Scientific Research on Naruto Begins with Snake Ninjutsu

The water that is visible to the naked eye in the previous chapters only looks good until the place where Kakuzu appears after returning from the first mission. However, the scientific research part is very imaginative, and the author put his heart into it. I really like this part. Unfortunately, the author's writing is not very long. I think I can boldly write more than ten chapters of scientific research at once. How about the writing style... It highlights simplicity. The problem of many new authors is that they like to describe in long paragraphs, but this author seems to deliberately avoid detailed descriptions. It is better than those who like descriptions, but without any description at all, they can only rely on the plot to win. But in terms of plot, this book feels bland, and there is no motivation to keep reading. However, it is very comfortable to read. I have written so much so far, and I have not read the kind of poisonous points that make me sick at first sight (except that the protagonist is female, which really needs to be adapted). It gives people this feeling because the author seems to have given brains to all the characters who appear for more than 100 words, whether they are important roles or minor characters. When everyone has a brain and can analyze the pros and cons, conflicts will not happen so easily. But the advantage of writing it this way is that the whole book has a strong sense of atmosphere, and it feels like everyone in this book is trying to survive, like the real Naruto world, and even a little bit of the Naruto story. Choosing a female protagonist and the Akimichi family... I feel like it's a failure. I don't know what the author thinks. If it were a male protagonist, a popular family, or even a commoner, the popularity would be much higher than it is now. Finally, this author's fighting scenes are very good, with back and forth. It is considered top-notch among the Naruto fanfics I have read, and I hope it will continue to be the same.

My imagination is okay... But the success of the "research" is about the same as what I want to achieve with my hands. It is more like my power of thinking than scientific research In addition, the plot and writing are relatively dry. First of all, some of the characters are not reasonable. For example, the Hyuga branch will not learn it because it cannot learn the complete Ba Gua Zhang. And the Uchiha who can open his eyes just by being jealous...? Why would such a genius be thrown away as waste and take the Chunin Exam...? Then there are some unnecessary secondary settings... For example, the Uchiha clan moved from the Kingdom of Thunder to the Kingdom of Fire, and there is also the Zero Magatama Sharingan... To put it simply, there are no big poisons, but there are a lot of small poisons, and food and grass - right?

I was just passing by and was surprised🙀, how did the Akimichi family get in touch with the beauty 🤔

Can you say that a beautiful girl weighing 300 pounds is not a beautiful girl?😌

Guys, can you give me some feedback? At least let me know how I am writing now, right? Other authors praise and criticize, but I am so quiet here that I don't even know if I am writing about Naruto.

It's a violation of the book that purifies Obito. It's so fucking disgusting. Only Obito and Itachi deserve to die the most. Why are you so nice to him?

The protagonist leaves everything to Konoha, selflessly gives the content of his research to his friends, and never follows the exchange of equal value. This is the world of ninjas. He thinks this world is too beautiful, but the direction is wrong. Moreover, it seems that the protagonist wants to save everyone. He has to take care of everything.

I hope everyone will comment more.

The picture I ran with SD today that I am quite satisfied with 🙂 may be a bit too mature, let's just treat it as three years later 🙂 Don't pay attention to small details in the pictures produced by AI 🙂

Shouldn't this be a female channel? Why do you appear on a male channel?

The author has a beginning and an end and is a good person👏👏👏

Uchiha Obito has too many scenes in this book. Is he the male protagonist? The protagonist is too selfless, leaving everything to Konoha, the scientific research plot is too watery, and he insists on writing several chapters for something that can be finished in half a chapter.

I will definitely support it when it is put on the shelves. Personally, I think the level is considered Grain and Grass- It's already pretty good. Come on, there's nothing that can make you a god in one step. The more you write, the more it feels like it will come naturally

Come on, Fatty's secret technique can improve his image.

Shouldn't this be a female channel? I really can't add a tag. I'll take a quick look and if I'm interested, I'll click on it and see why the protagonist is female. Isn't this a scam? I'm looking for a book in a male channel, and when I find it, the protagonist is not even a male. What the hell is that? Female channel among male partners?

The secretary of the Akimichi clan doesn't want to learn anymore

As the author, I said before that few people read Madonna-type protagonists. Even if you are not writing about Madonna, you have already ruined everything in the first three chapters. Don't challenge your limits when you are not popular enough. I can only say that most authors will write some cool articles or decisive killings in the early stage because they must attract enough reader popularity. Later, as the writing skills improve, they can write more profound content. If you write this kind of thing from the beginning, no reader will have the patience to see it to the end?

There is too much unnecessary content. The dialogue between enemies during battle and the daily explanations all feel like a stream of water. Moreover, Naruto fandom is already a volume. If you become a female and become a minority, the plot will not change much, and it will not be exciting enough, making it difficult for people to watch it.

It's not a big problem to wear a girl, but I feel that the character design in the first chapter is not attractive enough. I hope there will be some crazy beautiful girl or the heroine behind the villain. She may be gentle and cute on the surface or cold and arrogant, but behind the scenes she is bleeding like a bayou.

Not used to female protagonists

😚😚😚😚😚😚

After beating Uchiha Madara to death, wouldn't it be possible to gang up on Uchiha Hikaru by putting his dirt into the stomach of the God of Death?

It's quite interesting. Everyone has brains, and they all think like normal people when it comes to thinking about problems and countermeasures. It's very interesting that the novel can be written in such detail, and it feels like the early days of Naruto. (It's too strong to add brains to every supporting character)

I'm starting to understand why some people say that the back of Naruto is not as good looking as the front.