Comprehensive Martial Arts: Starting from the Rebirth of Murong Fu

There are also a few Murong Fu fanfics at the starting point I only read the first few chapters and this one is the best The other books are first of all not detailed enough, and the plot moves too fast, and the writing style is too Jin Yong's ancient style. The interaction with the girl is also a bit cliché, and the description of the cousin is the same, and there are two poisonous points 1. What is mentioned in this book: Pure Love, but the protagonist is a time traveler who completely replaces the original body, not as good as the setting of the fusion of memory and personality in this book 2. Use the method of pulling and stepping. It expresses the beauty of my cousin better than A'Zhu. Although I only wrote one sentence, I just want to say haha And this book looks much better

So far, I have read Chapter 31, which is very good and unsystematic. The biggest golden finger is time travel, or reincarnation, the general strategy, from practicing martial arts to reviving the country, to pursuing immortality. The protagonist's demeanor is well written, as if the author is the son of a big family in reality. In fact, there is one point: why not teach the people around him to practice martial arts? For example, to have good health and long-lasting appearance, although ordinary people are indispensable for fighting, masters are also indispensable.

It's not that good, so be it. He's just a little bit worse than Zhang Wuxiaolang. It is said that the portrayal is too affectionate and does not have the bearing of a hero or a hero. He is good at talking and talking, but he only does useless work and does nothing practical. He has no talents, no counselors, no counselors, and no generals under his command. They are all rotten sweet potatoes and rotten bird eggs. The four retainers under my command are also incompetent. They can do business in the world. Let them manage, start a business, and bribe. Do you think they are the right ones? The male protagonist is also portrayed as having a high vision but a low hand. If he has money, he must first organize the ANBU and the Intelligence Department and collect intelligence talents. If he wants to be a ruler, he must not make full use of the money first. If he doesn't know who he is, he will be blind. The starting goal is very cheating, but later on, pick up girls, travel around, and compete for martial arts! Don't even know what they are doing. The author would like you to please take a closer look at the talents, generals, and unappreciated talents in this period. This is no better than just talking.

It feels flashy, especially if you know how to do that or that. I feel like I'm going to suffer from embarrassment. There is no detailed explanation of the operation. A general structure is boring.

The protagonist's reputation is much greater than that of the original Murong Fu, but a third-rate guy still looks down on the protagonist. Even if it's mixed martial arts, it's too exaggerated. Do you still have to be so angry in your own country? Why do I feel like I can't compare to Murong Fu in the original work?

It doesn't make sense for a comprehensive martial arts novel not to have a harem, right? The author is great

What kind of plot is sleeping with three women in the same bed and doing nothing. Is it to show the protagonist's decency? It's funny, in ancient times it made no difference to women whether you did it or not.

Readers can freely express their thoughts below this floor, but they can also listen to the author's complaints first 🙂. As an author, I may still be a newbie. But please don't doubt how sensitive an old white reader is to poisonous points. First of all, why should I write this kind of martial arts fan fiction? Isn't it because many books in the world are too poisonous? Except that the system is mindless and fun, and I personally hate system texts very much, so I don't want to read anything with Deep Blue. (It's not meant to target any colleagues 🙂 It's purely personal preference) The second thing is to read The Sword of the Master of the Old Fei from Emei, I am the Edge. As soon as he wrote the book, I felt a strong sense of martial arts style, as if I was suddenly transported back to the era when martial arts novels were popular. I personally wanted to write a book after reading it. Not much to say, if only there could be ten old flying warriors who could write non-stop, I would also write a Gouba martial arts fanfic and binge-watch his articles. It's because there are so few books like this.

The investment in follow-up reading of the new book issue is very important, and will affect the subsequent recommendation position and exposure of the book in the future. Now that martial arts novels are in decline, it is difficult to create a flesh-and-blood martial arts novel. Therefore, readers who like this book hope to read more about investment. After the book is put on the shelves, it will be updated based on the data.

It's so 6. In recent chapters, I almost overturned when fighting these Mongolian soldiers. They like to pretend to be B and travel without their subordinates, right? The protagonist is inexplicably unable to pretend to be B. Can these people be considered masters?

The writing is quite good, but it's a pity that it's mixed martial arts. I only have one sentence about mixed martial arts: Comparing combat abilities across the world is xx

I don't know how many people like cold-blooded and Machiavellian protagonists, but I personally feel that characters like Zhang Juzheng of the Ming Dynasty in history and Li Chengyin of Donggong in the TV series are quite cool, mainly because they are fun for me to write. Videos that are infringing will be deleted. Delete immediately.

In fact, it was to divide the Jin Kingdom in the Southern Song Dynasty into two, so that the Jin Kingdom occupied the central capital and the Liao Kingdom occupied the capital. In addition, the entire territory of Xiliao was annexed by Mongolia. It's not difficult to understand.

