Naruto: This God of Death Is Too Genius

It is tasteless and it would be a pity to throw it away

In Hokage, if you don't have blood and your talent is not good, you have to rely on connections. If you don't even have connections, you are really screwed. Without blood and talent, you are probably at the level of Namikaze Minato. If you don't have talent but have connections. If you say that, you are Jiraiya at best. If you don't even have connections, then you'd better not get involved in the main plot. Of course, if you have a cheat, then just pretend that I didn't say it and you used the cheat. Then you still tell me that you are a civilian?

An ordinary person with nothing, no matter how hard he works, he can become a jounin cannon fodder. Unless he learns medicine, digs out his eyes, and transplants first-generation cells, the protagonist will not die anyway. The upper limit of ordinary people is Beilihu. Beilihu can be considered a genius. He really can't do it without any brains.

Too young. It can be said that all kinds of movies are geniuses in their respective fields. If you are full of talents and develop to the limit, you will be a more comprehensive super movie who can know everything they can. As mentioned downstairs, there are Minato's reactions and speed, Uzumaki's seal, Tsunade's medical skills, Raikage's Thunder Escape Technique, Kai's Eight Gates, Perfect Sage and so on. But you and Naruto are in the same class. You don't have bloodline plug-ins, you don't have grandpa's enlightenment. You rely purely on talent and planning. Can you keep up with grandpa's enlightenment at the age of 15? . . Purely talented people don't need Kakashi's generation to grow up. Otherwise, you are too young to participate in the main plot. Even if you are 15, you will be able to do the above, but your quality will not change. You must have six qualities to reach the ending. So again, your pure talent development is as good as the grandpa's enlightenment. If you open this plug-in, it is better to directly use the bloodline plug-in.

There is a problem with Golden Chapter 3. It is a big problem. The protagonist is introduced to Naruto before he is introduced clearly. Is it necessary? How many Naruto fans are watching who don't know Naruto? How many people don't know what happened to Naruto?

Let's talk about the timeline. First of all, you said that the protagonist is a civilian genius, and you are not a deus ex machina, so you should compare with Minato's talent. Minato became famous because of the Golden Flash and Rasengan. It took him at least fifteen years to master these ninjutsu (the protagonist would have mastered it in ten years if he was stronger). So what is his upper limit? The peak shadow level is considered high, and ordinary Madara can't beat it, let alone Six Paths Madara, or even Kaguya behind him. And the protagonist is the same age as Nazuo, and has at least twelve years of development period. How can you play without a cheat? Ming Zuo was still worried. The old man forced me to cheat and level up. How can your whiteboard compare with other people's gold accounts?

Tsangsengan's book "Clone Blood Successor Snare Fusion" is really a life-changing thing, and it is one of the best among the current unsystematic Hokage fandom.

I thought I was reading a novel, but actually I was reading the narration! A lot of text that has nothing to do with the plot is piled up into a 2,000-word chapter. The three elements of the novel: characters, storyline, environment description... I have briefly mentioned it. Is it reasonable?

Talent is too general. If the protagonist is at the level of ordinary people in terms of physical fitness, understanding, etc., It will be really disappointing. Without the help of awesome angel investors, he may not be able to touch the edge of jounin in his whole life.

If you want to rely on talent to surpass bloodline in Hokage, and you have been with Naruto for a while, what talent is needed if you want to be the main force in the final battle? I will briefly analyze it ① Chakra, if you want to become a strong person, you must not lack chakra, but because the author used a template of an ordinary person without blood, chakra is as high as Sarutobi Hiruzen's level ② Ninjutsu talent , you must have a talent that surpasses Itachi or even Sarutobi Hiruzen. You must be able to master ordinary ninjutsu at a glance, and you must ponder for a while to learn forbidden arts. Otherwise, you will have to participate in the final showdown in Naruto's class ③ The talent for senjutsu must be at least Kabuto's talent for senjutsu. You must practice perfect senjutsu. This is a super buff ④ Taijutsu and Eight Gate Dungeon talents are stronger than Kai's talents. Adding an explosive ninjutsu will prevent him from practicing and risking his life. ⑤ To adapt to the transplantation talent of Hashirama cells, Sarutobi Hiruzen level chakra still has a great advantage in the early stage, but it is far from enough in the later stage. Hashirama cells must be used to increase it. Strengthen your own recovery and chakra, and prepare for the transplantation of the Rinnegan Eye ⑥ Firm willpower, at least the level Obito missed Rin at. After the protagonist successfully transplanted Hashirama cells, he found a way to regenerate the Rinnegan Eye, and became the Ten-Tails Jinchuuriki before Obito could absorb the Ten-Tails, or when Obito was defeated. After that, everything was easy to say.

The moment the protagonist proposed reunification, I felt a little bad and felt that there was something wrong with the plot logic. It's not that it can't be unified, but the protagonist's proposal is too abrupt. Because, before this, the protagonist has never made any preparation for this, that is, the author has not made any foreshadowing. If you look for the reason seriously, it is what he thinks, and in fact, it is what the author thinks. There is only one preparation for this, one that is strong enough. In other words, the protagonist has become stronger, and the author wants him to abolish the existing "Daimyo-Ninja Village" system and unify the world. (It feels like you want to achieve an achievement) But what are the disadvantages of the current system? Why would it be better after unification? What kind of system will be built after unification (can't it still be "Daimyo-Ninja Village")? What to do after reunification? Waiting for related issues, they are not covered at all. These questions are actually about how to make the world a better place. If only, I am strong and I want to unify, so I have to unify. So with the protagonist's current supermodel strength, how can he play house with them? As long as the tailed beast is controlled, Akatsuki won't be able to cause a splash, and then it's over with a sweep. After all, it's already as strong as a supermodel.

