Shared Talent: Traveling Through the Heavens and Worlds at the Same Time

I have read a lot,,, Naruto felt that the protagonist's brain was crazy from the beginning, (I really don't understand why I have to read the sealing scroll with only one jutsu, don't you think it is real, and have you forgotten the telescope jutsu of the third generation. You all have your own golden fingers, so you can't just stay invincible and cause trouble. The author can recall how many traitorous ninjas there are in Konoha, and find out what their identities are. The third generation disciple Danzo cooperates with Orochimaru, Uchiha Itachi and Konoha spy Danzo (the spy) are also very good under one person. The storyline has changed very little. Come on, come on, I can't stand it anymore

In Naruto, why did Naruto suffer from childhood? It was because the higher-ups were testing whether the seal on Naruto was strong and at the same time, it was convenient for the Third Hokage to mentally control Naruto. People can be good with Naruto. Don't you really think that there is no one to guide you? Hand fighting not only has the advantages of profession and status (ordinary people), but also prevents Naruto from going to extremes due to hunger. At the same time, it gives Naruto more hope that he can change ordinary people's perception of himself and not despair of the village. It is also more convenient for the third generation to PUA him. It can be said that he is the perfect tool in the early stage. Unless the protagonist is willing to be an ordinary person for the rest of his life and his external performance must be positive and optimistic and loves life and the village, otherwise in the early stage, even if Naruto asks for friendship, he will still show resistance like Sakura, and even then, the water meter will definitely be checked and monitored for a period of time.

A thief is a thief. If he really wants to take risks, why not call him an adventurer? What's the use of talking so much? Just like that thief in the news who steals to support his younger brother, then he is not a thief?

The world of mixed martial arts is simply a failure. The world view is set to be a unified dynasty. The protagonist has become the dynasty's lackey and keeps boasting about how powerful the dynasty is. But the problem is that this is a martial arts world. Personal force must be above the power. At the very least, it must be free to come and go without restraint. The phrase "a knight uses force to break the ban" is used to describe martial arts. If you write it this way, the characteristics of the entire martial arts will be gone, and it will become a dynasty drama in the skin of martial arts. The last and most important point is that original characters in fan fiction can but cannot be placed in the main position. They usually appear as strangers for a few times and disappear. However, the original female character here directly becomes the heroine, and her family status is even higher than that of the protagonist. If you do this, you might as well create a martial arts world directly. You must know that there are many female characters in the mixed martial arts world. Not only do these female characters have unique charms, but they are also very familiar to readers. As a result, you don't have to create an original one. ps: In fan fiction, if the original characters are well written, they will not be disliked at most, but if they are slightly poorly written, they will be criticized. Therefore, the original characters cannot be as good as the original characters. After all, everyone comes to read fan novels. Who will buy into the original characters? !

An author whose butt can't be more crooked, please tell me what does pirate mean? What is pirate? Because some naive and idealistic people actually want to whitewash pirates? I withdrew.

He took the initiative to approach Naruto, but was interrogated by the ANBU using genjutsu. The pig's feet were suddenly broken, and the book was finished.

Is it enough to see the protagonist follow Naruto and attack the sealed book? Either you are passionate about the world of Naruto and don't have any conspiracy theories, otherwise the clone of Naruto will either gain nothing at all, the sealed book is fake, or it will be served by the mountain clan! Jumping like that without protecting your brain's secrets? The benefits and risks are not proportional! Operate wisely!

No matter how invincible you are, can't you cover up the nature of bullying and fearing the strong in your bones? You have to learn to simulate the mentality of various characters to make the story come alive!

The label's three correct views are undoubtedly farts

I stopped watching the One Piece episode when I saw the protagonist became Luffy's nanny again. Especially the dialogue between the protagonist and Luffy was extremely witty.

As the title states, as a time-traveling game, there need to be many worlds, so that the protagonist can be strong if they are superimposed. These worlds do not necessarily need to be written in detail, but they can appear, so I am posting this post to collect the worlds that readers want to see. In addition, if it is a relatively niche world, when giving the world name, you can mention what interesting powers the world has. For example, the armored warrior world I wrote in the past two days. The talents and physiques provided by this world are very useful, but I will not write about them in detail. If you want to see the plot of which world I write in detail, you can also leave a message. If there are more people who support and like it, I may also consider writing it. Thank you for the above.

