Marrying Qian Renxue, Bibi Dong, Why Are You Crying?

Strongly request to train bb dong!

Personal Thoughts: The writing is quite good. The first few chapters are a little green, but the emotional scenes, inner scenes, and even the conspiracy theory are very good. The writing is also good. When the male protagonist was reborn, he was not a max-level boss. He was only level 91. How could he defeat the Pope? ! Although I am a staunch female papist, I really think that Bibi Dong is a paranoid and gloomy female lunatic, and she can really do these things. Here are some suggestions: The female pope in the previous life cannot kill the male protagonist for no reason. Just saying that it was not intentional is not very good. I hope the author can make up for it. Also, this is a fanfic, and the protagonist is Wuhundian Fang, so the audience is actually not very large, and the author has to be mentally prepared. It can be seen that the author has some ideas. I didn't expect this development. It is much better than other Douluo fan stories that are all about torturing Tang San. Don't care too much about what readers think. There are 1,000 different opinions among 1,000 people. You have to come up with your own style. Come on, I wish your creation will get better and better.

Dog licking, waste, rape, disgusting, incompetent rage, moronic plot, and awkward love descriptions. I haven't found such a disturbing novel in a long time.

I thought I would make any progress after being reborn, so I concluded that I was a waste. Apart from a good reincarnation, he is a useless piece of trash + a licking dog.

To be honest, Qian Renxue, Hu Liena and Bibi Dong are all poisonous. I don't understand why people writing about Douluo fandom always focus on these three. Anyway, I can't see what other shining points these three have besides being beautiful.

If you don't like it, you just don't like it. Why did Mao give so many reasons? If you ask me to say that the protagonist gives me the feeling that he doesn't dislike Bibi Dong, but that he is taking revenge on Bibi Dong, especially the heroine is set to be Qian Renxue, this is not revenge. He is saying no. I fell in love with Bibi Dong, but now I want to get close to her daughter. I would say it's best not to have a female protagonist. Anyway, the women in Douluo Continent are more and more deceived. The protagonist has been deceived all his life. Isn't it good to practice well in this life and go to other worlds later?

I thought the protagonist would make some progress after his rebirth, but he turned out to be a loser. I know the author wanted to torture Bibi Dong, but this time he wrote the protagonist to be too useless. In the previous life, he was a licking dog and was stabbed in the heart by Bibi Dong. In this life, he doesn't like Bibi Dong, but now he is drugged by Bibi Dong again. Why did you end up like this? After a lifetime of experience, you still haven't figured out what kind of person Bibi Dong is. The protagonist didn't see Bibi Dong's paranoid appearance in the Wuhun Palace, and dared to go out with Bibi Dong while being poisoned. Bibi Dong is to blame on himself, and the protagonist is also to blame on himself. The two of them are really evenly matched.

Author, why don't you consider letting the protagonist die and restart the third life? In the third life, stay away from the Wuhun Palace and the protagonist's group. Don't care about love and hate. Go to the Sun and Moon Continent to practice hard. Finally, unify the two continents, kill the Wuhun Palace and the protagonist's group, and become a god king. Not much better than any kind of love love

Life is already depressing enough! Looking at the suffering owner who inexplicably thought of a woman being taken away by a black man!

Let Bibi Dong make it clear whether he will accept it or not. If you accept it, everyone who quit the trap like me should quit.

This is going to take a few chapters of nonsense. The crazy woman might as well just destroy the protagonist and imprison her soul power.

Why would the protagonist be poisoned by Anshenxiang? Normally, shouldn't the protagonist be thrown away after accepting it? There are also a few chapters updated in the past few days. Although he is torturing Bibi Dong, the protagonist gives me the feeling that he is getting closer to Yu Xiaogang. Yu Xiaogang relies on Bibi Dong's happiness. Huan Neng openly asked Bibi Dong for the training method of twin martial arts, and the protagonist is now poisoned, and he also relies on Bibi Dong's love to abuse Bibi Dong. It is really ridiculous. This gives me the feeling that the protagonist and Yu Xiaogang are the same kind of people, but the protagonist is more genius in terms of cultivation.

Won't you abuse your master? Rest assured? Single heroine Qian Renxue? Hehe.

Although it is interesting to see what you wrote like this, you must also understand the principle that things must be reversed when they reach their extremes. It is a gradual process.

Qian Renxue was seriously injured by the Thousand Jun Ants. . . I really don't know how to evaluate it.

She still hopes to accept Bibi Dong as her harem. . . .

Author, are you not in a good relationship? It's okay to write crazy in the early stage, but if you keep writing a lot of pages, you are not breaking up, right?

The result is a big pile of fen, Miss Meng Hongchen? It's really a bad novel written by a great historian, a piece of shit written on the street

The starting point is really awesome. It's only 26 chapters and it's already on the shelves. Do you understand how it can be laid out in the early stage?