Your Majesty, This Outer Room Is Painting a Pie for You Again!

This book is quite interesting. The female protagonist travels through time and the male protagonist can read minds. The writing is humorous and fluent. The female protagonist is a drama queen, but the male protagonist sees it clearly. I am looking forward to how the female protagonist will react when she finds out about this. The only fly in the ointment is that some parts are not logically consistent, such as handing over the child to a female host to raise, which exaggerates the impact of the matter and seems embarrassing. There is also a psychological description of the male protagonist, which is a bit repetitive. Big cheers for the author! I'm optimistic about you😊

This book is very good, but there are a lot of repeated words at the end, and some words are redundant. It is recommended to change it slightly

The more I watch it, the less I want to watch it. There are so many bad words and verbal chants that it will teach bad things to children!

I have read almost forty chapters so far. The children are really interesting. . . The heroine's character is actually quite humorous

The fourth chapter talks about the identity of the male protagonist, and the seventh chapter talks about the identity again. Doesn't the female protagonist already know the identity...

The progress of the article is too slow, and I don't make much progress after reading each chapter.

It's pretty good, you can keep observing.

I have read more than a dozen chapters so far, and the characters are quite interesting, but sometimes some of the dialogues, scenes or behaviors in it give people a very deliberate feeling. How can I put it, it feels a bit awkward. Also, the wife at the beginning looked at the heroine and felt that people from a wealthy family may not be able to cultivate it. Later, a certain paragraph said it from another perspective (which a young woman can think of).

Are there too many typos that I can't even read?