Inventory: What Villains Teach Us

The author has worked hard to reach chapter 12, and I will give you some suggestions 1. Please read other similar exposure articles about the heavens. Please get to the point as soon as possible in the golden three chapters, instead of describing other planes where the origin of the protagonist cannot be known, and delaying the inventory until chapter 7. To describe these, it is better to leave a little narrative after the exposure is completed 2. The protagonist Jinren has a very high-quality image, but the inventory method is a storyteller? It's all gone 3. It's not suitable to insert too many reactions from other planes in the middle. Other novels either play images and release famous quotes, and other people's reactions can be simply passed on, because readers of this type of work want to see three things: 1. Feelings, re-description of those impressive stories, and it is best to have new ideas to make people feel that there is still this angle to view the original story 2. Don't include too much of the reaction of all the worlds after reading the story in the inventory, unless you want to modify the story direction of that world, especially the inventory itself, the story should not be interrupted 3. To make up for the shortcomings or to create a new story direction I don't know if I misunderstood it. When I read your introduction, I thought you were going to broadcast a story about a world where people with lofty ideals are regarded as villains, and then add a few people who are regarded as decent but whose behavior is shameful as a contrast. As a result, the first character - Tang San, is directly a villain? Who is that decent? This would be boring I suggest that if you want to write a book full-time, you should first look at how to write a similar subject. In fact, this subject matter is not easy to write, because if the reaction of people in the world after seeing the story is not in line with the character, it will be very easy to attract a lot of people. This subject matter is usually only attractive in the early stage. In the later stage, writing and homework are important, and it is easy to become weak. If you are a newcomer who is not suitable for this type of writing, it is better to write a fanfic that you like the work first.