After Turning into a Cat, He Began to Cultivate Beautiful Girls

The author has so much to complain about. The most important thing is that the background of the heroine might as well be a child from an ordinary family. Living alone, with a vicious stepmother and a vicious sister, and the right to inherit the family, it is a miracle that the girl survived under such circumstances.

It's really a renaissance. After reading three chapters, can the heroine's dad still inherit the family business if he is such a loser? Since he acknowledges the eldest lady, doesn't it mean that his father approves it? I feel like he is writing a female channel.

If the author doesn't like it, let's find an AI to polish it up 🙂

I'm really convinced that the first heir is an illegitimate child. Why don't we change the heroine's background and make it very contradictory? Her father cares about her, and she is still the first heir, but her status is the same as that of a maid who was born after drunken sex. Are you a fool? The first heir must be cultivated no matter how much, right? It feels like it's not about cultivation, it's like the status is the same.

After reading the introduction, you can summarize the content of this book. The protagonist is the heroine's plug-in.

The recognized first heir has no face at all? Even if you are in the academy and living outside, you still need to have a maid, bodyguard, etc., Right? And if you were beaten like this, was it a human being? It's the face of a family, okay? No matter how useless you are, as long as the inheritance rights remain unchanged, you will be the future successor of the family. The result is like this? And the heroine's character, etc… how was she developed?

I am the Chosen God of Khorne and I can't bear to see the heroine being so aggrieved. Now I just want to cut it off! Cut it! Minced! I want to kill, kill, kill, kill!

If you change the background of the heroine, I feel that the results of this book will be better

I think it's well written. What other people said has the beauty of the old times, but I didn't see it, so I'll just write it down like this without breaking down.

The writing of the plot is a bit awkward, and the dungeon is just like playing a game.

Is she the kind of person who treats his wife like a daughter?

The author may have submitted the wrong channel. I just started and I haven't figured out the steps yet. I'm going to post an antique article to test the waters 🤔

Do you always feel that the author doesn't pay attention to logic when writing novels? Before writing a novel, think about how to tell the story well. The logic makes no sense. I feel a little headache even if I don't use my brain to read it.

The subject matter is good, but the writing skills are not very good, which is a pity

Without a complete power system, it's hard to watch 🙂

I won't talk about anything else. It's a small problem and it's acceptable. Why is your combat system so messed up? Can't you write about monster hunting with reference to the level of the game itself? Before a certain level, it is a low level, after a certain level, it is a high level, after how many levels, it is a battle, and after how many levels, it is a battle king. As you wrote, the difference between the lower fire dragon and the upper blue fire dragon is only a few levels, right? Moreover, the combat power level of your main world is also a bit low. After clearing the monster hunter, you can even push the main world. Do you have any need to write about other worlds? , And the protagonist is too brainless. There are no restrictions on entering the world, and there are no restrictions on upgrading the devouring ability. You can't fight one by one in order and upgrade all the way, right? If there is a safe way, you have to give up and find someone you can't defeat?

It looks like a Western fantasy, but what it writes is like a fantasy. It's really like the Renaissance.

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What about Chapter 157? ~ Not ready to do it? ~

I really thought it was over, but I didn't expect it to be a eunuch. . . .

Does the author have any ideas for a new book?