Tokyo Apartment: Collecting Rent from the Snow Woman Landlady

Lady Snow Woman and the Cursed Ring...

Author, you don't want people to find out you're writing Tokyo-themed content, do you? You don't want your husband (wife), boss, mom, or dad to find out, right? Then you'd better update more! 🤭

Eight hundred instances of the phrase "gentle person" appear in one chapter—the author must really be a gentle person! 👏👏👏

I liked the theme, but the characters and story were too straightforward. It felt more like wish fulfillment than anything else, and the seductive parts were more like embellishments.

Simply put, Onmyoji are the Japanese version of Taoist priests. The religion to which Onmyoji belong is called Onmyodo, whose original theory was based on the Chinese concepts of Yin and Yang and the Five Elements. Later, it incorporated a great deal of Taoist content, thus forming a religion. It also contains some modifications made by the Japanese themselves.

Could you please stop jumping around like that when you write? Write one thing at a time, then add transitional scenes and dialogue. It's like the plot where one second you're eating ramen at a restaurant and the next second you're back home. It's too abrupt!

Shiranui Yomi's uniform, well...

Seeing the title "Snow Woman," I clicked on it without even reading the synopsis or reviews, guys. Did I do the right thing?

Yuuka Tsuchimikado

Little Fox