I Am Gaining Expertise at Hogwarts

Why did you just draw your gun at the beginning? Even Americans would not use firearms so recklessly. There is not such a free gun-carrying environment in the UK, and shooting is a big deal. Who would take a shot at a formally dressed and clean-cut Mag? It is recommended to modify the intensity of the conflict. Now it seems that the protagonist's father is very neurotic. At first, he even wanted his son to open the door, which showed that he recognized the safety of the living environment. In this case, it needed to progress to the point where he pulled out a gun and shot the visitors, which could not be justified by just a few words. Typical treatment, such as old grudges between the two, obviously does not apply to Mag and the protagonist's father. I feel that the author reversed the understanding of 🇺🇸 and 🇬🇧 when writing this paragraph.

Starting from the potion competition part, the settings are thrown around. The plot content seems to be very dry and obscure. There is a sense of confusion that the author is enjoying himself. The large number of secondary settings make people confused. Then in a small plot, the most embarrassing thing of the future self appears. Maybe the author thinks this plot of the future self traveling through time is very cool, right? Why don't you write a postscript about what the protagonist is called? It's quite annoying anyway.

I don't like that Veela, it's too awkward, it's arranged by someone else, it's annoying, I don't want a Veela heroine

The succubus part was so weird. I felt a little unspeakably twisted and disgusting on both sides. Although it was normal, it felt like the feelings were caused by a calculation.

The blue bar setting is very poorly written. Putting two magic spells will cause the magic power and mental power to be exhausted. It is very annoying to watch. There are two entries: [physical strength] and [natural power]. It doesn't matter if you step on the floor or smash the wardrobe. I beat a few little wizards until they are covered in bruises. While patrolling in the Forbidden Forest, he was almost killed by a killing curse. Hagrid said that the confinement should be changed back to the castle. The Forbidden Forest was too dangerous. The protagonist himself had no strength, so forget it. He was too confident to return. He also said that Professor Snape would not agree. What kind of brain circuit does he think he has a long life? The magic spell is also very confusing. It has no effect as it should. It knocks up this thing and that one. The magic spell is a magic spell, not a shock wave.

They're all pretty good, except for the weird part about the succubus, which is a bit fishy.

I was a bit confused from the beginning of the potion competition. I personally think the previous parts were okay.

The Veela part has been modified

Is there a heroine? Say it directly

After reading a few pictures, I wonder if the male protagonist will turn over Slytherin in the future, and then everyone who goes to Slytherin will bow and call the protagonist master when they see him, hahahahahahaha.

Why is no one posting book reviews? Doesn't this software work for this? I don't know. Anyway, let me tell you my opinion. I think the author is an idealistic guy, and he is a bit twisted and strong in some places... He longs for something clean, pure and simple without any calculations, but it's not that calculations are really boring and he wants to use power to overwhelm everything... It's just that the pure pursuit of simplicity is strangely inconsistent with me. It's like that kind of thing. A person's talent is used as a matter of course, and nothing is added too quickly. Then he just has good talent in some places and will have very awesome results after a short time. This is probably the feeling. It's just that it gives a relatively reasonable explanation for the protagonist's cheating. Although it is not sure how this cheat came from. What kind of tmd high-dimensional life is doing this so-called system... This is really not very scientific or even very magical. In theory, no guy can do this kind of thing. At least the style is completely inconsistent. It's like Little Red Riding Hood went to find his grandma and opened the door to find a bunch of wriggling tentacles twisting and overlapping the space. The clothes grandma was wearing were made of people's spines that were forcibly twisted and sewed with some special characteristics... It's just that the style of the painting is wrong. You know, it doesn't feel like it's really not magical or scientific... But it's not bad if you ignore this. I'm mainly saying this to see your acceptability. After all, I don't really like simple and pure things that much. I do like simplicity, but I mainly like to slap away everything that gets in my way.

The protagonist's character feels a bit like a terrorist I don't like it

I don't quite understand. So has the protagonist killed other Slytherins? Suddenly he got a little jumpy.

Does anyone write a novel with the Hogwarts Legacy system?

I specifically subscribed to a chapter to comment and saw Dumbledore appear there in the Potions Competition. Personally, I feel that the biggest problem with this section is that the characters in it instantly become puppets, purely promoting the plot, and all the characters have no self-awareness or emotion. The protagonist has just received the influence of the crucible and is in danger in a dream. The next day he continues to pretend to slap the plot in the face, as if the previous experience does not exist at all. The same goes for other characters. Everyone's reaction is [the reaction they would have here and now] and has nothing to do with previous experiences or future goals. The final result is that during the potion competition, I felt that the characters were not like living people and the plot was inexplicable.

Which family is this Adams from?