Immortality Is Above

As mentioned in the title, when I read Chapter 95, the plot description is very bland, not as good as Killing Evil, Entering a Liaozhai, and Human God. It does not have the high-spiritedness of the young man. Sometimes the author will suddenly write some dry truths, and sometimes he will suddenly throw out some dry settings. In terms of plot design, I haven't seen any unexpected plots yet. The main plot I have seen so far is to go up the mountain to cultivate immortality again, and the second is to find the fragments of the Book of Heaven. In general, it is very dull, I have no desire to catch up on updates, and I have no books to read to pass the time.

As the title states, at least until Chapter 129, the atmosphere of the book is dull. There are no unexpected plots so far, and of course there are no plots that are addictive after reading it. It is quite satisfactory. The plot in the palace can be seen that the author put a lot of thought into designing it, but as a reader, especially a reader who is following the update, the plot is really smelly and long, just for the plate of vinegar-wrapped dumplings. The classification of this book is classical fairy tales. Personally, I think it still feels a bit like a fairy tale at the beginning, but as the plot progresses, it loses the feeling of a classical fairy tale. How can a dull book embody the fairy tale?

Just like the title, for example, in the latest chapter, the plot is well written, and you write a paragraph to explain why some people are wearing rags. Later, when the plot is well written, you will say "Don't underestimate it or something like that." This kind of writing method has only been encountered when listening to storytelling. People's storytelling is telling the plot and inserting explanations and comments on some interesting things and events. The author writes a novel, why does he also like to insert his own explanation and commentary while telling the plot?

I read this great master's works when I was in school, and I really enjoyed reading them carefully. I have been an author for several years now, and I just found out today that Chen Dada of the Southern Dynasties has opened a book! I can't get much in exchange for tips. I didn't write books at Qidian before, but now I just go and top up!

I'm really convinced, who started it? Why do you have to be tortured when reading a novel? Today's novels are all about how miserable the common people are and how disgusting corrupt officials are. It's so boring to always bring in private goods! Look at the rankings one by one, and no one can see them.

After all these years, there are still so many wrongdoers subscribing to Eunuch Chen's book. The correct steps should be 1. Click to collect 2. Wait for two months 3. Eunuch Chen enters the palace again

I have become a Taoist, but I don't want to go back to the mountain. The plot of the world of mortals is very embarrassing, and there is too much sea water.

After reading more than 50 chapters, my evaluation of this book is that the Renaissance pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger, pretending to be a slap in the face, and cultivating immortals in the city is a cool story.

After reading about a hundred chapters, 1. The level of the realm is unclear, 2. A student who dropped out of the Immortal Way during the Qi training period actually started to understand the rules and rhyme of the Tao! 3. What inexplicable weird fairies, demons, demons and monsters!

Just write about cultivating immortals, and it's linked to eating blood food. If you don't eat it, you won't be able to become immortals? Is demand greater than supply? What about logic? How much should a cultivator eat per day? How much do you need to eat in a month? How much do you need to eat in a year? How long does it take for a successfully cultivated monster to grow? Then for the entire cultivation world to practice, how can there be any living people in this world?

This book is just fodder at most. I feel that the author borrowed from several works and mixed them together. His expressive ability is limited. Can't he write his own? First of all, the author's writing of fighting is completely different. Swordsmanship, and others rely on talismans. Later, you will learn the Five Elements from the Book of Heaven, learn invisibility, and learn Mengjing. Why do you want to learn so much? You have been working in the mountains for ten years, and you have to copy the traveling fairy. You also have a good grasp of the direction of expression. Regardless of the genre, the first few chapters are indeed top-notch, but the later chapters gradually decline seriously, especially if there are many bugs before it is put on the shelves. I feel that there are not many normal masters nowadays.

The book is a good book, but there is a reason why it is not very popular. First, let's talk about fan value. Many people who read the book have no fan value at all before first ordering it, so passers-by can't post this chapter at all. Nowadays, many people regard this chapter as a condiment and standard, and run away when they see that there are not many chapters, resulting in a vicious cycle. Forget it if you are a great author, but it is better not to comment on the new book's fan base. If there are any offensive comments, the author can selectively delete them. There is no need to prevent comments from hindering popularity Secondly, there is a problem with the rhythm of the opening, and the coolness time is too long. The overall plot is too scattered. Although the writing is good, it is very tiring to read. In fact, around Chapter 20 to Chapter 30, showing off to others as a saint and holding a sword is a better point. Chapter 50 is really too concise, and the plot is compressed a bit, which is too lengthy.

Speechless, the Book of Heaven is so powerful. Why don't the people on the mountain come looking for me? It was also linked to the law, but no one came to find it? The co-authored book is waiting for the protagonist to come to him, right?

Top1, Southern Dynasties, Eunuch Chen. Reason: His whole body is in Binzhou, and he has been in the palace again and again

After reading books for so many years, this method of updating is disgusting. I will quit.

The writing is good, but the plot is blunt and vulgar. The various lists have been messed up, but relatively speaking, this book is still outstanding. I am afraid that this posture and idea will not be finished.

From immortals to cultivating civilization, from carefree immortals to worldly sophistication, it is well known that those who cultivate immortals are rare and come out of the country, and those who have no spirit are just a bunch of dead people. What they thought were classical immortals is actually just a false shot.

Which book is this author a god of? Each of the six books on the bookshelf has over a million words.

Let's ignite the renaissance fire of Qidian's traditional fantasy fairy tale. What the hell is the current Qidian? The titles of the books are all stinky and long.

1 Monthly pass, okay?

I have been following this great master for more than ten years, and every book is like this.

There is obviously a lot of writing and the storyline is good, but the updates are too slow. I update when I want to, and I stop updating when I don't. How embarrassing it is for readers who care about and like you! ?

Vote for monthly support. At least 5 chapters have been updated.

The eunuch went to the palace early. The author has blocked him and will not read it again next time.

I just like to watch such counter-conventional martial arts and immortality. Don't think I'm a low-level person, I've been reading novels for 10 years. The comment section is clamoring that the author writes that this is not like that, but these people should just read the outline of the routine. I support the author🌹👍

Why is it that it breaks after writing?

Did you go and practice the Sunflower Book?

A good book, what a pity.

The requirements are not high, just keep updating every day

Who would have thought that after saving up and killing the Buddha, there would be no follow-up?