It feels like a eunuch, it's very well written, it's a pity

I have read Chapter 28 so far, and there are no big bugs or poisonous points. If the pig-footed character is as suitable as the author said, the writing really doesn't tell that I am a novice. If I want to write exciting mixed martial arts, it is really difficult. The relationship between the characters is difficult to control. As long as I can justify myself, I can accept it... , All aspects of character design... First of all, in terms of human morality, the author is determined to establish a country and be an emperor, so don't restrict too much. Make the best use of things and make the best use of people's talents. This can well explain the code of conduct of pig's feet and treating others... The most important thing is that since we want to compete for hegemony, we must train, reserve and recruit talents. Generals, commanders, counselors, scholars, farmers, industry and commerce, all talents must be laid out early. The most important thing is news. Source, intelligence laying is very important, as well as doing dark work and cultivating dead soldiers... Otherwise, who will fight for you, who will give you information, who will manage the territory for you, and who will provide logistics support. I really want to count on the four generals, not to mention their abilities, but loyalty. Feeling, don't be like most fans' martial arts fighting novels. I have a lot of ideas and can't write them out. Even if I write them, they will be inconsistent. The plot is scattered, and the pig's feet just don't do the real thing. Then there will be a loss of readers, the results are not ideal, the author has no motivation, and the book will slowly end or not finish...

This is cutting, don't, it's not easy to find the instinct to read some martial arts novels...

Because the martial arts fandom has been badly written, you kind of want to find a different approach, start from the aspect of taking over the world, and set the protagonist's goal towards rebellion, instead of the "first in martial arts" of other martial arts fans But you haven't considered it at all. The martial arts plot and the rebellion plot are inherently inferior. So what your protagonist does is "create a chamber of commerce and gather the power of the world", which is incompatible with the protagonist's goal. On the contrary, it seems very cumbersome, not on topic, and even petty. And your protagonist's character creation is rubbish. What kind of person the protagonist is is very fragmented. For example, when the protagonist leaves Jiangnan, his words give readers a cold and domineering feeling. But if you write about his shady bet with the four evil men, wouldn't you feel disconnected? You should write that the protagonist beats the four villains or Tian Boguang to death with one blow (or the protagonist asks them to write down the martial arts secret book and then kills them without warning). Only then does the protagonist appear to be domineering and unscrupulous, rather than being used as a dog to the opponent if he can't master thirty moves. Isn't that childish? The character of the protagonist collapsed instantly. Didn't you find that these plots have caused you to lose a lot of active readers? (There are fewer chapters and comments at the beginning of these sections) You may think that the protagonist's actions are in line with your ideas, but don't forget that those are your ideas, to put it bluntly. When you write an online novel, you have to consider the readers' ideas and perceptions. Your ideas are not important at all. And your plot and logic are far-fetched. For example, if you want to rebel and seize the world, what kid from a wealthy family who has assets and territory will be busy setting up some kind of chamber of commerce to recruit gangsters? Directly make firearms, filter salt, burn glass, combine cement, and train the army. Your method is simply not up to par with the methods of rebellion, so I say that the main character's goal is completely inconsistent with the mixed martial arts plot, so you can't write it like this. The book was written with great care, but the path was not followed correctly and other aspects were not taken into consideration. No wonder the results were not good.

It's strange to say: I have never read a martial arts novel, and only glanced at a few TV series. It can be said that I have almost only heard the names of the characters written by Jin Gu; but I have listened to a lot of songs such as The Hard to Recite Sutra, Iron-Blooded Heart, Myth and Love Songs😁 But I also like to watch the mixed martial arts world written by various authors. The different understandings and different interpretation methods of the same character are quite interesting to compare. Unfortunately, it is still difficult to find works with self-consistent logic and a responsible protagonist. The author's book Reincarnation Murong Fu and Lao Feixia's Sword Out of Emei, I Am the Front are both very good; There are also protagonists who are relatively good at fishing, and the protagonist of My Days of Opening a Tavern in Zongwu written by Da Tuanzi belongs to the health-preserving stream; There is also the No. 1 Jianghu Fengyun written by Ku Kong Sanren. Knife, before the story begins. The author has specially written a lot of interpretations of "Swordsman", "Dragon", "Xiao Shiyilang" and "Tianya·Mingyue·Knife". It is very interesting and I highly recommend reading the preface to the end (this is the first time I have read a novel seriously for so long at the starting point😂).

Isn't Aluo delicious? Isn't the "big" rich woman 10,000 times more beautiful than her cousin?

Some readers actually said that I am a novice reader and dare not kill NPCs for fear of affecting the plot of the original novel. I must show you the latest chapter. Don't judge others by yourself and make groundless assumptions. 😆😆😆

Well, you really can't have too high expectations! ! !

Welcome to taste it and see if the writing is good