙂I just feel that what the author wrote is the opposite of other books. In other cases, the protagonist competes with the older generation. In this book, the protagonist competes with the younger generation.

This book is a source of food and can be invested. Killing decisively, not holy, humane.

The latest chapter is extremely poorly written, almost like being surrounded by demons, but still rambling on and on, too much nonsense, and no respect for one's own life. Where does fighting give me the time to think about so many other things? The writing is the same as the villain's spring outing.

It feels like a middle-aged Northeastern man hanging out in the underworld. .

After reading Chapter 11, you don't want to read anymore. When you see a large prey running away instead of shooting an arrow? Writing about Orion, don't you know about hunting? With a bow, even if a large beast such as a bear or tiger is shot in the torso by an arrow, it will die.

The book is okay. There are too many animals. Personally, I think one or two is best. Even if the writing is very detailed, it will be fine. If there are too many, it will become a zoo.

Author, you have to learn how to sell, and go to the great god areas to sell more. For example, today I helped you sell it at Water Monkey Chengshen. These days, good books will be buried if you don't rely on sales!