Da Qin: One Phase Through the Ages

Too much psychological activity is obscene. The thoughts and language of the characters in the novel need to be consistent and related to current events. You are thinking more than you are talking. If you have something to say, say it. If you can't say it, hold it in. Don't think nonsense. Thinking so much is useless except to confuse the readers. There is also the life and death cloth, is it useful? You butterfly has arrived, and the timeline is no longer the same as before. Are you still reminding Li Si to be careful of Zhao Gao in the sand dunes?

This is the first historical novel I have read so far. The author knows that the 99 multiplication table already existed during the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period. Rather than being "invented" by the protagonist.

I thought you succeeded in PKing Lao Ai and became Qin Shihuang's second father, and then asked Qin Shihuang to give you soldiers and horses to build your country overseas. Then you would have many children and many blessings, integrate women from all ethnic groups, and tz the world

The plot is too vague and bloated. Since we are focusing on the unified Qin Dynasty, we should make various plans and preparations. The protagonist is obviously lying flat and fishing. . . It's not like he can accomplish anything.

It looks like it can last for 4 or 5 chapters. It's been over a dozen chapters. Strong ~ water

Your main plot is "One Love Through the Ages", which one is more beautiful between me and Xu Gong in the north of the city. You have laid so much groundwork in front of you, just for the blind date. Didn't you have any family members to greet you during the New Year? Did you go on a blind date? You have dozens of chapters in the past about how beautiful the protagonist is, and dozens of chapters on blind dates followed. You can even write a cool article to help Yingzheng Datong establish an awesome system. What do you write about a blind date? You are all here for the "One Love Through the Ages". What you wrote is wrong.

Why is this character similar to Yi Xiaochuan? I feel like there is a strong sense of separation between the protagonist and the era.

I was not satisfied with the fact that I didn't win the PK Wheel King. If the protagonist surpasses Wheel King and Rasputin, it would still be interesting🐷

Why are there no readers' comments?

There is nothing worth remembering about Da Qin. His existence is a setback for China. The system is too fucked up.

Isn't it natural to survive by any means necessary?

Come on, work hard, write the lazy cancer to death, Qin Shihuang died in the last two lives, let the 7 countries form a cabinet together, take turns to be the king, write a different novel... The protagonist is responsible for being the supreme elder... Do what he likes, and finally get rid of it like Wang Mang. The next book of rebirth says, you can not

Is the prototype of the protagonist Prime Minister Qi?

A great man once said that the countryside surrounded the cities and seized power with armed force. Others have said that dignity is only above the edge of the sword, and there is nothing like soaking oranges. So just strengthen the military and strengthen the weapons a little bit. Crush it with an invincible force. If you don't write it like this, it will be easy to finish with 100 pictures.