The Literary and Artistic Era of Retired Soldiers

After reading the first three chapters, the writing is okay and the content is coherent. For entertainment, I think the protagonist can participate in a variety show and then write around this variety show.

I really can't stand it after seeing Chapter 67. An organic company can't even be summoned for emergency assembly. All the cadres don't want to do it anymore, right? This is giving our army to Black Chengxiang! In the army, this phenomenon occurs when some small units (Prairie Class 5) stationed in remote areas far away from the camp have irregular training due to individual reasons. As long as such foreign units reach the platoon level, their superior departments will regularly inspect and assess their training status.

Opponent, veterans, please stop messing around and having incorrect views!

Can you be more ridiculous? An entire company is directly written as "Old Fritters". Is the army chief crazy? Or are you fooling fools? No matter how rubbish the army is, it can still give you the organization and designation? I read the comments written by the author, but maybe it was before. The problem is that the author is obviously writing after the military reform. After the military reform, it is assumed that the army is like this. It talks about building a first-class military power and a strong army. The author must have been a puppet army in the last century. The people's army in the new era is like this. It is not far away from the army recalling the author to start war preparations and prepare for war.

To be honest, I don't agree with his description of the troops. Either he has never been a soldier and heard it from others, or he is biased against the troops.

Multiple heroines? Retired soldiers are also soldiers... Can't accept it

Newbie, new book, you can point out any shortcomings, thank you for reading

After reading Chapter 51, I honestly can't stand it anymore! ! ! Retired soldiers? ? ? I think it's a big turnip~~~ Maple Leaf, Bao Yuanyuan, Xing Wei, is this a plot with multiple female protagonists... First of all, Bao Yuanyuan appears. 1. I can't understand her appearance and encounter with the male protagonist. (The protagonist initially worked as a security guard at a music festival to maintain order. He felt that Bao Yuanyuan's appearance was inexplicable. The key was to add WeChat. Judging from the protagonist's personality at the time, it seemed that he was not an outgoing person. Did he just add WeChat so casually?). 2. Really curious: She and the male protagonist met for the second time in another city; the book states that Bao Yuanyuan asked for leave to spend her birthday with a friend, while the protagonist needed to come to this city to sign a contract. Recall the timeline: the next day after the music festival, the protagonist received a message that he wanted to sign a work, and replied that the signing would be done tomorrow afternoon (2 o'clock). Then the book seemed to explain that he was waiting in line to see the flag that night! ! ! Hoho~ What a coincidence, these two people just happened to gather here, and Bao Yuanyuan quickly recognized the protagonist. This is a bit dramatic~~ I can't understand it. Would a local (Bao Yuanyuan) go to Kanqi at night without any trouble? [It's not clear in the article whether her friend's birthday is today, but it seems that she told her to go to a bar~~ which means that the time when they met together shouldn't be particularly late]. After this, write this: [Inexplicable] The person wants to smoke, and the [Shameless] person wants to go to the bar invited by the protagonist's friend with the protagonist. This is somewhat yy about the author. 3. I don't want to write anymore. I feel that Bao Yuanyuan's character is a waste of time... Secondly, Maple Leaf appears. To be honest, after reading Chapter 51, I feel like this is the heroine... Scene 1: Encounter. At the music festival, the Maple Leafs' musicians have a problem, and the protagonist comes to the rescue. Afterwards, we had dinner together and completed the performance of the music of "Elopement" Act 2: Rescue. Maple Leaf met..., And then he was drinking alone in a bar, and was attacked by a foreign..., And then the protagonist arrived and saved the day one against five. Act 3: Invitation. The protagonist invites the unemployed Maple Leaf to join the band he formed Act 4: Breaking the situation. Faced with the ban on Maple Leaf, the protagonist thought of submitting a music and creative program to CCTV to break the situation. This is the current amount of information. (Come on: The breaking scene. Maybe I read too much entertainment articles. 1. I'm really curious that the two rich guys in the band can't solve this problem of being banned? 2. When I saw that the system requirement is one week to break the game, I didn't consider it at all. Does it not take time to plan "The Voice"? [A. Publicity issues, how can we get people to sign up? B. Can you find time for editing and playback in such a short period of time? ]) Finally, it's Xing Wei who has no presence at the moment. The appearance should be in Chapter 16, I just mentioned a few words... Summary: You can't read with your brain, I probably can't stand this book...

Dog-licking article, abandoned 😒

Writing about conflict for the sake of conflict is the worst way to do it. If you can't write about the high-end game, don't write about it. The big modern business groups have no interests and will be so mean. The so-called second generation are smart people, so they won't be so blind and random, and people don't like to read it.

It's a song and it's a script. Why is there still such a novel after 24 years? You can just forget it all

It seems that I have to find some physical books to kill my spare time. Nowadays, in the Qidian novel, various paragraphs are like eh, um, ah, ding, right, okay, forget it... Teachers in primary and secondary schools grade essays. It is impossible to give high marks when they encounter this. What's more, selling books for money... I don't know if more than 90% of books now are artificial intelligence or AI-assisted. There is no pleasure in reading.

The writing is quite good, but the number of words is too few and the women have to be mentioned 😴

Don't insult veterans, you're childish.

Either there is no heroine, don't play with ambiguity, if you play it but don't get it, why are you pretending to be innocent😳?

So let's play "Missing Comrades" at the August 1st Party.

Ahem, I want to take two days off. Who is in favor and who is against? If no one replies, it will be approved by default!

Why isn't it on the shelves? It's over 200,000 yuan, so it's okay to have perfect attendance when it goes on sale on the first day.