Ancient Wizards Return to Hogwarts

For the first half of this book, when the main plot still follows the original work of the Triwizard Tournament, there is no doubt that this is a very good HP fanfic. The protagonist is well established, and it fully and boldly imagines how a character like Slytherin will develop in modern Hogwarts. The image of Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff is also reasonably and wonderfully created. In fact, it can be seen from this part that the author should have a detailed and rigorous outline or ideas. The overall rhythm is compact and logical, adhering to the principles of HP fandom. However, after the Triwizard Tournament introduced the so-called alchemy world, the rhythm of the entire book began to become chaotic. Instead of a group drama, the perspective began to shift significantly, and the narrative style also changed sharply. The various new settings introduced later can be said to be very OOC. Without enough foreshadowing, a bunch of major events that can change the world view are thrown out. Even the protagonist of the Invincible style is dying without enough explanation and foreshadowing. It is very hasty. The author may have confusion in the outline or some problems with his writing ideas later on. But it can still be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into hp fandom. I hope the author can think again about the development of subsequent books. What makes a wonderful book is not its length, but its complete and rigorous structure.

For the whole body, it is just a food book. This book does not stick to the original work, but adds a lot of original work. The hidden line of this book is probably to rectify Slyklin's name. The author has a lot of refreshing ideas, but so far there is no one that is particularly exciting. He just connects various ideas together. I feel that there is no need for the heroine Daphne to appear. It completely overlaps with Hermione. Daphne's sister is the heroine and Daphne can be deleted. Then, Slaklin's personality and behavior were not consistent enough. He did not have the sense of being aloof and insistent on having his own way. Instead, he was as enthusiastic as a big boy next door, and he was not strong enough. Daphne is a pure-blood. The author wanted to reflect Slyklin's attitude towards pure-bloods and the misunderstandings of outsiders. Using Daphne to replace the smart and brave Hermione gave up the excitement of the original protagonist's team, which hindered the author's desire to show that the protagonist is a role model. As a result, the character creation is not clear enough and looks quite contradictory. Moreover, this book does not have long-term and fierce conflicts (it directly takes Voldemort into account). It just connects various original ideas together without any exciting points, creating a mediocre Slyklin and his daily life. I would give it 70 points out of 100. It has a bit of something but not much.

The only hope is not to create a harem for the heroine. The old monster didn't choose love when he was young, but he wanted the old tree to bloom after surviving to reach new heights. That's too good.

It feels pretty good, but in this kind of novel, the character must be grasped well, otherwise the book will be over if thousands of years old monsters and teenage children fall in love and kill each other.

I hope Daphne won't be the heroine The male protagonist's current relationship with Daphne is closer to that of a teacher and student It's too cruel to attack his own students, especially those with such a big age difference.

I still hope that Salazar won't have a relationship with the younger generation. It feels weird that the old monster iron tree blooms.

It is undeniable that this is a book with excellent subject matter, but! But! ! Was the monetary system at the beginning too sloppy, with a pile of gems totaling only 60 galleons? ! Even if the goblin wants to lower the price, it's not like this. If the price is too high, no one will come to your place to exchange things 🥵🥵

It's quite interesting, but I always feel that Slytherin didn't have much emotion about the death of the other three friends. Was he mentally prepared in advance, or will the four founders return in the future?

Well. Why, my trumpet account, can't your comments about Ming Yue Mu Ji Xu be displayed? Is it because the versions of starting points used are different? My trumpet is using the Apple version 😰. Can the author see my trumpet's comments about Ming Yue Mu Jixu?

Author, I really like this book. The world view is well expanded. I would like to give you a suggestion. The reasons you gave for the protagonist's personality change are pretty good. Never fall in love in the future, especially with your own students, because the protagonist is an ancient wizard who rejuvenates his youth. I have never experienced the love of young people before. , You won't fall into it. If you fall in love later, I feel that many people will abandon the book because it doesn't match the character. So when you think about the plot in the later period, you must not lose the Slytherin style. You can do it in a small area. After all, the protagonist is also a human being and has friends, but don't make a sudden change in the style of painting.

