I'm Just an Ordinary Passerby Cultivating Immortals

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the protagonist has no golden fingers. What's so cool about it?

Just ready to watch 👀, did you "update two days ago"? ? !

The protagonist doesn't report to the sect when something big happens to him. Although this sect is trying to exploit others, it is still an orthodox sect. The golden elixir monk fights the protagonist while he is practicing Qi and refuses to run away. Instead, he goes back to pick up the leak, saying that he is very stubborn, and then kills his fellow disciples.

The name is indeed correct, it is indeed ordinary and not distinctive.

The setting is too rough. 1. Only qi-training geniuses are allowed to enter the secret realm. There is no "security check" method at all. There are foundation-building ghosts in the soul sail, and there are so many spies mixed in. 2. The classification of levels is unclear. It is completely unclear what is the essential difference between Qi training and foundation building, what are the characteristics of each method, and what is the conflict between good and evil. "The sword shines across the sky" (Chapter 36) - What level this sword belongs to during the Qi training period, whether it has a restraint relationship with the opponent, and what level the opponent is, everyone is confused. 3. The protagonist's setting is demanding, but not strict at all. When the soul is completed, all kinds of motives for joining in the fun no longer exist. 4. The writing of female characters is too ambiguous, and they often have small hands and small faces.

The first three chapters are really good, but the rest are too ordinary. The author needs to polish the first three chapters for a month.

Is the author really just a stranger? Eat a fried cake 🤓

Whatever role you want, you can leave it here.

He and Huo Yun'er felt inexplicably and got madly involved.

The introduction is quite interesting, but I don't know if the content is good or not.

It won't be updated anymore. Can you give me a message from the author?

The picture was found on Baidu, the approximate image of Lin Qingxuan in the author's mind (deleted for infringement)

It's well written, not abusive, but the title of the book doesn't quite fit the bill. The characters are lifelike, and there are emotional links and ups and downs. I hope the protagonist's character can be maintained in the later stages. Come on.

Xuan Dao Zong, this name, Diao Diao Diao

I looked at two or three and they were pretty good. After checking his eyes, he is a Gou King.