I hope the author can write less analysis of the protagonist himself, or not write it at all. In fact, it is not necessary to understand what is going on in many things, especially in matters of cultivation. A brief summary is enough. There is no need to analyze what is going on all the time. In addition, some events in the original work and the opinions of the characters can be directly concluded. There are two reasons. The first is the analysis of Tai Shui. Well, in fact, what you read in novels is the plot and plot. Secondly, everyone may have different opinions on various details. Even if the final conclusion is the same, everyone may not have the same opinion on the intermediate details. This may cause some readers who disagree with the author to abandon the book or quarrel in the paragraphs and comments, which will affect the perception. I hope the author will write better⌓‿⌓

The three golden chapters only introduce the background and family time points More than fifty chapters start charging More than one hundred chapters on the mission of the Land of Waves Big Water Bi

After reading eight chapters, what I saw was a repetitive introduction of future plans. The content was very empty and the main plot was not seen. The plan is only to obtain the immortal body and what ninjutsu can be combined with it in the future, and he keeps emphasizing that he will not transplant cells and eyes in the future, and then in the next paragraph he will say that he will not give up if he has the opportunity, which appears more than once in these eight chapters. Even the future team members have to predict that they will enter Class 7, analyze the situation of other elite classes, and then come to the conclusion that if they want to enter the elite class, they can only replace Haruno Sakura into Class 7. The protagonist made this decision before chakra refinement and physical training did not show any talent, which seemed very abrupt.

Wait, if you don't have blood but have talent, can't you just synthesize the Blood Successor Snare? Isn't this the only way out for geniuses without Otsutsuki blood? Step by step, first limit the blood inheritance, then eliminate the blood stains, and finally snare. Since this book is based on talent flow, it will be a piece of cake for the protagonist, right?

Ah, no matter how talented you are, can you still live well in the world of Hokage if you don't have any skills?

After reading the beginning, I can only say that the protagonist is ordinary and confident.

The third golden chapter has the feeling of abandoning the book. First of all, the protagonist is the same age as Naruto, has no bloodline, and has no plug-ins (it has not appeared yet) It takes almost a chapter to explain the possibility and reasons of replacing Sakura, most of which are taken too much for granted. The behavior is a bit strange (tell Naruto that you don't need to pay as much attention as the villagers in the class, and don't be so close, just be ordinary friends), don't you think there is something wrong with this sentence? It's like two villains meeting secretly and sitting back to back to avoid being discovered and saying "Let's talk normally and don't get discovered" After reading a few more chapters, it's really verbose and self-righteous.

This author is definitely an experienced author of hydrology, as Che Zuluo repeatedly said

Why should you be the protagonist if you don't have anything? For ordinary people, the upper limit is an elite jounin, and the highest level is a quasi-kage level. Have you ever seen that the ultra-kage level ninja in Naruto is not related to the Otsutsuki family by blood? In the world of blood, what is the point of not talking about blood? Kakashi is a typical example. He was a jounin in his teens and has been a jounin all his life.

I am really tired from reading it. After reading the first three chapters, I am more tired than reading 100 chapters of other novels. Authors who write fan fiction always like this way of writing. They spend a long time talking about some small things, without writing much about the plot. The whole article is filled with "I think" and "I think". They have to put forward a point of view, and then they don't say whether this point of view is reasonable or not, and whether it will be adopted in the future. They use a bunch of nonsense and a bunch of anime plots just to prove that what they put forward is right. The whole chapter is a psychological description, not the protagonist's, but the author's own psychology. It's not divided into sections, so reading a novel is like reading an essay.

It's really bland, the writing is okay, and overall it still follows the plot of Naruto, only a few small things have been changed. However, the protagonist is taken for granted, and there is no highlight. He has a mediocre personality, mediocre abilities, nothing to shine, and his name is very funny. , This is very fatal. You can be a little crazy, you can be a little crazy, and you can be a little saintly, but you can't have no highlights. You don't have Hokage eyes, tattoos, or ninjutsu. You just take all kinds of things for granted. What about becoming an immortal? Isn't that nonsense? Otsutsuki is really a great person, what can you do as a fairy built with natural energy? Can it travel across the universe? Nonsense

After reading a few chapters, I have no sense of immersion at all. There is no golden finger. The protagonist can just rely on his own foresight to become stronger? It gives people a very nonsense feeling.

The protagonist has no system, no bloodline, no boundaries of blood inheritance, and no tailed beasts... He said that he wants to grow to the top as a human being 🙂 Has the author never read the comics at all? You don't know why Naruto is called the Eye Legend? Naruto is basically the story of Otsutsuki and her children

There are so many worlds... Generally speaking, this kind of novel always feels like the heroine of the first world is forgotten by the end.

I don't know how to put it, I read about 40 chapters, the creativity is good, but the writing is too poor, a lot of psychological descriptions, trivial things, I wrote 3 or 4 chapters, I really can't keep going.

Can Naruto play without blood? It's hard to play even if you have blood, let alone an ordinary person. Otsutsuki's one kick and Susanoo's complete body. Any one of them is guaranteed to have a minimum of six paths.

No difference Ino is cute

Why are most of the fandom in Konoha? Are there any novels from the outside world that make Konoha fall down?

This book shouldn't have been written, the God of Death will come later