After reading a few chapters, I jumped directly to the bad guy. As a bystander, I think your protagonist vividly interprets the big boss's thigh pendant and the snob who takes advantage of others. But this shouldn't be considered an advantage, right? I really don't know why you wrote it like this.

The water is fine, but the problem of being unhappy after the water is over is a big problem. When it comes to the part of Wang Lu, I really can't stand it. If I beat Wang Lu, I could have turned him into a dog with a few hammers. If I don't finish it with grinding and whining, the heavenly master will finish it, and the child will say meaningless things.

This story under one person is really rubbish!

The protagonist is indeed a bit of a virgin. Others want his life, but he also helps other people's sons complete the task.

Brother, at first glance, your setting is the same as Feng Chaohuang's "Traveling 99 Worlds Simultaneously". The book Feng Chao Huang is good. Can Shen Nong tell me what the quality of this book is?

From the last book to now, the world selection is very important. The starting point of Zongwu is poorly written, especially the Jinshu Zongwu. I have read too much and am tired of aesthetics and can't read a little bit.

When writing a shared talent article, it is best to have a world with a high-level main visual. Now that the main visual at the beginning is the Naruto world, it is a poisonous point. Are you planning to write hundreds of chapters to reach the sixth level?

Studio Wen ruined online novels🙂

Overall, it's very slow, and even the most important thing can be covered in one chapter, but it's also because there are not enough updates. As for the other parts, I haven't read them before, so I don't know if each character is right. Naruto's explanation is quite reasonable. At least he has the identity of a Senju, so he has no problem dealing with this third generation who deliberately released the sealed book that Naruto stole.

I was a little disappointed. I came here after the author's last book. I felt that the author's previous book was very interesting, especially the copy of Dragon Clan. It was very enjoyable. Unfortunately, the author gave up on that book. The copy of Dragon Clan only wrote the beginning, so I followed this book. But the dragon copy in this book made me a little disappointed, mainly because the setting was hard for me to accept. The identity of the male protagonist Lin Bei in the Dragon Clan dungeon is actually Japanese, a low-level member of the Eight Sheqi Family. . . I still hope that the male protagonist is Chinese, even if he is a Chinese living abroad? In addition, the male protagonist Lin Bei obviously already has Dragon King level combat power or even higher, but the result still follows the original plot, only changing some details, which is really unnecessary. I wrote dozens of chapters, and most of them are from the original work, which is really a bit disappointing. It's absolutely possible to be more radical, there's no need to follow the original outline.

I don't know when it started, but many people like to travel through time to a dragon clan and kill immortals. Reading the book in the past is indeed the memory of a generation, but judging from the level of energy shown in the world of the novel, these worlds are just like the advanced martial arts worlds such as Fengyun. You are in a world much more advanced than these worlds, and you have to go in to learn Wing Chun like Doomsday or play basketball like Pangu. The most important thing is, what are you going to do in a world like Dragon Clan and Zhuxian? Are you going to fall in love? The rough power system inside is completely useless except for relying on the small world under the top big world. The most important thing is serious homogenization. Lu Mingfei is very busy now. Harry Potter needs him, Warhammer needs him, Monster Hunter needs him, and Witcher also needs him. Chat group systems are even more common. There are so many novels published every day, and he is included in several of them. It makes me want to vomit when I read it. Don't chase the trend, let the trend chase you.

As the title states, the reading of new books from Qidian is really the most important data. This book has nearly 3,000 collections so far, but it has not even been recommended in the second round. It is because the reading data is not up to standard. I beg you readers to read more! ! ! !

The updates are too slow. It's okay to read a copy in one go, but it's too uncomfortable to read back.

The writing is a bit poor I can't say it's too watery, I can only say it's average. The writing is too detailed. People who don't know may think they're here to watch anime. The subject matter itself is about a fast pace and changes. Generally speaking, there are ten or twenty chapters in a world, written in rotation, which is almost the same. Your world only has dozens of chapters, and a lot of them are detailed descriptions of the original story. There is no climax and the story is mediocre. No ups and downs.