
Konoha: My Ninja Beasts Are Tom and Jerry
木叶:我的忍兽是汤姆和杰瑞
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 87k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The plot of the Sealed Book is poorly written. The Sealed Book is a good thing, but it is worth getting it as if you were possessed by an evil spirit. Others are already suspicious of you. No matter how weird and unpredictable you are and there is no evidence, it will only increase your own suspicion. You know it is a trap, but you still jump into it. The protagonist can say that he cannot move without evidence, but the protagonist's father who was guarding the Hokage building was stolen, and he is still suspected of committing theft! It's really a scam. Then the third generation and the pot shadow were one red and the other white, and the protagonist pretended to be cat and mouse and slapped him in the face?
There are ideas, but the plot is too bad, especially the plot of the sealed book, it is terrible
The plot of the Sealed Book is hard to explain in one sentence, and you know the plot. At this time, let these two get some first-generation cells, get the wood escape talent, and use the copy soup to get a Sharingan. If they are afraid of being too open, get a reduced version. If they are still afraid of it being too big, let Tom and Jerry do mechanisms and ninja martial arts.
It's a joke that Tom can't catch Jerry. It was said in the first episode of Cat and Mouse that Tom is an expert mouse catcher and loses his job when he catches mice. When he comes to his new home, he catches Jerry. Then when he thinks of losing his job, he starts to raise the criminals. Don't look at the fun they have afterward. It's a show for the boss. If the boss brings a new cat home, Tom and Jerry will join forces and dare to go out soon🐱
Naruto fanfics will either have original male protagonists, or they will be male protagonists from several blood step families. Sarutobi, Shimura, Gosan, etc. Will definitely hit the market.
Illustrate.
Compositions written by primary school students are just for fun, and the suggestions for reading the articles are thrown away. I am not responsible for anyone whose brain is polluted. If you leave a message and complain, please worry. I will write mine and you can go to hell.
The only thing that's not funny is that the protagonist is too serious. Since you want to be the protagonist of a fun novel, you should just let yourself go and don't have any image baggage.
So far, it's pretty good. The only drawback is the Book of Sealing. Tom and Jerry were caught stealing the book. I don't think there is any problem in stealing the Book of Sealing. But if you were discovered the first time, suspicion will be raised on you. If you come here a second time, is it considered a poisonous point? Yes, Sandai has no evidence, just suspicion, but you can succeed in one go. There is no need to add the plot of Sandai's suspicion. If you say that this plot is for the third generation to let the protagonist's father take the protagonist's dog to guard the Hokage Building, so that he can regard the Hokage Building as his second home in the future, I think it is unnecessary, because the ANBU guards have not decreased, but the protagonist's father and dog have been added. If you infiltrate again, there is no difference whether there is the protagonist's father or dog. I don't understand the reason for this plot at all. Put a knife on your father's neck and inherit the inheritance quickly?
I have a question. Why is there nothing when I click on the character bar? I just want to see the enlarged picture, but it doesn't work.
In the first few chapters, I forgot which chapter, it was in the classroom. Tom and Jerry put on bachelor's clothes and listened to the class. This greatly improved their learning talent. So, are Tom and Jerry Xinsu? 😰
It would be too wasteful to have Inuzuka as the protagonist, I still want to see Uchiha as the protagonist.
Tom and Jerry don't match the style of Naruto. I would rather see something like a ghost doll. It's funny but cruel and terrifying. The antics of Tom and Jerry don't need to be used all the time. The live version of Tom and Jerry is quite interesting.
It sounds interesting, but the author is very imaginative. Fortunately, I have seen Tom and Jerry and can relate to the picture the author painted. I laughed for a long time during this hour. However, I temporarily gave up reading because I was too harmonious with the Hokage Village and did not have a fighting spirit. Simple Tu Yile is indeed good, but it may cause mental fatigue after a long time. After all, there are not many emotional ups and downs, and it is difficult for people to think deeply! However, the author's ideas are quite novel and opened my mind.
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What about updates? You don't know how to cut yourself off with a sword, right?
The writing is good, but the plot is very slow and drags on too much. Although I have to describe the skills of Tom Jerry, I still feel tired after procrastinating for a long time.