Witch, She No Longer Wants to Save the World

Mao feels that the low number of readers of this book is not a problem of slow plot advancement, nor is it a problem of few explosive points. Road writing is like traveling to see the scenery. It doesn't matter if you walk slowly, but the scenery should be beautiful. There is still a sense of freshness at the beginning of the book, and once you get to daily life, the narrative feels like flowing water. There are many places where you can actually delve deeper into the settings. For example, does Dorothy cook with an iron pot from the 2K era or some future alloy, and does she burn firewood or black technology fuel? What is the urban structure of the island, does it have a mature industrial system or is it unable to be self-sufficient, and are there residential areas and Whether the industrial area is planned or illegally built everywhere, whether it is managed by powerful forces or simple and simple; whether the world Dorothy travels to is set according to DND or self-set, whether it is a planet or a crystal wall system or some other space; whether the Fairy Wilderness is part of the main world or a plane or the divine kingdom of the Fairy Queen? Dorothy should not be unclear after traveling for more than a hundred years. But now the feeling is that various narratives remain on the surface. Cat has read dozens of chapters, and even the social appearance of the initial island is not clear. The article only has some rough descriptions to outline an outline, and the details should be filled in by the author rather than by the cats. Therefore, the overall feeling given to Mao is that the story is bland and unappealing. It is like signing up for a rubbish tour group and going straight to the souvenir shop as soon as you arrive at the scenic spot. However, road stories are all about seeing the scenery. If you rush to push the plot now, it will become like a rubbish tour group. If this book is a positioning or a road novel, it would be better to add more details. As the plot unfolds, all aspects of life in the other world will be revealed, and finally a set of social settings in the other world that is complete and logically consistent will be revealed. The above content only represents one-sided personal opinions. The opinions of this cat are only specific to this book, and do not represent the opinions of the cat on the road literature genre. The cat has no intention of redefining the road literature. If there is any bias, the cats are welcome to correct me.

Plant a cat first🍄 and wait and see when the cat grows up

It's obviously interesting, but it's too eunuch

Wait a minute? I remember that the great cat got a dream core. Is the prototype of the world in it the current one? !

The protagonist is actually called Dorothy. Aren't you a salty fish trumpet? I said that the otaku witch is becoming more and more powerless. Damn it, she came here to open a trumpet.

It's getting colder, another witch world enters freezing mode, and time begins to freeze

Why isn't it updated? Pigeon? ?

Tia

Oh my god, it's been a few months since I opened a new pit, and then I took a look and saw only two updates. Come on, please update more! If this book is not a scam, I will support you by ordering it.

No, the name of the witch is Dorothy. .

Rice, no eunuch rice 😭

The previous book indicated the protagonist of this book's final ending? ? , I hope the author will not write like this

You skinny cat! It's almost the end of the month and the new book is coming!

Dorothy

When will the author come back? {"NickName":"","UserId":174122991}😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Why is it a magician? How cool it looks to Master Master. Even the Paladin in 5e format is better looking than the Warlock.

It's not a novel written by a friend who died more than a year ago, but he still recommends it to me