Beginning to Practice Immortality as a Refugee

Advantages: The writing and fighting are good, and the early chapters are well written Reason for abandoning the book: The martial arts + fairy + system literature is haphazardly put together, resulting in blurred characters and delayed plot processing. If only one of the categories is written, and it is written in detail, it will definitely be a good book. The contradictory turning points in various plots are very old-fashioned, the combat power is suppressed, and the plot control techniques are rough, like an exercise for a novice. There is no foreshadowing or hidden clues. I just write whatever I think of and just randomly throw in a few characters to advance the plot, dryly controlling the life and death of the protagonist. There is a world view, but it is not reflected in the plot at all. It just describes a few countries and what they are doing, and mentions Xiuxianfang City, but it does not serve the character creation and plot advancement at all.

The writing is very good, slow-burning, and pays great attention to details.

Isn't it the author's intention? I couldn't control myself in various ways. I finally became a master in the mortal world, and I was able to practice Qi well, but I was captured again.

Between starvation and cannibalism, 999 out of 1,000 people will eat human flesh, and 1 in 1,000 will suffer from anorexia.

It's really tiring to watch. Every time you want to upgrade, the retreat will not go up all at once, and you will not be able to break through on purpose. Your cultivation will be stuck for a while. For example, if you go from level 1 to level 2 of Qi training, you will be stuck with water for several times before you level up. You will lose all the fun. Who can stand it? Interrupting your spellcasting will affect your perception. It's like you are suddenly pulled out while you are on the toilet. The history part is pretty good at the beginning, but the later parts of it fall apart when it comes to the setting of force and cultivation of immortality. If you look at the rhythm of the current novel genre, the sense of rhythm is too poor. It's a great point to have the plot conflict written, but don't you know that it's also a great point to upgrade your cultivation quickly? Author: How old are you? I feel like your writing style is good, but your rhythm is really different.

If you want to write about history, then write about history. If you want to write about cultivating immortals, then write about cultivating immortals. You just confuse them... Generally speaking, it is better to simply write about the history of the Low Martial Dynasty. I originally thought that the protagonist was going to take the path of hegemony by gathering the power of all people to shake up a royal court. Later, I found out that the protagonist was going to cultivate to immortals. It was too hasty.

Chapter 200 is the second level of Qi training, Chapter 377 is the half-step golden elixir, and it jumps directly from the first level of foundation building to the tenth level. It's so poisonous, I want to curse! The part about cultivating immortals is pretty good if I haven't touched on it before. I suggest the author not to write about immortals and knights. All historical texts are better than this.

Advantages: Basically no poisonous points, no holy mother, no harem, normal outlook on life, no bloodshed, no deliberate conflict, basically reasonable settings, normal upgrades, the currency system has not collapsed, the combat power system has not collapsed, the writing is okay, and the plot is no problem Disadvantages: The protagonist is relatively strong in the mid-term, and one can fight ten against each other in various counterattacks. In the plot of the trial, you killed less than half of the people, and you can easily kill the foundation during the Qi training period. The hang-up is too big, there are too many treasures, the crushing game is not interesting, and a sect cannot reflect the role of the middle and low-level monks at all.

Chapter 200: Second level of Qi refining? The protagonist has been practicing in Krypton Life, did you know? Why are they taken away so easily? The heroine has been subdued for more than 100 chapters and you haven't written it yet? The protagonist is almost like a slave wherever he goes, being captured by others?

The first part about refugees is really good, but the second part about cultivating immortals is not good enough. The author is good, but it's a pity that he wants to eat the food of cultivating immortals.

There's nothing bad about the writing, it's just too bland and the progress is too slow. There's not a single interesting part in the more than 40 chapters. I almost fell asleep while reading it. In summary, it's just a book.😴

Is it possible for an ordinary person to experience so many things without any change, and his mental state is still that of a virgin?

The protagonist's cheat finger is always stuck and not used even if it is cheated. You might as well set a limit on the number of times or a time limit.

I haven't posted a single post for more than a year or two because I really don't want other people's posts to affect my reading experience. I feel this book is a bit of a pity. The writing and plot are pretty good and very sophisticated. I just feel like I'm a novice at writing cool articles. It's not clear how to set up the golden finger, and it's also unclear how to use it. The setting of Shuangdian is also inexplicable. I always don't understand what makes readers happy. It feels like he deliberately creates conflict plots but does not create them at the readers' point.

How should I put it, I am stupid and fell behind on the first three chapters, mainly because I couldn't understand Goldfinger, which made my head buzz.

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Consider it hay. The part that doesn't include cultivating immortals is just food. I've read most of it and subscribed to two chapters. The overall pace is slow, and the excitement is a bit lacking. I couldn't stand it anymore, so I looked through the catalog and found 182 pictures for the second level of Qi training.

You can't help yourself when you stay in the bandit camp. Why don't you leave when you have the chance? You could just run away when the bandits were defeated a few times. You were seriously injured several times. Are you addicted to being a thief? Are you addicted to being cannon fodder? Except for officers and soldiers, except for bandits, there must be a way for the poor to survive, and there must be farmers, otherwise they will eat and drink whatever they want.

The plot is also frustrating. The heroine didn't understand it clearly. She said she was kind to the protagonist, but she told the story three times and was sent out three times. She died without hanging up.

The beginning of "Refugee" is pretty good, but later it becomes like "I Carefully Cultivate Immortality in a Weird World", where I endlessly change maps to ascend to the realm of immortality and live my daily life. The whole starting point is Office Worker. I have already reached 2,000 chapters and still can't see the end. Let's see if this book can surpass 3,000 chapters.

The contrast between before and after cultivating to immortality is so big, it's a bit different.

During the Qi refining stage, why are there no elixirs to improve cultivation? There are all sorts of tricks and tricks, but hey, he just doesn't have the elixir to improve his cultivation. Did you, the author, not write it, or did you do it on purpose?

I borrowed the valuable treasure to push the book, "I will clean up the Sutra Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a closer look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

This book is very comfortable to read and has a casual rhythm. Sometimes it's strange, why is it still LV1? The comments after each daily update are also not timely. This is actually pretty good, haha. 🤓

Come on and write. I'll give you all the recent monthly votes. If I had known there would be double this month, I would have saved them all and voted together.

The final plot of being lost in ancient times and contributing to the origin of human race has a good idea. I love so much. Looking forward to the new book.