Versatile Mage: Signing In for an Immortal Body from the Start

It doesn't feel like I'm reading a primary school essay. The plot is bland and boring. The heroine doesn't exist. She's just like a bystander. I might as well read the original work.

It's hard to describe this book in one sentence. First of all, it's too concise. And isn't this a fan novel? Why do I feel that Lu Jie has become a tool and a nanny? Furthermore, the fire element is just a decoration, and the heroine has always been a decoration. She never said it. I was a little curious at the beginning, but now it has been worn away. The most important thing is that the author can change the title of the book and let me watch Mo Fan's growth history.

Some people say that I have a problem with Chapter 48. In fact, it is a meme. It comes from Kamen Rider Soki's Inland Sea's Curve to Save the Nation, and one of the prerequisites for the activation of Kyoka Suigetsu is to turn the sword upside down and insert it on the ground. Unless it touches the blade or the protagonist removes it himself, there is no other way to remove it. There is already a genjutsu in the land. If there are other big problems, I will change it.

Come and vote. See whether there are more people with multiple female protagonists or single female protagonists

All the full-time mages have a single female protagonist, what's the point of it🔨

I've only seen one fanfic about the full-time mage, where they compete with aristocratic families for status, words, resources, and training their own people. The others are all about upgrading and fighting monsters, and then working as thugs for China.

I don't care who the heroine is, I only care if she is a single woman?

Is this protagonist a eunuch? Or is the author a eunuch? In a world where there are many high-quality girls, there is no heroine. Let alone having a harem, at least you need a wife.

I can only say that it feels like writing a composition for junior high school students. I don't feel the plot at all. I just feel like I am skipping a paragraph of plot in one sentence, just like reading an outline.

What does this mean if it is purely based on the original work?