Elves, I Can Hear the Voices of All Things

Reading this novel gives me a sense of déjà vu in a fantasy novel

The introduction is good, but it is recommended that the plot needs to be polished 1. Team Rocket currently expresses the evil of not treating people as human beings. Then remember to add why you still become Team Rocket after passing the test instead of running away, such as because you are used to the environment, have a criminal record, the benefits of full members, etc. Otherwise, it feels that there will be a lot of undercover members among the bottom members written so far, which means that the charm of the villain must be there 2. It is recommended that some of the wording be modified to make it smoother 3. It is not good to miss too many points. For example, I think 2,000 points is unreasonable. A large organization like the Rockets should use an intelligent inspection system. If the excess points are used later, it is easy to find problems and need to be rounded. If it is not for the subsequent plot, it is recommended to replace it 4. It is recommended that the plug-in ability should not only be used for picking up leaks, but also listen to the voice of all things. Function suggestions: On the one hand, it can be used to understand the thoughts of Pokémon to strengthen the description of bonds The second aspect can be evolved into hearing the disharmony of the body/object/moves to improve medical abilities/weakness detection/training abilities, etc. The third aspect can be used in production, at the beginning. The finished product is not good, and when you hear items complaining about errors, don't do it for the first time, because the plug-in is top-notch, but it will be popular with the public Finally, according to the plug-in ability seen so far, it is to hear the "voice of the heart" rather than "omniscient". The poisonous point of this type of ability lies in some brand-new formulas, machines, moves, etc. Who can tell you how to do it better if you have never used it? If you have never used something before, you can listen to the explanation of how to use it, which is the theoretical goal. But if this thing has not been used, how can you know the results after use? Of course, if you want to go to the omniscient and omnipotent path in the future, just pretend I didn't say it, but now the problem is actually very big. I suggest you write it well. Come on, author.

It's not like Pokémon, it's like watching Battle Through the Sky.

Why do I always feel that most of the dark and realistic Pokémon novels start with fly-type or poison-type Pokémon? Aren't these fairies and steel types delicious? 🤔

The introduction is very attractive and the writing is pretty good so far, but the qualifications are written in red, orange, yellow, green, blue, purple and I have to think about it every time I read it.

Qidian has developed a relatively complete set of elf qualification levels in recent years. Just look at the few well-written books and you will know. It's easy to get confused if you pull one by yourself😵😵😵

Generally speaking, it's okay, but the amount of money given to the protagonist is unreasonable. You can tell from his clothes that he is not from the Rockets. As a result, he can spend thousands and thousands of points in the logistics department. I don't believe that places that play digital currency do not record consumption records. Even if they don't record, others will know there is something wrong when they see the protagonist's big spending. Each of the prospective newcomers has two hundred, but the protagonist can spend thousands and thousands. He is not so conspicuous in the crowd.

I really like novels with this theme, but I hope the author can improve his writing style. I don't know why it always feels so uncomfortable to read😔

Is there a female protagonist? I like watching movies with female protagonists

Occasional opportunities can bring surprises, but the protagonist's endless opportunities make people feel tired.