Break Out of the Courtyard

I was a little speechless. When I saw the Sanxingdui suddenly popping up from the back, I recognized the small flaws in the front. But this sudden escape from the urban studio to fantasy is really speechless. I feel like all the previous subscriptions were in vain.

Putting poison, right? The alchemist wrote and put it all the way

Can the protagonist have a good end? It's too tolerable, but it's a pity that it's better to 'punch away', 'keep breaking', 'hungry is not his father', 'none of my business' It's still a free ticket.

Why do so many people demonize Siheyuan? In fact, if you watch the TV series, you can see that it has always been just a few of them. They are willing to fight and suffer when they play their own tricks. Qin Huairu discovered the little thoughts of a few of them. No one was really stupid.

I owe a lot of debt, I can't even eat, and I still want to help a few relatives. I'm seriously mentally ill. In those days, poor people in the countryside didn't recognize or visit their relatives.

The beginning of the writing is okay, but the rest of the writing has the same feeling. Relatives and friends are all my sons, and they must be managed and taken care of.

Seeing that there was a feeling of suffocation in my heart that made me feel uncomfortable.

The author had a weak point in the early stage, which was the distribution between fishing and the third uncle. It is estimated that many people abandoned the book here.

A cheating coward is still a coward

It's even more disgusting to see the thief's relatives extorting 3,600 plus two main houses. . If I were a fool, I would directly find someone to kill the protagonist's whole family afterwards.

I'm really impressed by your book and your person. His father is not compensated for his work-related injury, but his mother doesn't want to work in the steel rolling mill?

Why do you have to pay Yan Lao five yuan for selling the fish? Are you poor and generous?

The author has good writing skills, but the more he writes, the more disgusting he becomes. Why? For the first time, I understood what nanny writing is.

To be honest, it's really incomprehensible that you still have the energy to consider your neighbors' feelings when you don't even have enough to eat! When you are so hungry that you can probably do anything. Managing your reputation is something only those who want to make progress can do when they are full! Like Yi Zhonghai, bangs! Those who are not full will try their best to eat like Yan Fugui! The protagonists in many novels travel back in time and live in poverty. They don't even have enough to eat, so they start thinking about how not to offend their neighbors. Thinking about resisting oppression will offend people and have a bad reputation. Only people who have never been hungry can think about it!

Seeing so many people complain makes me relieved. Not my problem.

I finally understand why there are fewer people reading and commenting on this novel as it gets later. The author wants to write about the growth of a little character. But how can a wall-mounted wall-mounted person with a vision for the future compromise on one thing and compromise on the other? ! You must know that even if everything is gone now, he can get up again. They always write about compromise, forgetting that the protagonist can still live a good life without compromising.

After watching a few pictures, the main character has intellectual problems! There are too many confusing operations! Even if I took advantage of the third uncle when fishing for the first time, I still want to cooperate with him! There is obviously a more suitable candidate in the courtyard, Silly Zhu! Or sell it yourself! Moreover, it was the first time I took the third uncle fishing. The protagonist caught the fish, and the protagonist sold it, and even gave the third uncle 5 yuan. I was speechless!

If it keeps interrupting and procrastinating, you think it is "advanced". In my opinion, it has no effect other than disgusting us readers. You can continue to indulge in your own writing thinking!

1. Is fishing so easy? Money comes too easily. 2. The two women from the uncle's family brought it. I don't understand the meaning of the author's arrangement. There are 7 people in the family, and there is only one male lead. There are already 4 people who all depend on the male lead, and two more come. 😭

Brother, if you write a fanfic, you should write a fanfic. Although the protagonist has been getting better and better, have you also considered punishing the bad guys? Others have been disgusting, why don't you go back in revenge? Write some more about other people's reactions after taking revenge.

Is this about writing about bloody reality? I only saw that the protagonist was a good health pack and fed a lot of people. I admire the greatness of the protagonist, but I don't like how great I am as the protagonist.

Zhang Zhaodi

As the old saying goes, it's not the business that's in the running. You're so eager to post it, but you won't get any money back, and you'll face all kinds of difficulties later on. What on earth do you want to express in this plot? Want both the enjoyment of capital and social fairness? Do you want the earth to revolve around you, to be immortal, to be quite a dictator? I don't understand what you are trying to express. A lot of people must have scolded you since you wrote this plot.

It took so long to develop the protagonist in the early stage, and finally the father who supported others regardless of the family burden, the grandmother who favored the eldest son and grandson, the uncle's family who was supercilious, and the work and marriage of the three sisters were all successfully solved. I thought that I would continue to grow with the help and support of my family. In the end, the female classmate was sent to the rubber plantation because of her selfishness, and she mainly wanted to help this girl. This paragraph is probably the author's intention to allow the protagonist to leave the capital and have time to go to Hong Kong Island, forget it. Later, he went to a clinic again but ended up working as a mayor, and ended up becoming a teacher again. The main protagonist's skills are too complicated to learn. In the early stage, he also knew how to brush the body strengthening skills, but I won't mention the Qigong skills. It's a good novel, but it's too jumpy. I feel that all the hard work the protagonist has put in has been in vain. He helps relatives at home, goes out to help classmates, and then helps colleagues and subordinates. It feels like the protagonist has been making sacrifices, but received too little feedback. Sometimes it feels quite worthless. It would be better if there were more in this regard. At least it makes people feel that the protagonist's efforts are not in vain.

In the later stage, I wrote it completely for the sake of zz's correctness. I was so frustrated. To be honest, I had already written about the system, and there were also Sanxingdui alien technology, qigong and the like. You might as well turn to the solitary method or upgrade the dimension to martial arts in the later stage.

Zhang Pandi

This book is awesome

After thinking about it carefully, I feel that it still has some flavor, and it looks much better than others. The rhythm of the outline is well controlled.

After the disgusting part about the third uncle, the rest of the story was pretty good, but I felt a bit aggrieved.

Update a thousand chapters and become a rich man! Author, please keep updating, thanks to Oli!