The wizard Slytherin from thousands of years ago has returned, but it seems that the weight of history and the vicissitudes of life are not seen in this book. Although there are not many people in the wizarding world and it is relatively closed, just like in the funeral of Fulian, in just a few decades, the killing magic has become a common attack, and the shielding magic has become more focused on special defense, which has also led to the popularity of magic that manipulates matter. I believe that in the age of iron and fire, geniuses who once shone can shine in the new era, but this requires learning, accumulation, and reference. Think about the three-body theory. The theoretical physicists from hundreds of years ago are still able to teach cutting-edge knowledge in universities after waking up. The sadness and despair of standing still.

I feel that after Kylo pretended to be Gryffindor and left the factory, everyone's reaction was too hasty. This is a legendary wizard. I was instantly confused.

This book is written at a very high level, but there is a common problem among domestic authors: admiration for antiquity. You have to look upwards. We worship the ancients because we have a long history and great ancient times, but the reality is that as long as it is a normal world, power (technology/magic, etc.) Will definitely develop forward. When something is eliminated, it means it must have lost value to some extent. In addition, the second creation of "field" really brings down the style of this book. . . .

After reading about the first 160 chapters, I don't like the setting of this secret order. It has long existed (not the butterfly effect of the protagonist) and is so powerful (large numbers, overwhelming territory). Why not destroy other wizard organizations earlier or break the secrecy law (anyway, it is to let "gods" return to the world) to create trouble for wizards? That's fine if you just face the protagonist, but many fans like to weaken Dumbledore and Voldemort too much, and it doesn't feel like writing Harry Potter at all. . .

By the way, is there a realm in the original work? We might as well just learn spells and return to the field expansion 😅. I think the protagonist can develop a kind of space magic such as the unlimited spell of Gojou Lao Master. To be honest, no lower limit is also based on Zeno's turtle paradox. It seems that the distance is very close, but because of the folding of space, it can never reach the other party

There are new ideas and different ideas, but unfortunately the author may not have enough writing skills or may not want to write. There are many places that feel like they should be climaxes, but they end up being rushed. It's a pity, but it's still very watchable.

The author's writing style is very good and the subject matter is novel, but the more I read it now, I have an unknown premonition. This premonition mainly comes from the problem of the female protagonist. I saw in the comments that there should be no female protagonist. For me, I still hope to have a female protagonist. For a wizard or someone who has the opportunity to seek immortality, it doesn't matter who the partner is, nor does age. What matters is the like-mindedness in eternity. Back to this book, this is the problem with Daphne. If there is no heroine, I hope to reduce her and all other character plots except the protagonist. Otherwise, it will be like the previous book about cyberpunk fraud (it said Lucy is the heroine, but deceived the readers and later said that the daughter is also the heroine, playing word games), giving readers a feeling of being cheated. I hope the author will clarify this issue, so that readers can be selected, and readers who don't like it will leave without much objection. I am already scared. I hope the author will explain what type of writing he is writing and continue to suit my appetite. If he doesn't agree with his appetite, I will leave without saying anything. Don't write about Daphne marrying Ron or Harry. It will be disgusting after something like this happens. From the reader's point of view, it is very annoying and insecure.

Is there no hope for a message from the heroine?

Did this guy copy you, or did you change the platform?

Baidu Dumbledore information, added by this and that genius

Did you change someone or don't you want to write anymore?

Interesting subject matter, the interaction of the four giants, Slytherin's view of the academy's situation after a thousand years and how he was smeared is very interesting, the ending feels a bit fast, and the battle against Olympus feels a bit anticlimactic, but overall it is a very interesting book

Are there any other similar novels? This old guy is resurrected!

Probably this is the first time for pig's feet Don't forget to add more

Outrageous, there is no reward after completing this book 😭

What about the new book? The war has fallen into disuse?

It's pretty good until the end of "Goblet of Fire" around chapter 500, but then it becomes more average.

Are the pig's feet okay? A little worried

What's up with the new book? Did you do it yourself?

Pig's trotters, pig's trotters, are you a little behind on your new book? Are you going to start a new book or close it? I was a little panicked when the silent group disappeared 😭