
Lilliput in a Box, People Beg Me to Be a God
箱子里的小人国,百姓求我当神仙
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- Completed
- Length
- 125k Words
- Genre
- Historical
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Alternate History
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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It's completely copied from the Ming Dynasty in the box, and the villages are all Gaojiacun, which is boring!
The author, how should I put it, has a light writing style. I was very interested in the story in the box, but unfortunately I couldn't read it. After reading these chapters, predict the future trend, (each has his own story and 98% of the narrations = primary school students' saliva notes!)
The subject matter is good, but the writing always makes people feel out of place, unable to get deep into it, always on the surface!
Author, please change the name of the setting Grandpa Mountain God. It's too vulgar. It always feels like the grandpa in the ring. Don't describe the details in one stroke, characters, scenes, dynamics, expressions, psychological reactions, etc. Don't be anxious, express it normally, don't just skip a few sentences or one sentence, and even if you skip it, don't make it look out of place. Regarding the interactions outside and inside the box, as well as the descriptions of seeing gods and putting things down inside the box, it is recommended to read (Da Ming in the Box) or refer to some other novels to see how shocking the scenes of gods casting spells will be. Even if your writing power is limited, don't rush forward. When a person suddenly discovers such a box, the sense of exploration should be very strong, and the display is too convenient. There are too many useless descriptions, and I don't know why, but the description of this scene always gives people a silly feeling. Outside the box, the protagonist is a mortal, inside the box, the protagonist is a newborn god, and inside the box is a world of mortals.