Dual-Track Space-Time

Thirty-year-old Mimi loves twenty-year-old Xu Ping. Twenty-year-old Mimi also loves twenty-year-old Xu Ping. I also like twenty-year-old Xu Ping who is optimistic and positive. Alas, no one loves thirty-year-old Xu Ping. No wonder he jumped into the river.

The portrayal of the thirty-year-old Xu Ping was quite successful, making everyone fall in love with the twenty-year-old Xu Ping, but I still hope that the thirty-year-old Xu Ping can become a little better. At the age of 30, he may have flaws all over his body, but he was once a person who was loved by everyone. The weight of life oppressed him so hard that he finally jumped into the river. Without that coin, his life would have come to an end, and all that would be left on his tombstone would be the life of a loser. At the age of twenty, he could still love life in such a situation. Wasn't that what Xu Ping was like in the past? Life has smoothed his edges, and the weight has oppressed his soul. In this way, step by step, he has become his thirty-year-old self, a decadent and greasy middle-aged man. I hope to see a better Xu Ping, whether it is him in 2013 or 2023. I also hope that everyone can become a better version of themselves.

Some comments in the comment area are a bit harsh, but they are also somewhat reasonable. The description of some characters and events is indeed a bit deliberate, but the flaws of the whole work cannot be concealed. I learned from the side that the author occasionally stops updating, and the first few articles may be so-called unfinished, but this is the first time I clicked on your book. I spent a whole night reading it carefully and the aftertaste is still there, as if after eating fast food for many years, I suddenly tasted the steamed buns that my mother steamed all afternoon when I was a child (I suddenly remembered that before reading online articles, I also grew up in physical books, science fiction, narrative novels and other genres in my adolescence) Although I am young, I have experienced social baptism with great intensity for several years. I have worked day and night in the tired service industry, and I have been promoted and promoted in the wine pool and meat forest, but in the end I have nothing. What is left is only a greasy beer belly and a greasy brain. In the end, I only remember the happy and unrestrained time in college. At that time, I played in a band and toured various schools while doing crazy self-improvement in the student union. At that time, the sun was warm and the wind was sweet. Every step I took was happy and determined, as if I could face any future with a smile. Friends who have experienced ups and downs in life should be able to sympathize with this book, but friends who cannot empathize should not be angry. Either you have bloomed flowers along the way and have never been exposed to wind and rain. I hope you will always be brilliant and never understand the fatigue of others; When I read this book, I always had a thought in my mind: "If only I had the capital, I could make this story into a movie or web series." Unfortunately I didn't. . The camera sense in the book is quite good, and the concept and setting may have been combined with many classic film and television works, such as The Butterfly Effect, Back to the Future, etc. However, compared to Western movies that emphasize causal effects and reflect heroism, the actual core of the book is actually the thinking about human nature and self-salvation. Cloaked in love, it is indeed an out-and-out Eastern philosophy story. Assuming that all this time travel is just a dream of 30-year-old Xu Ping, the story is still reasonable. A lifelong optimistic person may be lost for a while, but if one day he wakes up and gives himself a proposition of "what should I do if the 20-year-old me takes my place to face everything now?" After thinking and reasoning in this way, Xu Ping is still the same Xu Ping, with justice and romance thrown back. Of course, maybe they have never disappeared. Finally, back to the topic, I hope the author can keep writing, not only this book, but also more good stories. No matter you are an ordinary person, a rich person, a boss or a poor person in life, every character is the author's child. I don't know your situation, but I know your character. Those who never give up will definitely be rewarded in life, and good stories will have more good readers. You see, Coca-Cola and Burgers were very popular back then. Nowadays, Chinese people are still somewhat enthusiastic about them. If it weren't for the inconvenience of life, you and I would still love flowers, tea, and have fun in the kitchen.        ，，，

No, brother, what I read earlier was okay. It's understandable that Hu Yuejiao asked her ex-boyfriend to borrow money. She asked her ex-boyfriend to borrow money from usury and then lend it to her. The key point is that she agreed. Is this a plot that people can think of? The conflict setting of this plot is too weird.

It's so well written, I look forward to seeing it on TV one day

It's so fun, right? Although I had a feeling that this plot would happen after seeing it before, the latest chapter has solidified my thoughts and made me feel that it's a pity that I have fallen into a cliche. The twenty-year-old male protagonist in the future undoubtedly cannot change anything. He can only follow the changes of the thirty-year-old male protagonist in the past and make corresponding changes. This will undoubtedly change the original dual male protagonist to a single male protagonist. No matter what, I'll keep reading, hoping it doesn't fall into a cliche and doesn't make it a single-male protagonist, which would be too boring. However, it is indeed difficult to write dual male protagonists. I hope the author can work hard.

Shouldn't you invest in the city? How to invest in reality?

Come on! Like twenty-year-old Xu Ping, don't give up!

This type of writing feels so difficult to write. If you don't pay attention, it will jump.

This is really like a brain-burning blockbuster, but in the end it is every middle-aged person's dream to go back to the past and save their lost love. Back then, I lost my lover who loved me the most because of my naivety and dissipation. Now I really wake up from the dream every day in pain.

Be sure to write well, even if it's slow, but don't let it suck! 😡😡😡

The writing is good, but the writing style is not like an online article, but more like a physical book. I'm afraid it won't be very popular at the beginning.

Also helped with his new book "Chronological Essays, Return to the 1985"

Very immersive

Brother author, I don't know whether your writing is messed up or not, but the readers' minds are already messed up. Don't you even know the selling point of your book?

How can I put it this way? The writing is good, but the first few chapters are too easy to persuade you to quit. And then you don't look at what happens in the next few chapters. You just read the first chapters and are directly persuaded to quit, so you won't see the later chapters.

It's really well written. The author writes it very well. I really like 20-year-old Xu Ping. I also read the author's other book "Anonymous Express". I want to say thank you to the author for allowing me to read such a good book. Come on, author! Have a great life and a great future!

It is much better written than the one I read before. At the age of twenty, one does not have much ability, but he can face everything bravely. The decadence of thirty years old can be faced again with the courage of twenty years old. From now on, I will start to worry about how to change the scene. Just don't be a eunuch. Let's change it slowly.

I just finished reading it, and Qidian reminded me that I am the 11th person to finish reading it. It is a very novel idea and a great narrative style. However, in the first 30 chapters, I wanted to give up the book. The 30-year-old protagonist going back to the past was very annoying to read as an old man, and life after 30 was equally annoying. Most of the routines of short videos and online novels have led to the cultivation of the current short-term and fast-paced reading habits, and also make it difficult for readers to accept such a long period of boredom. However, all the starting point routines are also the innovations of predecessors. If you persist in excellent works, you will always achieve success. Already fully booked + rewarded, I hope you can continue to persevere and tell this story well.

The writing is really good, the twenty-year-old protagonist is so charming😭 It's a pity that the real-life partition traffic is too small, cities are much better than this😢

It's too slow, not enough to watch at all 🔨🔨🔨

Alas, there is still a lot of unburdened baggage. But it's not too bad to end it this way. After watching it, I felt like I was watching a movie. I wonder if I will refine it and make it into a movie in the future.

I'm not a buddy, why did you stop updating again? Please give me a preview 😵😵😵