The Strongest Contradiction of Infinity

In fact, the price level of your book is quite bearable. What really makes me most intolerable is that the author of this book is too out of touch. If you write a book, write a book. Why do so many fourth wall breaking operations? If this thing is not played well, it is extremely poisonous and makes people want to vomit. As for playing well, I have never seen it. Just be normal when you write a book.

Long-term acceptance of feedback

Um. . The writing is a bit self-explanatory, and I still need to practice my writing.

I wish the main character was a little crazier. It's better to be crazy like a normal person, like an animated character.

After reading Chapter 6, I found that the author's writing style has a lot of room for improvement. The first copy of "Spirit of the Halberd Eater" and the second copy also felt very disconnected. In addition to Mugenliu and Zhutianliu's basic response to the Shokugeki Spirit, it is better to place the Shokugeki Spirit in a novel that is more suitable for a world.

​​Actually, after I read the recycling function in Chapter 5, I thought it was nonsense. It is normal to recover fifty points for first-level gold. The second-level golden recovery points are actually only 100. The third-level golden recovery points are only 150. You only double it every time you level up, which is too low. The same sale of the third-level golden bloodline would cost 60,000 points. Even if bloodline items are more precious, isn't the difference so bad? I think you should add a zero after each level of recycling. How about not raising the price of that third-level golden bloodline so high? When you do this, you feel like the points you get when you recycle items are very valuable. Points are worthless when buying props. Of course, if you change the bloodline from level three to level seven or eight, then the price will be normal. Otherwise, they are all third-level golden items. The recycling price was only 150, but the sale price was 60,000. Even if there is a certain difference between the two, the price difference is too big. This makes the economy in your book very unreasonable. Although we don't pay much attention to economics when reading books, don't be too outrageous. We don't want the financial aspect to be your advantage. But don't focus on your shortcomings. It's so outrageous that it's easy to feel like it's insulting people's intelligence.

Chifeng Spear, Immortal Shield, kill all the Immortal Kings and destroy Jiutian

It's been a while since I've seen a novel written by a real person, and now many of them are studio articles.

Are you still worried about having five chicken drumsticks in your meal and eating midnight snacks? Do you want to save your dear brother (best friend)'s attractive figure? Are you suffering from insomnia, anxiety and stress? How about sharing this book with her. Take a look before meals and eat less than half a bowl of rice. Read it with meals to speed up gastric motility. Turn your eyes twice before going to bed. Your eyes will turn black and you will sleep until dawn.

Who stole my collection (running around) Who (looks up to the sky and screams) did you steal my subscription (grabbed the collar) said, is it you (stared hard) What? Not you? (Very confused) Who stole my ticket? (Continue running)

I thought it was like an anti-virus software. I watched the beginning of the shield battle for a long time, but I didn't see the shield or your spear. The sword and shield player had the highest expectations for the warrior before carrying 8 and hitting the spear.

Carrying a spear and a shield, crazy Patch, right? The man who kicks your ass in every work

It's a bit of a running story, but there's nothing else that's really bad about it at the moment.

My sword can penetrate all the shields in the world! My shield can't even be pierced by a sword! You say stab my shield with my sword? Food, I am super understanding, shit, ghost.

What's the meaning? Are spears and shields the weapons used by the protagonist? Abilities? Or things like doing things.

The writing is a bit messy. Doesn't look as smooth as anything else

When I saw the title of the book, I thought of the Third Raikage, The Strongest Spear and the Strongest Shield.

Why is the heroic spirit not the first emperor and the most ancient king?