Versatile Mage: Mo Xie

I feel that there are many inconsistencies in this book, especially in the early stages. It is not strong enough to threaten others, unable to control emotions, etc. It is just a calculation.

The heroine does not have Tang Yue, but she engages in these plots with Tang Yue. She is like a stallion, slipping away.

Good guy, he twists and turns without breaking, he goes and comes back again, the flowing water leads to the secluded place, and his momentum is like breaking the sea! Water has no form! Well, one plays the sect leader Moye 😎

How should I put it? I have always emphasized the protagonist's calculation and scheming, but the reality is that he is more reckless than Mo Fan. The key is that he is brainless.

Let's talk about the conclusion first, I don't recommend reading it. I thought you were the old author of Evil Emperor, so I read it regardless of the comment section, and ended up with 20 pictures. First of all, the character image. To portray a character image, first highlight its characteristics through reactions to different events. Your book adopts the method of first revealing and then describing with words. This method is not a big problem, but it is very difficult. According to the goal of this article, it is to shape the protagonist into a calculating and scheming character. There are three situations. The first The first type is written very lowly, like a brainless person, and likes to do things here and there. The second type of brain waves are not aligned, and I don't agree with your calculations, or the character image you create is wrong. The third type is so well written that people have to agree with it. Unfortunately, from this book, it is at least the second type or even the first type. The early unconcealed dislike or avoidance, sudden calculation, and love to seize. The question of smart people, what have you done so long ago? Wouldn't it be better to start in advance like that Xun'er? It can be seen from this that at least he is not smart. Secondly, he is like some authors. He reveals the story here and micro-manipulates there. He does not know what life and death are. He is obviously so dangerous, but he has to jump like this. We can call him a clown. Of course, 1,000 means 10,000. This is just a problem of insufficient writing power. If it is just this, I can watch it. The biggest problem will come immediately. I can't recognize myself, what kind of soul is there, let's not talk about the problem of having a will to fall in love, just being out of control and likes to go crazy, this can overlap with the first one, that is, the protagonist's brain seems not very bright, and he can't play it safe. He engages in such radical and dangerous, even like a doppelgänger. Not one of them has been written well, and the three characters are even more chaotic. The above is my review after reading twenty chapters. Come on, author, and wait for the next book.

This introduction is really contradictory. The benefit of time travel comes first. Isn't time travel just to gain immortality and grasp or feel the life of being at a high place? Then there comes a person who knows his true identity. Instead of trying to kill him first, he wants to live a life with her. What is the purpose of time travel? It's better not to wear it or die once.

The introduction is so addicting to me. From the beginning, all the memories of the male protagonist are controlled by the female protagonist and she knows the future of the male protagonist! So are you a reincarnation of the original world or a real time traveler? Forget it, we'll see next year~ Just take care of yourself first

Why does a long sissy still have long hair? Men rarely have long hair, and the sissy male protagonist is inherently toxic.

After reading this introduction, I have no desire to read further.

There are a lot of questions when I read Chapter 6. First of all, the author said that the protagonist is good at calculations, but in the end, he has not been able to understand the mind of a high school student for several months, and allows others to see his inner thoughts. Then, Tang Yue is portrayed as an unpleasant person. She hates the way others look at him with desire, but the protagonist looks at him with indifferent eyes and no desire, so she directly suspects that the protagonist is the Black Vatican. In this case, he is really such a disgusting person. This won't work, and that won't work either. What will she do? A waste, with such background resources, but she graduated from college and became a judge relying on connections. She has only just reached the first level of the intermediate level. Three years later, Mo Fan became an agent, and she only reached the third level of the intermediate level. What a waste, so she was just a supporting role in the original work and had no role at all.

The author would like to give you a reply. Can the protagonist also cultivate this three-headed and six-armed Shui Wuxiang, who is strong and handsome?

Is there any Shennong? Did this book give the author an original character of a good-looking woman who has a relationship with Mo Fan?

Can the author write more? I can't get enough! So cool. Or update it twice a day.

More Tang San than Tang San, Tang San only suffered from a love brain attack. This protagonist is pure, indifferent and stupid. When I have made a lot of money from my previous entertainment works, I am not willing to spend a cent for "the family that comes into my heart". As soon as Tang Yue started to teach, the protagonist dared to show Tang Yue his level 3 cultivation level not long after awakening, and talked about the plot that Xuan She would suffer in a few years.

There was a little problem in the early stage, but it's not a major problem. Chapter 30 onwards is very enjoyable.

The evaluation of Mu Ningxue at the beginning was quite good (that's why I became interested), and then I started to feed the story. To be honest, with your ability, you can just follow the path of the original work and add some thoughts, and then change it a little, and write something of your own, and it will be popular. Then you insist on writing randomly. What kind of bullshit is Brother Hun doing? Chun Chun is contradicting himself. In Bo City, let me put it bluntly, if I were lying on the moon, I would find an opportunity to punch you and blow you up. He started threatening middle-level judges without even awakening his magic. He directly forcibly reduced his intelligence. Really, the words written behind him are super sweet. If you were just for the ice bow, wouldn't you take it away from him when he returns to the National Pavilion? After all, according to your previous description, Mu Ningxue is indeed quite disgusting. But what the hell do you want to do? Then it was written as jb. There is also Qingtian Hunting Center, which I am too lazy to comment on. My darling reveals his trump card directly in front of others? ? ? Lost your mind? Do you really regard the original book as the Bible? Song Qiming, an old priest, has been a priest for more than ten years. Although he is not a bad guy in the original work, can you regard him as a saint? Aren't you afraid that he will kill you directly? Do you have that much respect? Really pure sugar

Is it multiple heroines? Who are the heroines?

Which one is better, Mo Xie or Mo Lan? It feels like Mo Lan can get a 50-50 win against Mo Xie without using the gift of Yun Li.

I think this book is not as good as the heroine, and the character is not well developed.

Poison, forget it at the beginning, he has a very calculating character. He is someone who plots against his family. He can even write about robbing his wife's soul in the future. He can also make Xinxia freeze and then save her. That's awesome. He is really a person who is purely calculating.

The most poisonous full-time fan, bar none

It really has no strength, no beginning and no end, and it feels like the plot is forcibly inserted.

There are 91 chapters on the shelves, but there are only 91 on the book friend list, which explains everything.

Does the author's heroine have a Mu Nujiao?