Begin Your Life as a Fisherman

In the context of troubled times, I thought it was a rebel leader, but it turned out that he was a coolie from a black labor force who escaped, and was hunted down by various forces!

The protagonist is time-traveled into the game world, so, have you never played this game? Some plots, opportunities, I don't know, emotional scenes, psychological transformation are okay, but you forget that you are dressed in clothes, and you are still like a native.

It's been a long time since I've read a piece of writing like this. In the early days, I was more like a virgin. I was used to eating delicate dishes, and occasionally I had to eat a little bran.

I feel like the male protagonist is stupid, he is so kind despite his own difficulties.

You can also add settings. At the beginning, it was just proficiency. After looking at it, chapter 20-30 came and I was able to add some more...! ! ! ! And the addition is inexplicable. The author has no outline at first glance, and writes wherever he thinks...

A very good traditional level-up and monster-killing novel, with innovations in form as well. One of the most interesting novels I have seen recently.

I was embarrassed every time I watched this plot.

The early stage was a bit delayed. Is it necessary to set up a level to break it so difficult? What should I do if I advance in the future?

You can still watch it without a digital panel. Once the numbers appear, it immediately feels like a stand-alone game.

Typos, confusing sentence structure, unstable plot, and uncomfortable to watch. In fact, the writing is okay, but there are some omissions. Please check it twice more.

First, there are some problems with the structure. Normally speaking, the first chapter will briefly introduce the characters, and then the second chapter will immediately start to highlight the role of the golden finger, so don't delay. Second, the poisonous point is not the selling point. As for the protagonist's difficult survival and the various situations of refugees in troubled times, try not to write so much. Even if you write, it is best not to write too many tragedies. Everyone actually understands this kind of thing. Everyone reads books hoping to get positive feedback. Positive and optimistic things are the mainstream. Too much dark and incomplete writing is harmful and unhelpful. Third, the cool points are not dense enough. You can write some supporting characters to reflect the improvement of the protagonist's situation through praise or envy. You can't always write about fighting and killing. That way is too violent and the impression is not good.

It's a bit similar to the setting in Water Monkey's book

Diligence can make you an immortal, which means you can become an immortal at most. There's nothing to see, isn't becoming an immortal just the beginning?

Has anyone tasted Shennong and come back to comment?